Pretty fun game so far. Definitely looking forward to seeing the rest. That said, here are some problems:
There are a few unlabeled lines throughout the script. There's also one that's mislabeled: "I need some time to think it over, to really consider my options." is labeled as Max's line but should be MC's.
While talking about Stella at the party, MC tells Jade he agreed to help her even if he didn't.
During the spin-the-bottle game, MC will (as far as I can tell) always be dared to kiss someone, but if he has less than 20 points with all his flatmates, it just cuts to him sitting back down. I would suggest maybe not having the dare at all in that case, or maybe skip the game altogether. As it stands, he gets up to kiss someone, then sits back down without doing so, and no one bats an eye...
This might just me misinterpreting, but after getting back home from the party, during his shower, MC seems to reflect on how it felt to use his power, even if he hasn't.
Again, I might be nitpicking, but the morning after the party, while texting with Aline, (1) we don't see the text conversation happen on the phone as usual, and (2) she says she "enjoyed our time together last night", even if you just talked to her briefly.
And then there's the time Max almost runs over MC's friend, who has the same name as him? I think something is wrong here:
"I looked up just in time to see MC diving out of the way of a speeding sports car."
"Max said, gesturing to where his car had almost flattened MC."
Lastly, the texing options at the end of the current update are... a bit weird. There are three options which are all available to choose regardless of whether you have enough points to actually start a conversation, which should maybe not be? Now, I haven't gone through all three, just the one I had the points for, which is Aline, but she ends up referencing her lewd scene at the party, even if you didn't do anything with her then. I imagine similar problems arise with the other two options.
