VN Ren'Py Serenity Meadows [v0.1 Intro] [Storm.ING]

[freddygonzo]

A home full of hot chicks - that's how a story should start!

I recommend to fix this name messup right from start by editing game\script.rpy with notepad or whatever text-editor.
Correct the lines on top of the file content like this:
define lana = Character("Lana", color="#baaa5b")
define luna = Character("Luna", color="#309659")

 

[RICCBOND]

The girls of the family look gorgeous, well done Dev. For the rest it is just the beginning, an introduction, boys don't be so strict about the names and other little things. Just the rose hair girl doesn't look so nice, i'd change this instead of the names

 

[J0K3RXXX]

A promising start, dev.
I hope you can update it very soon.

 

[RYOUSC]

Models are great. I like both sisters already. Dev needs to fix the names though. I'm confused which one is Lana, and which one is Luna. They keep swapping names in every scene.

 

[tmu500]

good start but little to catch my interest. Hopefully a better story and character development.

 

[rafa30]

Good game
any incest patch?

 

[Allenebs]

I'd wager this game is going nowhere fast.

What should people be looking at this to support? There's a lack of content. The renders are industry standard quality, a fair bit below that if we're being honest. What story we are given isn't really a story, it's a generic plot description shat at us through exposition rather than shown through characterization. To compound all that being lacking, there is no interesting gameplay mechanics being integrated to set itself above a generic VN.

Too many devs do this. Your "demo," ie your soft launch, the point where you start asking for money or support, needs to be large enough to show your consumers what you're intending and capable of. You release something like this, you're the Dollar Store of VN's and are going to give up on your product before it ever comes close to completion bc you didn't care enough to put in the work before releasing it.

A completed prologue should be the bare minimum goal. Personally, I'd suggest a prologue plus an introduction to all core characters.

 

[broho1234]

Good game
any incest patch?

No need for an incest patch: the player can define his relationship with the mom and two sisters.

 

[broho1234]

Played version 0.1.
It's a short game, only 177 images, the play time is maybe 30 mins or so.
However it's a very promising game:
-the girls and MILFs are very pretty and sexy, except one or two.
-the two sisters are very pretty, the younger one is a sweet beauty and the older one is a foxy minx.
-the mom is the prettiest of all, as it should be in an incest game.
-there are several other girls and two other MILFs which are less pretty than the main LIs but still desirable.
The story is just at the beginning, it's just an introduction, but it's promising since the MC is alone with his sisters for one week and both sisters
want to organize parties at home.
Also, the MC's teacher lets him see her pussy and invites him at her home.

As a drawback, the author cannot keep track of the sisters' names (Lana and Luna) and mixes them repeatedly.

It seems that this is the author's first game, but that only makes it more likely that the quality will improve quickly.

Conclusion: the likely rookie author is on the right track, he has a talent for creating very attractive women and girls, the setup of the story is engaging and making it a mom, son and sisters story gives it a better chance of succeeding since those story are very popular (imho).

Best of luck to the author!