VN Ren'Py Serenity Meadows [v0.1 Intro] [Storm.ING]

[freddygonzo]

A home full of hot chicks - that's how a story should start!

I recommend to fix this name messup right from start by editing game\script.rpy with notepad or whatever text-editor.
Correct the lines on top of the file content like this:
define lana = Character("Lana", color="#baaa5b")
define luna = Character("Luna", color="#309659")

 

[RICCBOND]

The girls of the family look gorgeous, well done Dev. For the rest it is just the beginning, an introduction, boys don't be so strict about the names and other little things. Just the rose hair girl doesn't look so nice, i'd change this instead of the names

 

[J0K3RXXX]

A promising start, dev.
I hope you can update it very soon.

 

[RYOUSC]

Models are great. I like both sisters already. Dev needs to fix the names though. I'm confused which one is Lana, and which one is Luna. They keep swapping names in every scene.