VN HTML Abandoned Seven Days [Day 6] [Mr Classified]

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Mr Classified

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Hello.

The update for day 4 was good.
A mix of sex scenes at work and in everyday life. The return of the lake lady I wasn't expecting.
The dialogs differ if you encountered and did something with them before (usually it's too subtle but here you made it really clear). We even learn their first name this time.
The dialog boxes you included are making the story easier to follow.
The dev notes are still amusing.

The only thing that bothered me was that, even if you declined the sex opportunities at work before, you can still have sex with the 2 girls together at lunch. I can understand if you start with one or the other but not directly together (I would also be surprised if you focused on one of them).

Good continuation.
Fair point, I think I will change that slightly in the next update.

Thanks for the feedback.
 
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Oliz82

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Hello.

The 5th day was nice.
The afternoon scenes are well thought, depending on what you did in the morning, the dialogs change adequately.
I hope the choice at the end of the dinner will have some consequences for the days left (
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). Well, those are just ideas to make you understand what I'm talking about.

Also, you've clearly corrected the lunch scene since, if we didn't get intimate with any of them, we can't have the threesome but, if we chose only Ms Hathaway and refuse Chelsey's advances, the dialog is clearly wrong :
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As you can see, Ms Hathaway is implying we fucked though I tried to refuse everything on Chelsey's side in that play.

Good continuation.
 

Mr Classified

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Apr 24, 2022
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Hello.

The 5th day was nice.
The afternoon scenes are well thought, depending on what you did in the morning, the dialogs change adequately.
I hope the choice at the end of the dinner will have some consequences for the days left (
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). Well, those are just ideas to make you understand what I'm talking about.

Also, you've clearly corrected the lunch scene since, if we didn't get intimate with any of them, we can't have the threesome but, if we chose only Ms Hathaway and refuse Chelsey's advances, the dialog is clearly wrong :
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As you can see, Ms Hathaway is implying we fucked though I tried to refuse everything on Chelsey's side in that play.

Good continuation.
Thanks for pointing that out, will be fixed next update, if statements are weird in twine/sugarcube lol. Yes sleeping with one of them/denying one of them will change dialogue later on.

As always thanks for the feedback.
 
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Games like this where they don't even bother to remove the watermark which completely ruins the immersion... not to mention that scenes for some in-game girls contain different girls in the actual videos...

I mean, each to it's own I guess, but I would recommend more dedication in order to actually have people interesting in the genre. :)
 

Oliz82

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Hello.

I finally finished the 6th days and it was still good.
Thank you for including a sharing option with the boss.

The consequences of that night weren't that much visible outside the loss of a sex scene in the morning. Hope we'll encounter the girls on the 7th day to really feel it.
The same with the boss choices leading to different outcomes.

If you didn't engage anything with Ms Hathaway and Alexia before, that sentence at the party feels of :
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what is up with these irl porn games. How do these even work, there's not much customization
The world "customization" made me jump. It's exactly the same with 3dcg characters from Daz3d or Honey Select that all look the same.
It's just a matter of taste anyway.

Games like this where they don't even bother to remove the watermark which completely ruins the immersion... not to mention that scenes for some in-game girls contain different girls in the actual videos...

I mean, each to it's own I guess, but I would recommend more dedication in order to actually have people interesting in the genre. :)
Well, I was bothered by it the first time I saw it in a game but I've learned to ignore it since there are more important things that can ruin a game.

Good continuation.
 

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" God created the heavens and the Earth in six days, and, upon completion, God rested on the seventh day "
 
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