AMAZING I tested the first version and between the walls of text and other things, although it seemed like an interesting concept, I had to leave it because it seemed very tedious and boring, but this rewrite I have to say, congratulations, you have made a great game, fixing the problems by adding a lot of content (I never thought so many) and adding good videos of characters and more apart from an interesting story, in fact right now I imagine the game divided into 4 different parts or chapters (I'll leave them in case they serve as ideas for the creator)
1 the current prologue and university you meet characters corrupting your close environment and family and ending up being the "owner" of the university that would serve as a recruitment pool for new interests
2 amassing power and money here I imagine the protagonist after his graduation from university setting up a company to start accumulating money and power for his next case (and a whole company full of workers at his service of course) thus while he earns large amounts You can move to a mansion and get luxuries and so on.
3 fame and fortune once you become a millionaire businessman you decide that your next step is to gain fame, so the logical step is to set up a film production company to star in and direct films and thus be known worldwide here we could add a casting mechanism to future movie stars dinners with famous contacts, even an underworld of orgies and secret societies in the strange world of cinema) and the most interesting thing was to be able to have the castings star celebrities with deepfakes so that the character is not only famous for dating Scarlett johanzzon in a movie if not for "fucking" scarlert johanson (which would give him extra fame in the clandestine world of before)
4 final chapter absolute power you are a rich businessman and famous film director/actor next step POLITICS This is where the last step of the game and the story would enter, making the character achieve the presidency by being the most powerful man in the world based on bribes orgies subduing rival politicians (or wives) in his climb to become the most powerful person on the planet and satisfy his infinite lust.
Just to add one more detail, it would be nice if in some option they specified the difference between chaos path corruption and love because between corruption and love it is understood but between chaos and corruption what is the difference? How does it change, for example, making the first girl your slave or your pawn? because at the moment in the game there is no difference and that happens with others, I don't see any difference between the paths
The mechanics of the unlockable images are not well explained either, how they are earned, they serve a purpose, as you know when you unlock one or the other...
1 the current prologue and university you meet characters corrupting your close environment and family and ending up being the "owner" of the university that would serve as a recruitment pool for new interests
2 amassing power and money here I imagine the protagonist after his graduation from university setting up a company to start accumulating money and power for his next case (and a whole company full of workers at his service of course) thus while he earns large amounts You can move to a mansion and get luxuries and so on.
3 fame and fortune once you become a millionaire businessman you decide that your next step is to gain fame, so the logical step is to set up a film production company to star in and direct films and thus be known worldwide here we could add a casting mechanism to future movie stars dinners with famous contacts, even an underworld of orgies and secret societies in the strange world of cinema) and the most interesting thing was to be able to have the castings star celebrities with deepfakes so that the character is not only famous for dating Scarlett johanzzon in a movie if not for "fucking" scarlert johanson (which would give him extra fame in the clandestine world of before)
4 final chapter absolute power you are a rich businessman and famous film director/actor next step POLITICS This is where the last step of the game and the story would enter, making the character achieve the presidency by being the most powerful man in the world based on bribes orgies subduing rival politicians (or wives) in his climb to become the most powerful person on the planet and satisfy his infinite lust.
Just to add one more detail, it would be nice if in some option they specified the difference between chaos path corruption and love because between corruption and love it is understood but between chaos and corruption what is the difference? How does it change, for example, making the first girl your slave or your pawn? because at the moment in the game there is no difference and that happens with others, I don't see any difference between the paths
The mechanics of the unlockable images are not well explained either, how they are earned, they serve a purpose, as you know when you unlock one or the other...
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