- Apr 24, 2021
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Agreed. He needs an English proofreader.Just found this game, no idea how I hadn't seen it before. Great scenes and decent progression, but:
All that said, the art is amazing, all the girls are super hot, and the plot is intriguing and engaging when there isn't a frustrating grind. Will be back for the next update.
- it's clear English isn't the dev's first language and there's a number of places where the grammar and idioms could use some cleanup.
- the grind is TERRIBLE in places. It shouldn't take that many days of delivering documents to an office or working on a broken shower to progress a storyline.
- for a sandbox game with a broken up day, the time management is terrible. Way too many things can only be activated in the afternoon. Often morning events that seem minor will blow right through the afternoon as well, dropping you in a mostly-useless evening.