The art/renders are very nice [except near the end, one screen female on male, backs to player, is very grainy/poor quality]... and I want to write something nice, so the female protagonist is very attractive!
HOWEVER, there is basically no story and what there is makes little sense... his best friend, and his wife must ask who he is? No real explanation to explain the motives behind the cuckoldry, no real character development, there is no real dialogue, there is zero emotion.
I would work on the story, work on it or get somebody else to do it, and while you are doing that, please find somebody who is better at translating.
Final complaint... why do i need to click three times to progress the text?
1/5... you post a PATREON link for a poor start... get serious please!