VN Ren'Py Shaddolands -WHID [v1.0] [Shaddo]

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[Jhin00]

ntr <3

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

Thnks fr shrng

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

A couple of things...

First, there are a few stories on Literotica that are similar in nature.

Second, if the tag is female protagonist and she remains the protagonist, then by definition on this site (and mine) her actions are cheating, not NTR. If her husband cheats on her then it's NTR/Cuckquean. Please be accurate with the tags...aka: be fair.

 

[packard1928]

Good Start... I like it.

 

[RuthBlackett]

Seems as if i've read this story on Literotica...

 

[LordyMcLord]

..no ntr in this part......
...will have it....if dev makes part 2 tho.....

Already 50% done

 

[LordyMcLord]

A Favor For A Friend. was a great game, just to short.
I always would have loved to see the consequences, of them all coming inside her.

Is there also a little different story, when she says, she doesn`t want the part, or will it just end the game?
Will it only be forced cuck or also cheating?

The game looks good so far.

Ends the game with a chat at the gym between the guys.

 

[LordyMcLord]

Seems as if i've read this story on Literotica...

Literotica is often used by Devs as inspiration. Favor For A Friend was my inspiration, I don't know if it started as a Literotica story.

 

[LordyMcLord]

Solid start... one criticism though.
The dialogue comes off as if from a middle aged british man.
You may want to make it sound younger.

Point taken. But I am British so I can't fix that side of it

 

[LordyMcLord]

FMC is creepy.

Don't let her hear you say that... she's fragile

 

[LordyMcLord]

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Spoiler: Even apart from the ridiculous expression...

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Good luck, dev!

Yeah, I missed that, my bad. OR, it could be the new iPhone transparent security version

 

[LordyMcLord]

Android port done by cebs

Pixeldrain

Awesome, thank you

 

[DumpTruckLover]

damn..



thx 4 share

 

[LordyMcLord]

damn..

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thx 4 share

Yeah, I'm a bit embarrassed about that, but hey ho, what's done is done ‍

 

[LordyMcLord]

Hi folks,

I noticed a few comments that accused Amanda of being... shall we say weird!

So I did a bit of tweaking and came up with this revised version of Amanda. She was a bit upset at having to go through the surgery, but she seems happier with the result now.

Take a look at the before and after and see what you think.

 

[packard1928]

I kinda like the old version....

 

[alex220477]

..no ntr in this part......
...will have it....if dev makes part 2 tho.....

the game is NTR, it hasn't been seen yet, there are 5 minutes of gameplay, but you can understand where the plot is going, it doesn't take a genius, and the boy is a real weakling, he has a big dick, but he's stupid.

 

[LordyMcLord]

I kinda like the old version....

I was not expecting that. I'm quite surprised

 

[packard1928]

I was not expecting that. I'm quite surprised

Har to tell about the eyes cause in the new one she is looking up and away. the lips in the old seem more normal to me. the New ones are more botox looking... like pouty lips. I notice the jaw line changed a lot and also you thickened the neck... All in all not bad... good in fact. But, You asked which one we like... And I kinda like the first... don't shoot the messenger !