Wow. The dev has clearly put a
lot of work in to make the game engaging with interactions & build-up to leave the player immersed & has made
huge improvements visually in sex scenes to the point some are second-to-none AAA professional-level (despite some of the awful male costumes & designs). Game started as a shitshow (my impression at least) but I must admit there are some great improvements and strengths here (none of them being the dialogue lol - though good in a few cheating sex scenes, tbf). This game has some scenes better than
any I've seen in even the best interracial NTR (namely the crescendo in Chapter 5 cheating path, though some great visual - imperfect, writing-wise - elements in the albeit uneven current release too).
But damned if every path but the cheating one isn't a completely convoluted mess. There's nothing but hamstring logic in the progression and character choices in the blackmail & cuckold paths, which really take the wind out of the sails of some great visuals & a lot of valid effort.
If the dev could focus less on side characters & trim down Jason's interactions to only those focusing on Fred (to a limited extent) & Cami, maybe he could dedicate more time to really
thinking about those progressions & what makes "plausible" (for a porn-game at least) sense in character & story progression.
What could make the most sense over the next several updates is to find a way for all three paths to converge. Then use player choices for how Fred
reacts to those situations to split paths in a more manageable way that allows the dev time to focus more on more "plausible" (for porn) progression.
Cheating & cuck paths at least would make the most sense to converge, though complicated by those pink-haired Cami & fam dream sequences that only show on the cuck path. At least with the cheating path you can follow Cami's motivations. She's an unreliable narrator in her own head, lying to herself, rationalizing all of her slutty decisions as her instinctive lust & sexual desires get the better of her love and commitment towards the MC who she truly cares for, as well as her self-image of a good girl who'd never do such things. Definitely the hottest path of the three. A huge part of that is because it's more grounded. But also, I admit, the dynamic of that push/pull is just generally hotter to me. I just hope there's some point in the development where Fred can
choose how he reacts to it. IE: Will he get off on spying, and emotionally confused, start masturbating his little pencil? Will he get caught in the closet with his little dick in his hand? About to get beaten up by Jason until Cami tearfully protests out of love, followed up by an intense heart-to-heart of what he can & can't provide for the relationship? (Cuck path conversion). Will Fred react angrily instead & break up to go with mini-Cami (whatever his sister's friend's name is) only to see her cuckold him too? (Or alternate "happy" ending choice for the completionists). There's just so much more that can be developed here. Though I hope something along the lines of the former is a choice.
Other poor things I hope get fixed (but probably wont): WTF is with Junior's haircut.... & flathead-screwdriver penis head?
Some of Jason's, Juniors & that gang's clothing? (That fucking mask. WTF is this, Goth-Industrial Crips drinkng 40's of OE while group dancing to Marilyn Manson?
Also Jason's fricken lumberjack outfit this episode. WTF
. Looks like he just stepped out of REI & enjoys hiking and home-brewing). Definitely hope the dev (or some dedicated modder) creates a feature to change their character names too. Name sounds like he
would shop at REI). Most of the male characters are visually disjointed too. (Tiny head/big body black "friend" of mom, anyone?). But some at least still improved since the first chapter. At least Jason looks black now from certain angles though hair texture is super-weird in some lighting & you can tell his bone structure is still from a caucasian DAS base, especially in the cheeks, eyes, brow ridges & nose bridge.