RPGM Ren'Py Shadows of Desire [v0.8] [Shamantr]

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heavyartillery88

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Blurpee69 said:
So I'm not entirely sure when, exactly, Melissa decided she was going to just go full QoS on the cheating route. Like she was:
  • being blackmailed by Jason because of her debt
  • pays that off
  • Jason tries to keep her on the leash with information concerning with whom Johnny is cheating on her
  • she figures out it's Jessica
  • Then is just seen wearing QoS attire from that point onward more or less.

She obviously has no reason to trust Johnny and their relationship is over at that point. But she has little reason to just be all "I'm blacked for life now" either considering she was basically raped / prostituted, depending on how you want to interpret it, by Jason. The problem is she also mostly disappears from the story as well after her confrontation with Jessica, so it's hard to pin down her motivations here. The few times she did show up she didn't really have much at all to say. I certainly would think that Cami would have at least commented on her wearing that same QoS bikini.

Ruth has also had a questionable slide too. She's still being blackmailed, but the focus on the cheating route has focused so heavily on Cami and Jason's interactions, that Shaman is kind of just skipping how some of these other characters have continued their downfall. It was nice to see Yuria get some screen time to focus on her re-entry into the lifestyle. Miley has been kind of a weird one though as in some scenes she's very cautious about the black men suddenly entering her life, but then the next moment it seems she's just as hooked as Yuria and Cami.
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I am 90% certain that you have thought more about the storyline of this porn game than the developer
 
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developer Great job man , you made a porn game with good story, character modification loved the ending so far it conculded one part of the cheating that's great. love the small twist you had in the game. I hope you make more abt ruth and give Ari a BBC boyfriend or make her Jason's love interest. Making him a alfa with multiple white girls.
 
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Blurpee69 said:
So I'm not entirely sure when, exactly, Melissa decided she was going to just go full QoS on the cheating route. Like she was:
  • being blackmailed by Jason because of her debt
  • pays that off
  • Jason tries to keep her on the leash with information concerning with whom Johnny is cheating on her
  • she figures out it's Jessica
  • Then is just seen wearing QoS attire from that point onward more or less.

She obviously has no reason to trust Johnny and their relationship is over at that point. But she has little reason to just be all "I'm blacked for life now" either considering she was basically raped / prostituted, depending on how you want to interpret it, by Jason. The problem is she also mostly disappears from the story as well after her confrontation with Jessica, so it's hard to pin down her motivations here. The few times she did show up she didn't really have much at all to say. I certainly would think that Cami would have at least commented on her wearing that same QoS bikini.

Ruth has also had a questionable slide too. She's still being blackmailed, but the focus on the cheating route has focused so heavily on Cami and Jason's interactions, that Shaman is kind of just skipping how some of these other characters have continued their downfall. It was nice to see Yuria get some screen time to focus on her re-entry into the lifestyle. Miley has been kind of a weird one though as in some scenes she's very cautious about the black men suddenly entering her life, but then the next moment it seems she's just as hooked as Yuria and Cami.
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I have to agree.

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The story is all over the place and never made any sense even when there was not a lot of it.

It's a bit sad but you have to turn your brain off to play it and not try to think about motivations of characters, or expect any kind of reasoning from them.

I mean, at one point in the cheating path Cami was all "I won't see him ever again" and the next hour she was at his house and the reasoning for that was "I need to see him to tell him we won't see each other ever again".

The game would benefit from a better story and better building as it's an NTR game and these always get stronger with good story, but eh, take what you can. Thankfully it's saved by the models and by some parts/scenes that are A+.
 
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Blurpee69 said:
So I'm not entirely sure when, exactly, Melissa decided she was going to just go full QoS on the cheating route. Like she was:
  • being blackmailed by Jason because of her debt
  • pays that off
  • Jason tries to keep her on the leash with information concerning with whom Johnny is cheating on her
  • she figures out it's Jessica
  • Then is just seen wearing QoS attire from that point onward more or less.

She obviously has no reason to trust Johnny and their relationship is over at that point. But she has little reason to just be all "I'm blacked for life now" either considering she was basically raped / prostituted, depending on how you want to interpret it, by Jason. The problem is she also mostly disappears from the story as well after her confrontation with Jessica, so it's hard to pin down her motivations here. The few times she did show up she didn't really have much at all to say. I certainly would think that Cami would have at least commented on her wearing that same QoS bikini.

Ruth has also had a questionable slide too. She's still being blackmailed, but the focus on the cheating route has focused so heavily on Cami and Jason's interactions, that Shaman is kind of just skipping how some of these other characters have continued their downfall.
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If you would pay attention while reading, Melissa (judging by parallels from other paths and what she said and how acted on this one) blames for her boyfriends cheating not only Jessica, but also Fred. In other paths she is more... vocal about it, but in this premise is the same, and she want to have revenge on them too. As we see in this one, she spotted a lot of times with Jessica, and they tell us they put aside their differences. This is just 70% of the full update, and there is still time for an explanation, but we can assume what they will plot something together, for one reason or the other.
Regarding her outfit - yeah, imo there were a lot of misses in regard to chosen clothes, no defend for this one, but again, we know what Melissa pretty much corrupted by Jason a long time ago, so not that surprising tbh

As to Ruth - NTR magic of her falling for Big "Jason" Dick. :BootyTime:
We know what she still visits him, maybe even in the time skip of a few days what we got. We don't need to see EVERY interaction to know what is going on, especially with how much hints we got in this update

Edit: Don't know what to say about Miley. Always find her weird on all paths and just don't like her to even care what she is doing, so maybe you right :LUL:
 
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Adhdclassic said:
They are ugly they look like they are going for a part in a horror movie.
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Well let's be honest. If you are going to make a blacked NTR game why would you not make the black guys obnoxious? It's the same thing with the fat/old ugly bastard.

If it's just a regular black guy or just a regular older businessman with money that's 5/10 borderline vanilla porn. But if you make them just the worst and they still get the girl that's what makes it kinky and approaching 10/10.
 
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I never understood the story that's going around in this VN...I was able to follow it in first part then there are alot of things happening.
 
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