sappho

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My pleasure, I'm so excited to have a female crime boss game and its already amazing!

Yeah the all female gang thing is not something I'd really ask for, its just something I'd like in theory lol. No pressure for any of it, I don't even hate the idea of a female gang leader in an all male gang. Really like that you aren't constantly fucking your gangmembers too, easy to justify with morale boosts and things but its nice not to have that forced on the player.

Oh the writing is fine like I didn't mean writing more threat I meant like events like the muggings, should have been more clear with what i meant. Maybe stuff other rival thugs trying to do what the player is trying to do and rise up. something where instead of losing some health and money. maybe someone tries to kidnap you when you're working the glory hole, or someone you kicked out of the gang tries to get revenge in the club, youe warehouse/lab gets attacked and you can't make new shipments/drugs until its fixed or something. just things that can put some small roadblocks in the players path and add a bit more of a feeling of threat. I kind of like that there isn't rape or the threat of sexual violence against the player but that wouldnt be unsuitable for a crime game either. But yeah I get the concern about not wanting to spam attacks and events on the player. i dont know if its possible to timegate events so they could only trigger once every week or something. or have them trigger a text prompt but let the player ignore them if they want i dont know. but whatever its your game and its already really good so.
 
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Sinner666

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Nov 14, 2017
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There’s a red phone in the contacts tab, a pre-band whiteboard, and strange notes scattered around the city... But yeah, I tried to explain everything at least somewhat immersive and it might come off as confusing. I’ll take another look at it.
Yes, the hints are very good. And your writing skill is very good.
I mean the description in the FAQ of complex mechanics - club mechanics, clothing, complex events. Non-obvious moments for player .

PS maybe (It s only opinion!) 3 main characteristics - it s not enough for big game (i think THIS game is very ambitious) because it limits creativity. Maybe SPECIAL (fallout) is better... It s only opinion, as I said earlier.

Фnyway, the game is already very good
 

Terakahn

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Want to star off by saying I really like the game. But I think it would benefit a lot from some adjustments .

For example, reputation goes up very slowly once you're thug .and there no stat or meter or anything to know if you're making progress.

The task list is a good start but I think it could be fleshed out more, like it says to start a gang but not how. And the some of the jobs I get refused when I try to apply but it's not clear what the problem is. Like do I need better clothing? Because I bought the nicest available and it didn't help. Do I need more charm? Not sure how to increase that.

Not sure if it's later progression but having a way to set up passive resource collection would be great. Like having a gang member pickpocket jewelry for you or steal cars .

Really love the interactive sex system btw. Hope we get more of that .
 
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ramses11

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Fun game, but I can't figure out how to raise gang strength without just hiring a ton of new members. I also can't figure out how to make my gang profitable, I'm always either breaking even or losing money. Morale also seems impossible to keep high.
 

sappho

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Once you have your own gang go down to the basement and the option for Heisting should be there, then you need to fill certain requirements for each specific heist.
 

Kroo

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i dont know if its possible to timegate events so they could only trigger once every week or something. or have them trigger a text prompt but let the player ignore them if they want i dont know.
It's possible, yep - there are already a few things that have cooldowns. Namely, racing, shipment orders, and warehouse raids if you made a deal with the cop. But yeah, I got you.
Yes, the hints are very good. And your writing skill is very good.
I mean the description in the FAQ of complex mechanics - club mechanics, clothing, complex events. Non-obvious moments for player .
Okay, I'll work on more explanation texts.
PS maybe (It s only opinion!) 3 main characteristics - it s not enough for big game (i think THIS game is very ambitious) because it limits creativity. Maybe SPECIAL (fallout) is better... It s only opinion, as I said earlier.
Well, things like managing a club, a brothel, a moonshine trailer, and other stuff are kind of stats too, if you look at it that way.
The task list is a good start but I think it could be fleshed out more, like it says to start a gang but not how. And the some of the jobs I get refused when I try to apply but it's not clear what the problem is. Like do I need better clothing? Because I bought the nicest available and it didn't help. Do I need more charm? Not sure how to increase that.
Okay, got you. I should've added an explanation that you'll be able to create a gang once you finish all the preparations, indeed. On all refusals, there’s a text explaining why you got refused. And yeah, it’s because you don’t have enough charm. You can get enough of it through starting stats allocation and(!) by buying clothes - it’s kind of a design choice to let players who go full charm earn the same money as those who go full cunning... Combat bios sucks, tho.
But yeah, the requirements are probably indeed too high. I'll lower them slightly in the next update. Right now, if you start with 0 charm, you need to get clothes and either gloryhole/seller trait and/or "slut boss"/"crime legend" status. And only then you can pursue charm bonuses from previously inaccessible jobs.
Also, there's a "red phone" in the contacts list that explains how to raise your stats. I'll move it to the preband whiteboard prolly. And there's a notification when you're about to unlock a new trait.
Not sure if it's later progression but having a way to set up passive resource collection would be great. Like having a gang member pickpocket jewelry for you or steal cars .
It's already in the game, yeah.
About reputation... I'll adjust it. Right now, most of the gains are static, and I don't like it. Honestly, only dealing with shipments raises your reputation fast enough, and I'm going to address that too.
cool game cool concept! shame theres no sound on the videos though
I dunno how to implement it without making the player cringe by different moans/voices. I'll look into the audio eventually.
2 bugs in v 0.1.5:
Thanks! Fixed.
Fun game, but I can't figure out how to raise gang strength without just hiring a ton of new members. I also can't figure out how to make my gang profitable, I'm always either breaking even or losing money. Morale also seems impossible to keep high.
There's a 'Hook' position in your gang that recruits new people. The more combat they have, the faster their recruitment rate. The fastest possible result is a one guy every two days
Make your gang work, yo! Make investments and reap the profits! The only easy ways to make instant big mooony are heists and orders on the strip landing.
How do you get the scenes with the other gang leaders?
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Papazoglo1

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I dunno how to implement it without making the player cringe by different moans/voices. I'll look into the audio eventually.
Please don't waste time adding audio. Are you sure that most people need this, only one person has asked you to do it? - for example, it annoys me. I generally listen to my music in the player while playing HTML games.

P.S. I really liked the idea of the game, thank you! I wish you creative success.
 
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Sinner666

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Please don't waste time adding audio. Are you sure that most people need this, only one person has asked you to do it? - for example, it annoys me. I generally listen to my music in the player while playing HTML games.

P.S. I really liked the idea of the game, thank you! I wish you creative success.
I agree with you, I don't think this is a priority task
 
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Terakahn

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A note on audio. Audio in sex scenes videos playing could be good, but background music and stuff is usually undesirable. I think videos with sound are a huge plus personally.

And yeah you're showing a ton of promise as an early stage dev. This must not be your first game?

I'll hold off on any more feedback until I try a new version
 

Kroo

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Please don't waste time adding audio. Are you sure that most people need this, only one person has asked you to do it? - for example, it annoys me. I generally listen to my music in the player while playing HTML games.
I agree with you, I don't think this is a priority task
I wrote about audio not because Hubalt commented on it... My roadmap has a paragraph about audio right from the launch. I just think that any completed game should have some kind of audio (unless being deaf is a main gimmick). Of course, I understand that good audio isn’t something typically expected from a game on Twine, so it'll be something I plan to implement later, closer to the release.
This must not be your first game?
Eh, kinda. I've participated in a lot of game jams, but never had any big commitments.

Also, I've posted a sneak peek and preliminary changelog of v0.2.0 on my Patreon if anyone is interested!
 
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Are the T2 revealing clothes actually in the game? I opened up the Emporium and the newsletter said Wild Rabbit would have new stock, but I skipped about a week and saw no new clothing there, nor any of those clothes showing up in the Emporium itself.
 
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