VN Ren'Py Shattered Dreams: Redemption [v0.3] [Nebula Dreams]

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Shattered Dreams: Redemption [v0.3] Unofficial Android Port

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lepoutanol

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Just finished the game. It was so good. I have just 1 complain. Why only Maddison path?The rest of the girls seemed to just left behind or just having them there just as friends. Only Jennie had some build up that can lead to romance. What about Mina and the other girls?heloooo??!! Also,can you guys please recommend me other games like this one?I really am having tough time trying to find Vn's with this type of style and stories. I played some,but not many. Max 20-30 I would say.Any recs?
 

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Just finished the game. It was so good. I have just 1 complain. Why only Maddison path?The rest of the girls seemed to just left behind or just having them there just as friends. Only Jennie had some build up that can lead to romance. What about Mina and the other girls?heloooo??!! Also,can you guys please recommend me other games like this one?I really am having tough time trying to find Vn's with this type of style and stories. I played some,but not many. Max 20-30 I would say.Any recs?
Mina will be a very slow burn, the blonde girl (Ella I think it was) appears in the story only recently (in my case at some party, but I saw pictures that you can meet her in some photoshoot of models) and the landlady asks you at one point what you expect from her, so if you answer "just an acquaintance", don't expect anything more :BootyTime:.
 
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lepoutanol

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Mina will be a very slow burn, the blonde girl (Ella I think it was) appears in the story only recently (in my case at some party, but I saw pictures that you can meet her in some photoshoot of models) and the landlady asks you at one point what you expect from her, so if you answer "just an acquaintance", don't expect anything more :BootyTime:.
Oki. At least I know now that Mina is on dev's plans.uuf. Thank you for letting me know
 

Dessolos

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Just finished the game. It was so good. I have just 1 complain. Why only Maddison path?The rest of the girls seemed to just left behind or just having them there just as friends. Only Jennie had some build up that can lead to romance. What about Mina and the other girls?heloooo??!! Also,can you guys please recommend me other games like this one?I really am having tough time trying to find Vn's with this type of style and stories. I played some,but not many. Max 20-30 I would say.Any recs?
tbh Maddison path is my least favorite right now because of how quick it is and feels mostly about sex right now. So I am looking forward when it turns into something more romantic in nature.
 

lepoutanol

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tbh Maddison path is my least favorite right now because of how quick it is and feels mostly about sex right now. So I am looking forward when it turns into something more romantic in nature.
yeap . exactly . she only uses the MC for sex and that's annoying af and no point on doing that and focusing on her when you have Jennie and Mina which have good storylines going on and dev should focus on them,no?
 

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Chill, we're still at the beginning of the game—we're just starting to move past the "introduction" phase of the characters. From here on out, we'll gradually dive into each girl's path, each at her own pace.
In the next update, no matter who your LI is, you should all get scenes you're going to enjoy. (Unlike 0.3, where the content was mainly focused on Lena, for example.)
 

lepoutanol

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Chill, we're still at the beginning of the game—we're just starting to move past the "introduction" phase of the characters. From here on out, we'll gradually dive into each girl's path, each at her own pace.
In the next update, no matter who your LI is, you should all get scenes you're going to enjoy. (Unlike 0.3, where the content was mainly focused on Lena, for example.)
I didn't say anything bad. Sorry if it seemed that way . I was wondering why she had so much time with main character when Mina and the other girls are right there .You are doing a fantastic job. Just keep this pace with the characters . I can't wait to see more of Mina and how the story goes with every girl . Go nail it my guy !
 
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I didn't say anything bad. Sorry if it seemed that way . I was wondering why she had so much time with main character when Mina and the other girls are right there .You are doing a fantastic job. Just keep this pace with the characters . I can't wait to see more of Mina and how the story goes with every girl . Go nail it my guy !
Just finished the game. It was so good. I have just 1 complain. Why only Maddison path?The rest of the girls seemed to just left behind or just having them there just as friends. Only Jennie had some build up that can lead to romance. What about Mina and the other girls?heloooo??!! Also,can you guys please recommend me other games like this one?I really am having tough time trying to find Vn's with this type of style and stories. I played some,but not many. Max 20-30 I would say.Any recs?
I believe you meant it in a matter if lewds but not content in general.
Because Mina's had the most screen time with the MC so far — I think even more than all the other girls combined (the whole story basically revolves around her plotline).
Also, I don't think Maddie is forced on MC, plot-wise, it's the way the story goes, they start as friends with benefits, and to show the gradual transition from FWB to lovers, some scenes needed to be shown 1st, all content/scenes look natural. The same with other girls including Mina.

yeap . exactly . she only uses the MC for sex and that's annoying af and no point on doing that and focusing on her when you have Jennie and Mina which have good storylines going on and dev should focus on them,no?
Disagree, it goes both ways, when MC feels down - he calls Maddison, and vice versa, they both benefit from this relationship, it's literally said in a game (the scene where MC says he feels bad for using Maddison). The whole idea is that at some point Maddison starts seeing MC as smth more than just FWB, and it's up to you, the player, to decide whether you wanna go down her path or not.
 
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lepoutanol

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I believe you meant it in a matter if lewds but not content in general.
Because Mina's had the most screen time with the MC so far — I think even more than all the other girls combined (the whole story basically revolves around her plotline).
Also, I don't think Maddie is forced on MC, plot-wise, it's the way the story goes, they start as friends with benefits, and to show the gradual transition from FWB to lovers, some scenes needed to be shown 1st, all content/scenes look natural. The same with other girls including Mina.


Disagree, it goes both ways, when MC feels down - he calls Maddison, and vice versa, they both benefit from this relationship, it's literally said in a game (the scene where MC says he feels bad for using Maddison). The whole idea is that at some point Maddison starts seeing MC as smth more than just FWB, and it's up to you, the player, to decide whether you wanna go down her path or not.
Yeap.True.You are right.
 
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New status update about version 0.4 is !
 

ImSenjou

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I noticed that basically all the girls are, in some way, successful or at least have a good future ahead of them, and this made me see the difference between them and the MC, his career is over before it even started, he is in debt to the mafia and has a very high chance of being fired from his current job.

As the MC, I don't feel worthy of Mina. (I don't care about the other girls, but I don't see the MC as anything more than a good distraction for them.)

I was exaggerating when I started writing this, but the more I wrote, the more my opinion solidified, I think the dynamic of the relationship with Maddison was what bothered me the most.

I've already decided to focus only on Mina, so don't see my comment as asking for changes in the game, I only wrote this because I just remade my gameplay.
 
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PickerLewd

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Mmm yes, I think almost all of them are successful.

Maddison looks like she's going to inherit wealth from her father, Mina is a successful singer and Lena seems to be doing well too. In these cases the MC could be a male/boy gold-digger :LUL:.

But Ella (the blonde) doesn't seem to be doing so well and is struggling with some odd jobs, although it's true that she hasn't appeared much so far.

As for Jennie, I don't know, if you don't progress with her date at the beginning, she seems to disappear from the game, as happened to me in my save :unsure:.
 
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Mmm yes, I think almost all of them are successful.

Maddison looks like she's going to inherit wealth from her father, Mina is a successful singer and Lena seems to be doing well too. In these cases the MC could be a male/boy gold-digger :LUL:.

But Ella (the blonde) doesn't seem to be doing so well and is struggling with some odd jobs, although it's true that she hasn't appeared much so far.

As for Jennie, I don't know, if you don't progress with her date at the beginning, she seems to disappear from the game, as happened to me in my save :unsure:.
Unless there is an inheritance or something. Jennie is not rich. Just a normal employee (not that high up the chain, so wouldn't be on an extra high wage).
 

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Curious what you guys think of the pacing of the latest update (0.3). Got a discord buddy telling me he thought the pacing was bad in 0.3 but was fine in 0.2 ( I haven't played it yet going to in like 1 - 2 days finally)

Some things he said

" the events are all over the place they dont really follow much logic "
"the only events that do follow some sort of order are the story mafia ones , because the others make fuck no sense"
" Mc is one time hanging out with the best friend next he is banging a chick then he is randomly recording music with the idol "
" the new update feels much more random sort of like one of those slice of life anime "
"In other games you see MC making plans or gives you hints about what the MC will do in the upcoming days"
"while in Shattered Dreams its just more in your face oh a girl randomly calls you well better get to that the only girl I felt that had some decent good follow up is the girl that wants to keep things slow, you see the MC actually making plans with her"
"with the others its just mostly randomly during any day or anytime they feel like it"


Again none of the above was from me but I thought it be an interesting conversation to have. As I don't recall anyone mentioning pacing issues when 0.3 dropped
 
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Curious what you guys think of the pacing of the latest update (0.3). Got a discord buddy telling me he thought the pacing was bad in 0.3 but was fine in 0.2 ( I haven't played it yet going to in like 1 - 2 days finally)

Some things he said

" the events are all over the place they dont really follow much logic "
"the only events that do follow some sort of order are the story mafia ones , because the others make fuck no sense"
" Mc is one time hanging out with the best friend next he is banging a chick then he is randomly recording music with the idol "
" the new update feels much more random sort of like one of those slice of life anime "
"In other games you see MC making plans or gives you hints about what the MC will do in the upcoming days"
"while in Shattered Dreams its just more in your face oh a girl randomly calls you well better get to that the only girl I felt that had some decent good follow up is the girl that wants to keep things slow, you see the MC actually making plans with her"
"with the others its just mostly randomly during any day or anytime they feel like it"


Again none of the above was from me but I thought it be an interesting conversation to have. As I don't recall anyone mentioning pacing issues when 0.3 dropped
I thought it was fine. It moved from one scene to the next just like AVN's do. It seems he's complaining because he has no warning of what MC's going to be doing next.

It's running through the main stories, the crime stuff. Plus the Mina path. You're going to be doing the music stuff. You live with Lena, when you go home, there's a good chance she's going to be there.

Then you get your contact with Jennie & Maddie, either they ring you or you them and say do you want to get together and you go or you don't. What's wrong with that? Pretty normal to me. The only issue would be be if you were in a relationship with one of them, you'd see them more (but in a 5 LI game, that's pretty normal).

Meeting Ella, you get 'Hey wanna go to a party' and you go. What's weird about that?

I'm kind of confused what he's actually complaining about. Moving from doing one thing with a girl to doing something else with a different girl, is pretty much how AVN's work. Sometimes you plan those in advance, sometimes you don't.

If every game that doesn't tell you what you're doing next is random and 'fuck no sense' there won't be many games he likes then, because that's pretty standard.
 

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I thought it was fine. It moved from one scene to the next just like AVN's do. It seems he's complaining because he has no warning of what MC's going to be doing next.

It's running through the main stories, the crime stuff. Plus the Mina path. You're going to be doing the music stuff. You live with Lena, when you go home, there's a good chance she's going to be there.

Then you get your contact with Jennie & Maddie, either they ring you or you them and say do you want to get together and you go or you don't. What's wrong with that? Pretty normal to me. The only issue would be be if you were in a relationship with one of them, you'd see them more (but in a 5 LI game, that's pretty normal).

Meeting Ella, you get 'Hey wanna go to a party' and you go. What's weird about that?

I'm kind of confused what he's actually complaining about. Moving from doing one thing with a girl to doing something else with a different girl, is pretty much how AVN's work. Sometimes you plan those in advance, sometimes you don't.

If every game that doesn't tell you what you're doing next is random and 'fuck no sense' there won't be many games he likes then, because that's pretty standard.
Yeah tbh even tho I have to play the update still just reading it sounded kind of odd to me and got a feeling id disagree when I get around to playing it. Which is why I asked here kind of curious what others thought.
 
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Yeah tbh even tho I have to play the update still just reading it sounded kind of odd to me and got a feeling id disagree when I get around to playing it. Which is why I asked here kind of curious what others thought.
I'd be curious to see what others think too. (y)
 
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I think it's less the pacing and more the transitions themselves. I did note in my comment earlier that some of the transitions felt a bit more jarring than usual due to the scene it transitions to, sometimes being zoomed in or so which makes it so you have to take a second to realize what you're looking at, which isn't as natural as transitioning into a wide-shot that's more easily recognizable at a first glance.
 
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