NadaMucho
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- Dec 29, 2023
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Just starting to check out the title but the MC seems like a serious derp. It's strange how an author wouldn't get tired of writing dialog for a character who complains about EVERYTHING! Phone rings, he complains. Mom wants him to do something, sister says hello and wakes you up for school.. he complains. It never ends. "Geeze! Sheesh! Ok ok! Why doesn't everything in life not go exactly as I want. Its not fair! I'm so put upon!"
Couple that with the fact that he's dripping in arrogance and judgement. He likes some girl who's out of his league and gets shot down, he whines. Girl at his level likes him, he brushes her off as "not good enough" for him.
I hate him already. I hope he falls into a wood chipper.
Couple that with the fact that he's dripping in arrogance and judgement. He likes some girl who's out of his league and gets shot down, he whines. Girl at his level likes him, he brushes her off as "not good enough" for him.
I hate him already. I hope he falls into a wood chipper.
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