VN Ren'Py Abandoned She Is My Precious [Ep. 4] [Finest Art Productions]

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Dolphin3000

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Visually a very good game! I loved the main female character too, and how the story progresses keeping the focus on the main couple. It would be great if the game kept it like that, without adding a third wheel like most games do, in order to please the threesome lovers. There is one thing though that I feel is lacking in this game, that if added would turn this good game into a great game. I'm talking about meaningful choices; choices to change the point of view of a scene are not meaningful choices; It would be great to give some options for the main character to do something or not, let him be a little bit more active. Right now he's totally passive during the hottest moments.
 
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Story doesn't make any sense really.
Foster parents are just that, fosters, they are temporary unless no other solution can be found.
They don't have any real power.
They aren't actual parents legally [else they would be adoptive parents, not fosters].
and it's very rare that the kid would not be immediately given to a willing biological family member.

The government pays fosters an amount of money for each kid they foster, so the moment the government can reasonable absolves itself from having to pay, they do.
 
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Mommysbuttslut

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Content_Consumer said:
Story doesn't make any sense really.
Foster parents are just that, fosters, they are temporary unless no other solution can be found.
They don't have any real power.
They aren't actual parents legally [else they would be adoptive parents, not fosters].
and it's very rare that the kid would not be immediately given to a willing biological family member.

The government pays fosters an amount of money for each kid they foster, so the moment the government can reasonable absolves itself from having to pay, they do.
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Her mom was adopted and as per the dialogue from this update the main girl appears to have been registered as the adoptive father's daughter on her birth certificate. I suspect the whole foster thing is either based on some obscure international legalese that doesn't make sense from your country or a bad translation. Although the English isn't bad it doesn't feel like the writer's a native English speaker to me so my money is that it's being mistranslated. It makes perfect sense after digging through everything that's wrong and substituting everything we know to be right.
 
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LinkBox88

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I know this is such a small nitpick but at the very end of the update, Odelia says something like ''you ingrates'' when referring to the MC and Charlie but but Odelia doesn't have any reason for feeling like they should feel grateful to her for anything. These people don't know each other. If she was calling the daughter that I would get it but it's just not the right insult for this situation.
 
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Ghost'' said:
She Is My Precious [Ep.4] Unofficial Android Port

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Android Port Updated..
 
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sfree21

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awesome game, pretty renders, the pacing is good, dialog interesting (no boring filler), some mystery, action, hint at fights/sport in the future, and sex with daughter and future friends (at least sophie).
 
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johnmnf692

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This game started really strong, but it has since just devolved into banal melodrama with the adoptive parents. The vibe of getting to know Filia and the other girls which is established at the start of the game is kind of ruined when so much focus is devoted to the uninteresting machinations of characters who are comically evil just for the sake of having antagonists, which a game like this really didn't need to begin with. The implication that Radford likely raped Emily is also just unnecessarily gruesome. The sooner this tripe is done the sooner we can get actually interesting content with the LIs.
 
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LinkBox88

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I'm not sure how you go about justifying it story-wise but the chastity belt needs to be re-introduced somehow. Nothing in the game has come close to how hot it was to slide it off her at the beginning.
 
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frasse74

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i hope when the next update comes it find some losen ends and the chastity belt dosent need that Radford has raped her
his wife sees that Radford maybe cant holds his hands from Emily . hope that the story will be fine, otherwise it looks good and feels like a Vn i will follow
 
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LordWanze

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Yeah the rape shit is really too much, even just hinted at.
The foster parents in itself are disgusting enough.
But since the girls and women around MC are quite lovely, I just hope it will get a resolution soon and we can focus on the important persons.
 
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I hope there is no redemption arc bullshit. I want to see blood, i want to see these psychopaths dead!!!
 
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Mommysbuttslut

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Man the loli tag really doesn't mean a fucking thing on this site if even this game gets it. She's maybe just a bit short but if she's a loli then my 30 year old fat male ass is too
 
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