Ruff Ryder
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- Aug 18, 2020
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Glad the topic of a paternity test was taken into consideration this early on.
I for one hope not. I had to quit playing DMD, because the daughter is presented as being SO totally and completely naive as to appear capped at the intellect of perhaps a 5 yr old. The girl knew NOTHING and i just couldnt stomach it. Naive and innocent is one thing, Clueless, is another.
but yes, she is absolutely gorgeous;
reminds me of lost at birth, im a sucker for that type
Kukipett
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- Feb 2, 2021
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The story seems interesting but my god has this been written by a human. It sounds totally mising any feelings or emotions. The protagostists have a blank face like robots. Is this the product of an AI because it's quite well written but without any feelings just plain facts.
It's weird and makes me feel uneasy as i was watching some psychopath being a nice guy but devoid of emotions.
It's written like the annual financial report of a company, detailed and effective but not really funny!!
It's weird and makes me feel uneasy as i was watching some psychopath being a nice guy but devoid of emotions.
It's written like the annual financial report of a company, detailed and effective but not really funny!!
So, yeар NTR. Where did Emily go? Because if she's become the heroine of a typical NTR/corruption story off-screen, then since she's clearly the mc's love interest, the game needs the NTR tag. However, if there is and was no other dick near her other than the mc's dick, it's fine. So clarification is needed, otherwise it should be tagged NTR.
Personally, I as many others as I think, have great difficulty playing this game knowing that one of the most important women in the mc's life at the moment may be participating in an interracial orgy behind the mc's back, or sucking off old landlord to delay paying rent.
So. not playing the game until Emily's purity status is clear.
Personally, I as many others as I think, have great difficulty playing this game knowing that one of the most important women in the mc's life at the moment may be participating in an interracial orgy behind the mc's back, or sucking off old landlord to delay paying rent.
So. not playing the game until Emily's purity status is clear.
Wanquer
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Badjourasmix
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- Sep 22, 2017
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Like the game, but the dialogs and expression need more improvement.
Dororohot
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- Aug 6, 2020
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Dude i also hate NTR but calm down .We dont know anything about anyone now .Its just assumptions .We dont even know if emily is dead or alive .Even if she is alive his relationship with emily was in past .MC has not seen for many years now .She might even not be a LI at all . daughter is the main LI.
humanstickobserver
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- Jan 28, 2019
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Way too early in development for a proper review, so I thought I'd put my thoughts here.
First thing, the renders are beautiful.
Second, the story seems touching, so far.
Third, I like that the MC isn't an out of control perv. That's refreshing.
So, what follows... I don't think it's fair to call these "cons," merely issues I think could be addressed.
First, we aren't really told how much of a timeskip there is between the Emily scene and present day. Second, I think some dialog moves too fast. There is room to expand on it a little without coming across as too wordy.
Third, while I know that we will learn more as the story develops, it currently feels like we're going in too blind. We know next to nothing about MC, Eileen, Charlie, the male friend (sorry, forgot his name). We don't know how long they've known each other, or anything else. It's not a leap to intuit things: they know each other from the orphanage. They're early-mid thirties and have been in each other's life quite a long time. Eileen and MC have been physical with each other before, in some way, shape or form. Charlie is either a cop or a PI. But I think there is room to expand somewhat on who they are, and who they are to each other, so they feel less like meeting a new, random character, and more like meeting an old friend. Eileen was especially confusing, because dialog says something along the lines of not seeing her in over a year? Why not?
Fourth, I'm not a huge fan of how the camera bounces all over. Yes, it lets us see the beautiful renders from other angles, but the camera is usually MC perspective, so when it bounces around like that, it can be jarring to see that it isn't the MC's perspective, but just fanservice shots.
Over all, I really like what I've seen so far, and I look forward to future updates.
First thing, the renders are beautiful.
Second, the story seems touching, so far.
Third, I like that the MC isn't an out of control perv. That's refreshing.
So, what follows... I don't think it's fair to call these "cons," merely issues I think could be addressed.
First, we aren't really told how much of a timeskip there is between the Emily scene and present day. Second, I think some dialog moves too fast. There is room to expand on it a little without coming across as too wordy.
Third, while I know that we will learn more as the story develops, it currently feels like we're going in too blind. We know next to nothing about MC, Eileen, Charlie, the male friend (sorry, forgot his name). We don't know how long they've known each other, or anything else. It's not a leap to intuit things: they know each other from the orphanage. They're early-mid thirties and have been in each other's life quite a long time. Eileen and MC have been physical with each other before, in some way, shape or form. Charlie is either a cop or a PI. But I think there is room to expand somewhat on who they are, and who they are to each other, so they feel less like meeting a new, random character, and more like meeting an old friend. Eileen was especially confusing, because dialog says something along the lines of not seeing her in over a year? Why not?
Fourth, I'm not a huge fan of how the camera bounces all over. Yes, it lets us see the beautiful renders from other angles, but the camera is usually MC perspective, so when it bounces around like that, it can be jarring to see that it isn't the MC's perspective, but just fanservice shots.
Over all, I really like what I've seen so far, and I look forward to future updates.
humanstickobserver
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MC and Emily were in an orphanage. Emily got adopted. She later ran away (supposedly/we hope) from the adopted family.
She might not be a love interest. She might come back into the story later.
Either way, you're making huge, and utterly wild assumptions about her.
Nothing about the tone of the game, thus far, suggests NTR to me. The story seems to be about your daughter, and hopefully finding Emily.
We're supposed to be concerned about whether she actually ran away, or if something happened to her (she might not even be alive), and you're worried she's being spitroasted by black cock.
I mean, I despise NTR in games (especially when it is forced and not a choice we can pursue or not), but your fear that someone else has fucked her seems wildly disproportionate to anything even tangentially suggested in game. Especially when the tone of the game pushes us to be concerned about her wellbeing, not as to whether she's being gangbanged behind our backs.
Well, the thing is, why play a game where one of the love interests can hypothetically participate in an interracial orgy, touch other men's dicks, and so on, when you can play a game where that absolutely does't happen?
none of that has happened in this game either. I havent seen any indication that such things even COULD happen. Where are you getting your leaps and bounds? Nothing so far in this game, indicates ANY of what you are opposed to anyway.
The truth is that there is also nothing to indicate that such has not or is not happening. Emily isn't there, nothing is known about her life, so who knows, maybe after breaking up with the mc she became like the heroine of that infamous manga "Henshin " and that's why she sent her daughter away from her so she wouldn't repeat her fate.
oidex
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Sure. She might also have had total plastic surgery and is now running for president under the name "Donald Trump".
Same probability.
Simulacrum29
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nah the former scenario is far more likely then the stuff you made up, but i would prefer your version over the former scenario
Azraelith
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So I'm gonna throw my .02 cents out; but what the absolute fuck is this train-wreck of a travesty of writing? Why is the MC acting like his job loss is 'oh no just a slap on the wrist' and even MORE to the point; his 'daughter' whom just happens to be sitting at the beach, no papers, no evidence to back anything up aside from "oh hi you're my dad, take me with you" "okay." has me tilting my head like 'huh?'