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[stefu85]

Sorry for the French words I must have forgotten, I'll correct them as I unveil episode 2.

As for the grainy images, I intend to improve and make better renderings in the future ^^

And why not a "re-rework" of episode 1 XD

we're hoping lesbian incest in future

 

[Chuck Wow]

Sorry for the French words I must have forgotten, I'll correct them as I unveil episode 2.

The forgotten French words are one thing. Then there are misspellings (notably, neighboor instead of neighbor). And beyond that, in multiple instances, phrasings give it away that the thing was not written by a native English speaker.

I have the same issues in my game as a non-native English speaker. One thing I do is I run all of my dialogs through DeepL rewrite. I do not blindly take whatever DeepL suggests, as sometimes it doesn't get it right either, but in many instances it finds better, more natural phrasings than what I came up with.

When you have spent the effort it takes to make a game, I think this extra effort is worth it. Your game will look more polished and players will more easily get into the story.

Aside from this, the game looks good. Good luck with it!

 

[Aurelius Ambrosius]

I like the concept of short stories. Most VNs either get abandoned or go on for waaaaaaaaay too long.
I'll give this a go. Good luck dev!

 

[J0K3RXXX]

It looks very promising.

 

[Djulz]

YO ALL !

Episode 2 is here, and there's a little poll on patreon where I could use your feedback ^^

Enjoy ^^