Alright, I'm back! *happy sigh*
First the good:
-them dresses on point!
-loving the sister even more in the remake
-THAT END! Never thought we'd get that far just yet
Improvements:
-This is largely personal, but I was pretty bummed MY grind scene wasnt in the bathroom. I reminded myself though that we got something close to that in the first part, but the act of dry humping without underwear is the closest you can get without actual sex so it was a SUPER turn on when I saw it in the original. Play with that "should we/shouldnt we" line as much as you can and you wont go wrong. 50% of why everyone loves this game is how hot the models are, but that other 50% is all about the taboo.
-I'm pretty sure this is where the arcs end, but it was a bit annoying having to go back through multiple times to get the other scenes. Again, I remind myself HOW AWESOME those others were (though I was mostly looking for that grind), I think in the future what scene plays out should vary based on choices made rather close to the scene and not a chapter back.
-I would say this is more of a future concern, but since you'll be doing the newest chapter next, I'm quite interested to see how you connect this chapter and the newest, and hopefully going back to 3 after 7 doesn't seem weird. I guess I'm just really curious how you plan on writing that out exactly.
OH! And finally, I'm going to put the NTR to bed by saying this: I am neither for nor against it and in most games whether I like it or not is on a case by case basis. I wont get into the psychology of it all, but I will remind everyone that we are pirates here. We get this for free. So if any of you REALLY feel that strongly about those routes, SUPPORT HIS GAME!!! He has an obligation to his patrons first, cause they are the people that make it possible. So instead of complaining about something that isnt even a possibility yet, support Boring Games so much that he has no choice but to make it NTR free
