- Mar 22, 2021
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so. . . . the plot is to gradually give the mc a case of overconfident arrogance that has been gradually building up to his downfall and ntr?
Yes I do know about sharing being completely avoidable. for now
But
ticking off the former bff and giving him mindcontrol pills while getting the mc beat to death.
I can't be the only one who sees this as a good place to showcase your excellent writing skills while being an even bigger plot hole that cannot logically be resolved without the mc losing here.
Sure maybe you'll send ange or someone to save the day. but the entire box is gone and homeboy is not in a place to hypotize first and fix the problem safely. plus with a grudge and the tools plus the knowledge that he can mindcontrol everyone to take revenge? angry people seldom wait to calm down before taking revenge. especially when they have such an advantage
Yes I do know about sharing being completely avoidable. for now
But
ticking off the former bff and giving him mindcontrol pills while getting the mc beat to death.
I can't be the only one who sees this as a good place to showcase your excellent writing skills while being an even bigger plot hole that cannot logically be resolved without the mc losing here.
Sure maybe you'll send ange or someone to save the day. but the entire box is gone and homeboy is not in a place to hypotize first and fix the problem safely. plus with a grudge and the tools plus the knowledge that he can mindcontrol everyone to take revenge? angry people seldom wait to calm down before taking revenge. especially when they have such an advantage
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