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The version here is from November, I think they released it for patrons and we'll see it eventually.Is the version on the post updated?
The version here is from November, I think they released it for patrons and we'll see it eventually.Is the version on the post updated?
As i said to someone else yesterday, if this is a sample of your English, i don't think you've got much to worry about.Thirdly, I'm not a native speaker therefore you might find some strange sentences and sometimes dialogues may sound not really natural. Moreover, you're likely to find some misspelled words and so on. If this happens, tell me, please, I'll correct everything.
It's mine ... But when I have to deal with a large amount of text, slang and so and so on, I can easily miss something.As i said to someone else yesterday, if this is a sample of your English, i don't think you've got much to worry about.
ICSTOR and Mr.Dots contradict your theoryI detest people who try act like their big hard men when they aren't, don't call people soy boys when these people probably getting laid more then you, always remember what site your on before saying dumb shit like that. Haven't played the game yet dev will play it when i have time i'm sure it will be good, but since there is a few post saying don't put NTR in it. I'll be the first to say i hope you do put NTR in the game. Remember what your goal is for this game, if it's to gain support believe me adding many fetishes will surerly help (specialy ntr) in the financial part as well.
Second (this might be a bug, idk) the mother of his friend acts in the second chapter like i used my ability on her in the first chapter, even if i didnt. And the best friend acts like i told him about my powers, even if i didnt.
Like i said, this might be just a bug. But if it isnt, you are overwriting players decision of the past. Thats bad writing. Dont give the player choices if you want a very specific outcome anyway. That completely ruins the immersion.
Made the same choices, and was very confused by the writing. I haven't looked at the code, but maybe there just isn't an option written yet for choosing not to tell Jake or use the power on his mom.I had 2 small bugs: when I was at the restaurant and did not watch the video there was an error, and also the friend knew about the secret ability and acted like I used it on Faith. Telling somebody about it seemed like a really bad idea to me
The word you're looking for is "Overall" not "Overhaul".After a really nice, intriguing chapter 1, i was looking forward to the next release.
Unfortunately this second chapter was a big let-down...
But let me first tell the Dev that i absolutely respect the time and resources you put in this game.
The writing is good, the models look nice. The story overhaul is really interesting.
But i hate the character development, especially the MC. He acts like an absolute scumbag. He acts like the typical MC in erotic games. Instead of a slower builtup of relationship with his mom and sis, he actually tries to seduce them aggressively. It feels unnatural to me.
Second (this might be a bug, idk) the mother of his friend acts in the second chapter like i used my ability on her in the first chapter, even if i didnt. And the best friend acts like i told him about my powers, even if i didnt.
Like i said, this might be just a bug. But if it isnt, you are overwriting players decision of the past. Thats bad writing. Dont give the player choices if you want a very specific outcome anyway. That completely ruins the immersion.
Overhaul, i would have given this game a 4/5 in the first chapter. But now i can only give it a 2/5, maybe with a lot of sympathy a 3/5.
Remember, this is only my personal opinion, this is not a bad game.
I would say give it a try and see for yourself. Just because i dont like it (or started do dislike it), doesnt mean you wont...
I wish the Dev the very best with this and any future game.
Sorry to rain on your parade there but you could use both actually - either it's the story as a whole (ergo 'overall') or it's been reworked (overhauled). /nitpickThe word you're looking for is "Overall" not "Overhaul".
Not that much yet but that is about to change ;-)How much h-scenes are in this one ?