VN Ren'Py Shut Up and Dance [Ep.1-10 Ch.2 v1.3 SE] [Boring Games]

[can't_relate]

Chapter 9 and 10 are so ass it's actually hilarious. Was it really the best option to reduce MC's IQ to basement level to progress the story forward? Even single non player decision in Chapter 9 was so stupid. I know I'm not the first nor last to complain about this loser leaving the ENTIRE box of pills in his car AFTER the whole incident with Ange. Just terrible man. I deadass don't even want to finish this game I'm so annoyed . I mean this right after bullshit QTEs was a like a double whammy of loud incorrect buzzer sound playing in my head .

Completely agreed. The only thing carrying this game for me is the sex scenes, the story progression and character development is so bad that I stopped paying attention to the story at one point. The Jake twist makes no sense, especially if you go the sharing route where you influence Faith for him. Even at the start, watching the mind numbingly dumb ways in which the relationship with the Mom and the Sister was developed, I kept expecting them to just catch the MC off guard that they know what he's upto.

No offence to the dev, but seeing the ways in which women are 'seduced' in this game feels like it's either written by someone who has never interacted with women, or all women in this game are supposed to be just sex dolls. Without Megan, I would never have played this game at all.

 

[Tier1selection]

Completely agreed. The only thing carrying this game for me is the sex scenes, the story progression and character development is so bad that I stopped paying attention to the story at one point. The Jake twist makes no sense, especially if you go the sharing route where you influence Faith for him. Even at the start, watching the mind numbingly dumb ways in which the relationship with the Mom and the Sister was developed, I kept expecting them to just catch the MC off guard that they know what he's upto.

No offence to the dev, but seeing the ways in which women are 'seduced' in this game feels like it's either written by someone who has never interacted with women, or all women in this game are supposed to be just sex dolls. Without Megan, I would never have played this game at all.

I really and honestly agree with this 100%. But you need to take into consideration that in many AVNs, MC behaviour is appaling and as you said portraits an MC with an IQ in the negative. If it was not for Megan, nah-

 

[mumudef4]

Completely agreed. The only thing carrying this game for me is the sex scenes, the story progression and character development is so bad that I stopped paying attention to the story at one point. The Jake twist makes no sense, especially if you go the sharing route where you influence Faith for him. Even at the start, watching the mind numbingly dumb ways in which the relationship with the Mom and the Sister was developed, I kept expecting them to just catch the MC off guard that they know what he's upto.

No offence to the dev, but seeing the ways in which women are 'seduced' in this game feels like it's either written by someone who has never interacted with women, or all women in this game are supposed to be just sex dolls. Without Megan, I would never have played this game at all.

If I were Jack, I would have used my drug powers to brainwash Megan long ago (now it's my turn to fuck your mother). I've already killed the protagonist; I need to erase all traces of his existence, including brainwashing everyone connected to him, making them forget him, and incidentally, brainwashing all the women to be mine.

In fact, the protagonist didn't die; he lay in the hospital for a long time before waking up. Jack could have used that time to brainwash everyone.

Jack suddenly discovers the protagonist is having sex with his mother, and then becomes the villain, but he doesn't retaliate against the protagonist. Logically speaking, shouldn't Jack be the one having sex with the protagonist's mother?

Therefore, Jack shouldn't be the villain. It's unreasonable. The reason for him becoming the villain is weak, and his actions after becoming the villain are also unreasonable. Jack suddenly has a change of heart and decides not to take revenge on the protagonist (fuck Megan ).

 

[Anteron]

If I were Jack, I would have used my drug powers to brainwash Megan long ago (now it's my turn to fuck your mother). I've already killed the protagonist; I need to erase all traces of his existence, including brainwashing everyone connected to him, making them forget him, and incidentally, brainwashing all the women to be mine.

In fact, the protagonist didn't die; he lay in the hospital for a long time before waking up. Jack could have used that time to brainwash everyone.

Jack suddenly discovers the protagonist is having sex with his mother, and then becomes the villain, but he doesn't retaliate against the protagonist. Logically speaking, shouldn't Jack be the one having sex with the protagonist's mother?

Therefore, Jack shouldn't be the villain. It's unreasonable. The reason for him becoming the villain is weak, and his actions after becoming the villain are also unreasonable. Jack suddenly has a change of heart and decides not to take revenge on the protagonist (fuck Megan ).

Possibly because that would be NTR and piss most people off.

 

[can't_relate]

I really and honestly agree with this 100%. But you need to take into consideration that in many AVNs, MC behaviour is appaling and as you said portraits an MC with an IQ in the negative. If it was not for Megan, nah-

Very true. Once you play any AVNs with good story and dialogue with a half decent MC, it's impossible to overlook this stuff. There are many of them, Chasing Sunsets from your signature, or any game by Lazy Monkey for example.

 

[can't_relate]

If I were Jack, I would have used my drug powers to brainwash Megan long ago (now it's my turn to fuck your mother). I've already killed the protagonist; I need to erase all traces of his existence, including brainwashing everyone connected to him, making them forget him, and incidentally, brainwashing all the women to be mine.

In fact, the protagonist didn't die; he lay in the hospital for a long time before waking up. Jack could have used that time to brainwash everyone.

Jack suddenly discovers the protagonist is having sex with his mother, and then becomes the villain, but he doesn't retaliate against the protagonist. Logically speaking, shouldn't Jack be the one having sex with the protagonist's mother?

Therefore, Jack shouldn't be the villain. It's unreasonable. The reason for him becoming the villain is weak, and his actions after becoming the villain are also unreasonable. Jack suddenly has a change of heart and decides not to take revenge on the protagonist (fuck Megan ).

All good points, I felt pretty scared because it seemed like the dev had gone the NTR way because that's the only logical conclusion of Jake turning villain, especially if having access to the pills.

TBH, I had chosen the sharing route because I'm a big fan of the MS fetish, even for characters other than the MC. Huge letdown for that path. Sucks, since it's hard to find wholesome sharing in games much.