Thank you for your comment. Criticism and suggestions are always very welcome. The step-family thing is not just a concern for Patrion which, theoretically, shouldn't take down content with other terms, as it doesn't break the law. We all know that this kind of content crosses a lot of lines, but it's always good to try to keep the number of problems with the law as low as possible. However, I will leave an option to choose these relationships in the next updates. All in all, I hope you enjoyed it and I look forward to seeing you in future updates.For those who hate the "stepfamily" thing, to avoid bothering the dev, just open the html file with notepad++, and edit text of "stepdaugher" to "daughter", as well "step-father" to "father.
And yes, I know it is the forum rules, but fuck that, step-family isn't incest, whatever you guys say. That tag desinforms people all the time.
Also a warning to the dev, if you chose step-family to avoid Patreon taking it down, it's no use, Patreon is on a hunt of that type of content. They even shut down landord and tennants content.
Thank you for your comment. Criticism and suggestions are always very welcome. The project is only just beginning, there will be a lot more gameplay elements later on. The game is a visual novel, so having options for paths to follow that have an impact on the story is the focus of the gameplay. But yes, there will be stats and skills to use in the near future of the game. I hope you'll stick with us.The models (porn stars) are very well selected. As for the gameplay, I wouldn't say it's good by any measure. It's not even PLAYABLE. (literally)
---from a salty Mac user.
Unfortunately, we can't please everyone. But I respect your opinion. I'd just like to say that the two pieces of information you've given about the story, which are spoilers by the way, are part of the background of the characters mentioned, which doesn't mean that they'll be recurring elements in the game.Stepdaughter in a gangbang and your wife cheated on you? yeah, nah...FUCK, NO!!
PS: Kagney's dialogue "I'll be fine when I'm dead" feels a bit awkward, having in mind that she killed herself.
step-cast and leah your stepdaugter in a gangbang its a ignore
Thanks so much for the heads up .Stepdaughter in a gangbang and your wife cheated on you? yeah, nah...FUCK, NO!!
PS: Kagney's dialogue "I'll be fine when I'm dead" feels a bit awkward, having in mind that she killed herself.
It doesn't break the law, but Patreon is still removing that content because they're dumb. They go along Mastercard and VISA's wishes, who think the kind of content your game shouldn't be supported by their platforms. Yes. it's stupid, but it's the way it is. I'm just warning you to prevent your page going down. I recommend you watching the following video to understand better the issue:Thank you for your comment. Criticism and suggestions are always very welcome. The step-family thing is not just a concern for Patrion which, theoretically, shouldn't take down content with other terms, as it doesn't break the law.
If you're using Google Chrome, you can right click the tab the game is in and choose the 'mute site' option in the dropdown menu. That will stop all sounds, not just the music, however.i always love a game that bombards my ears with crappy deafining music i cannot turn off
O.... cheers for the warning.sooo, is this an NTR game? seeing daughter fucking, your wife calling you useless or whatever?
also it seems to have videos (and probably pictures) with different naming - capitalization of the letters. which makes them not show on Linux (and i think on Mac) since those systems are sensitive to capitalization - for example Leah.jpeg is different than leah.jpeg which are both different than Leah.JPEG and so on
So linux and mac users will have to go through the loops of renaming all videos and such.
No! It's not an NTR game. These are isolated scenes that reflect the MC's broken past. Thanks for letting me know about the problems with capitalization of the letters. I'll fix that.sooo, is this an NTR game? seeing daughter fucking, your wife calling you useless or whatever?
also it seems to have videos (and probably pictures) with different naming - capitalization of the letters. which makes them not show on Linux (and i think on Mac) since those systems are sensitive to capitalization - for example Leah.jpeg is different than leah.jpeg which are both different than Leah.JPEG and so on
So linux and mac users will have to go through the loops of renaming all videos and such.
Thank you for your comment. I'm working on it. I hope you'll continue to appreciate the work!Guma Games Nice start.
I would add two options.
1) Possibility to change names.
2) Possibility to define relations, it can be easily done and you can still pretype what you expect it to be.
The text seems to work easily.
Thanks for the tip. I'll work on this too.Just want to comment that you'll probably get alot more eyes on this project if you can manage to host it online, so people don't have to download every update.
Thanks for the advices.In my opinion one of the many games on here that really struggle at the "have at least somewhat decent writing" hurdle. Characters give strong "talking like a chat bot" vibes, even though grammar and proofreading is technically mostly fine. Plot developments are just ... happening. Characters are walking porn tropes. Coupled with the most generic of generic porn game premises there isn't much there to get invested in.
I'd try a) reading some of the dialogue out loud. "Write better" is a difficult thing to achieve but even if your familiarity with English isn't too great it might help make some of it sound more natural. Otherwise gotta read, read, read. Nothing else will help much.
b) Perhaps try to put more focus/emphasis on whatever it is that's supposed to make this more interesting/unique/stand out and concentrate on that concept and what that specifically needs to develop into, well, something.
Anyway; good luck with the project.