Great points! All ties into one problem imo: no depth. It's 99% shallow scenes with half-sketched characters
I agree with the neighbor feeling off; he goes from creep to boyfriend in like 1 day.
Guy's got good qualities tho! I like him more now that he's not creeping outside the MC's windows lol
I agree with the neighbor feeling off; he goes from creep to boyfriend in like 1 day.
Guy's got good qualities tho! I like him more now that he's not creeping outside the MC's windows lol