VN Ren'Py Abandoned Simon says... [v0.1.3] [Fapulous Creations]

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Overview:
A Story about a neglected Mother and Wife who gets blackmailed by a Mysterious stranger into doing everything he says. She submits to make sure that her Daughter and Family stay safe... but will her relationship to the Stranger stay this way?​

Thread Updated: 2019-05-21
Release Date: 2019-05-21
Developer: Fapulous Creations

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Version: 0.1.3
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Claudio83]

Hoping in many cuckold/swingers scenes!

 

[88Michele88]

Where are the choise for refuse the simon's orders? I don't see anyfhink

 

[Fapulous Creations]

Where are the choise for refuse the simon's orders? I don't see anyfhink

You don't see them because there are none

The game is intended to be more like a Kinetic Novel without player choices so you can just lean back, relax and enjoy the story without fear of missing anything from other paths.

 

[88Michele88]

You don't see them because there are none

The game is intended to be more like a Kinetic Novel without player choices so you can just lean back, relax and enjoy the story without fear of missing anything from other paths.

I don't like it. Sorry man, If I see the choise for save the famel protagonist I give you my vote for this game, but in this case, no. In this case a Hate when I dont' have the chanes to help the girl to fight the bustard for run away or slap them, fight them. I don't wont play anymore of this game. Becaouse I very courios when the I see the oprions choise I can help her with. But Now no.

 

[Davox]

I don't like it. Sorry man, If I see the choise for save the famel protagonist I give you my vote for this game, but in this case, no. In this case a Hate when I dont' have the chanes to help the girl to fight the bustard for run away or slap them, fight them. I don't wont play anymore of this game. Becaouse I very courios when the I see the oprions choise I can help her with. But Now no.

Same here without any choice you may as well just watch real porn...

If it doesn't engage the user then both the renders and the writing need to be 5*. The example images aren't great and there are very few Devs who are good at writing let alone amazing. I understand why the Dev may want to make the work load easier by not using mods of klub17 but without them the images are going to look like they came out of decade old engine (which it is).

But then again its a first game and people need to start somewhere. I'd definitely recommend building some simple choices as that will at least teach you some of the pitfalls that can crop up. I'd recommend looking at https://f95zone.to/threads/the-lawyer-chapter-1-3-final-taboo.19528/ Its pretty much scripted but there are a few basic choices per chapter and you can see that the Dev gets better at building them from chapter to chapter.

 

[ltpika]

@88Michele88: Is it a female protagonist game? You could argue Simon is the character in control. Also, refusing might kill her daughter, I don't think there's anyway she'd risk refusing an order. Maybe she could beg for another option in some cases?


@Fapulous Creations

I like this game, it's a pretty hot scenario. I did notice her chin clipping into the husband, you might want to adjust that. I respect our decision to make it a kinetic novel. If there were choices, maybe you could choose from multiple options Simon could give her, like an exhibitionist option vs tongue kissing her daughter. That way the player decides based on their kinks. Are you sure you don't want to use the mods? You can get some pretty good results with them:

 

[Fapulous Creations]

@88Michele88: Is it a female protagonist game? You could argue Simon is the character in control. Also, refusing might kill her daughter, I don't think there's anyway she'd risk refusing an order. Maybe she could beg for another option in some cases?


@Fapulous Creations

I like this game, it's a pretty hot scenario. I did notice her chin clipping into the husband, you might want to adjust that. I respect our decision to make it a kinetic novel. If there were choices, maybe you could choose from multiple options Simon could give her, like an exhibitionist option vs tongue kissing her daughter. That way the player decides based on their kinks. Are you sure you don't want to use the mods? You can get some pretty good results with them:

I tagged the game with female protagonist because Maria (The Mother and Wife) is in the focus but since it is a choiceless kinetic novel it doesn't really matter.

In terms of modding.. i know what the game could look like but i decided against it. As @Davox said this is my first attempt in making a game... meaning it's my first time working with Ren'py, first time working with a graphics editor, first time using The Klub17 and also my first patreon. So i came to the conlusion that i have alot more freedom in realizing what i have in mind for scenes when i keep the graphics simple to combat the limitations of The Klub... (for example the undressing "animation" in the game that i made because The Klub does not have those).

I know i can not please everyone and that i take a risk in making a kinetic novel with bad graphics... even moreso by bringing a first release without much fappables because story and introduction takes time in my book. But i try my best to make it as good as it can be and i plan on bringing some good and kinky stuff soon. I just have so much fun making the game so far that as long as just one person likes it makes it worthwile for me.

 

[88Michele88]

@88Michele88: Is it a female protagonist game? You could argue Simon is the character in control. Also, refusing might kill her daughter, I don't think there's anyway she'd risk refusing an order. Maybe she could beg for another option in some cases?


@Fapulous Creations

I like this game, it's a pretty hot scenario. I did notice her chin clipping into the husband, you might want to adjust that. I respect our decision to make it a kinetic novel. If there were choices, maybe you could choose from multiple options Simon could give her, like an exhibitionist option vs tongue kissing her daughter. That way the player decides based on their kinks. Are you sure you don't want to use the mods? You can get some pretty good results with them: View attachment 307365

No Honey, i don't like don't have choise. All game with choise are kinetic novel. with out i go watch same porn movie or clip. I don't like games like that.

 

[ThisIsMe88]

Kinetic VNs shouldn't be labelled as games. Since they aren't games, they shouldn't be on a site that promotes games.

Even for a bland kinetic VN, the quality seems extremely low. Teach yourself some skills on Youtube.

We need good smut games, not more of the same uninspired blackmail copy/pasta crap that's been plaguing the site for ages now.

 

[ltpika]

Ouch, unusually harshness here. Check out other games, nobody's got a gun to your head.

also, there's hardly any rape games on here, I don't get the complaints. The tag system has been abused, some misguided fool who wants to look woke shows up in every thread, declares themselves triggered and slaps the rape tag on every game. "He looked at her ass! That's eye rape!" No joke, that's an argument someone tried to pull.

 

[ThisIsMe88]

Ouch, unusually harshness here.

I'm usually fine with first-attempt-of-the-author games, less so if they're already on patreon with hardly anything to show compared to the competition.

And before anyone goes all emotional on me, it's nothing personal against the author or people who think like you, mind you. Just wish we could start somewhat upping the standards of the games on the site (and elsewhere in general).

It would be refreshing for some authors to actually take this to heart, and stand out by doing their homework before going public. There are enough game design and story telling 101 courses all over the net for them to avoid coming up with the same low effort & low quality crap over and over again.

 

[bsjfan69]

How much content?

Edit: Well, I took the bullet. Practically no content and veeery overwritten. Lines and lines and lines of dialogue that don't really add much. Also of course the fact that it's not a game. But could be a decent visual novel in a year or two...

 

[Fapulous Creations]

How much content?

Edit: Well, I took the bullet. Practically no content and veeery overwritten. Lines and lines and lines of dialogue that don't really add much. Also of course the fact that it's not a game. But could be a decent visual novel in a year or two...

Since it is being debated if the game has any content atall right now... all i can give is an estimate about the length: On average i would say you have a little over an hour of playtime so far.

 

[88Michele88]

I let mom kill her douther, You kidding me? Mom who kill her own douther. In real live you let someone dice for you or you fight for your family tell all to the police? Think about it. If I born female I fight for search the true and see all spicamera in my house and I gone destried all them.

 

[Villi X]

I have never spammed the space bar more in a ren'py game than I have in this one.

 

[Kthulian]

Hey @Fapulous Creations there are harsh comments here, but there are also useful comments. I've tried it, is not exactly what I usually "play" and it shouldn't be, it should be what you want it to be, but you should have more content or fame before expecting people to fund you on patreon. My advice is to do this for fun and experience first, later on the road you will revaluate your options.
Cheers

 

[Fapulous Creations]

Hey @Fapulous Creations there are harsh comments here, but there are also useful comments. I've tried it, is not exactly what I usually "play" and it shouldn't be, it should be what you want it to be, but you should have more content or fame before expecting people to fund you on patreon. My advice is to do this for fun and experience first, later on the road you will revaluate your options.
Cheers

I don't mind any comment, harsh or not. I am totally new at all this but i guess people don't care about that and go all out with their criticism but thats okay. I value all of it and try to improve from it. I know my game is not the usual experience and it was never intended to be... but i also listen to feedback and maybe some things will change.

But the most important thing i want people to understand is: I don't do it for money or fame and i expect nothing from anyone, really.

I made a Patreon page because everyone i told about my game, asked what my patreon page is. So i thought i can very well make one to shut them up and use it to post updates and news and short messages about my progress... maybe even get in touch with the community, should one form... but i never planned this when i started making the game.

As i wrote in the dev notes in the OP i will not hide much behind Patron only content or delay a release for lesser Tiers or any other significant differences between Tiers. If someone wants to support me that's awesome... but i don't count on it and i definitely don't expect it... but nonetheless i made all the Patreon Tier shennanigans in advance so any potential supporter will get "something" atleast... the value of it is debatable of course.

And of course i do this for run primarely. To quote myself:

I just have so much fun making the game so far that as long as just one person likes it makes it worthwile for me.

I'm still waiting for the one person that likes my game so far, though

 

[Kthulian]

I don't mind any comment, harsh or not. I am totally new at all this but i guess people don't care about that and go all out with their criticism but thats okay. I value all of it and try to improve from it. I know my game is not the usual experience and it was never intended to be... but i also listen to feedback and maybe some things will change.

But the most important thing i want people to understand is: I don't do it for money or fame and i expect nothing from anyone, really.

I made a Patreon page because everyone i told about my game, asked what my patreon page is. So i thought i can very well make one to shut them up and use it to post updates and news and short messages about my progress... maybe even get in touch with the community, should one form... but i never planned this when i started making the game.

As i wrote in the dev notes in the OP i will not hide much behind Patron only content or delay a release for lesser Tiers or any other significant differences between Tiers. If someone wants to support me that's awesome... but i don't count on it and i definitely don't expect it... but nonetheless i made all the Patreon Tier shennanigans in advance so any potential supporter will get "something" atleast... the value of it is debatable of course.

And of course i do this for run primarely. To quote myself:


I'm still waiting for the one person that likes my game so far, though

well then, that's the right attitude! You do what you like, if more people like it even better., if not... Well at least you are having fun