VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sinful Delicacies [Ep.17] [Temptress Games]

[Enyos]

Interesting story so far and I look forward to seeing where it progresses later on. The MC's internal dialogue is that of a LOL-tastic college horn dog. I'd just recommend fixing the parts where he calls Mrs. Reigns -mom- on the censored version. Maybe add in her first name once in awhile to mix it up. Anyhow, the renders are very high quality and I wish you the best of luck!

 

[a1fox3]

Ok not a bug but wrong person, son says this and mom should say this one but it still shows son and then mom shows up

 

[Temptress_Games]

@Temptress_Games I havent played your game yet but the renders look good and the story sounds interesting to me. You seem like you're taking suggestions which is good so I'll just say this. Your images are all uncompressed .PNGs and the game is way too large for how much content there currently is. I strongly suggest you embrace the wonderful world of .webp

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Thank you for the kind words. And I really appreciate your feedback and suggestions. I'm looking into webpy. Thanks again for all your help.

 

[Trasher2018]

Interesting story so far and I look forward to seeing where it progresses later on. The MC's internal dialogue is that of a LOL-tastic college horn dog. I'd just recommend fixing the parts where he calls Mrs. Reigns, mom on the censored version. Maybe add in her first name once in awhile to mix it up. Anyhow, the renders are very high quality and I wish you the best of luck!

For my liking its to over the top. That bike in the house, the jump without parachute (all dead and there is no reason for it) and than all what happens next. The reaction is so unnatural and off ... they act like they are on some hard drugs. But maybe thats just me and my dislike for this kind of crazy stuff. I am more to grounded stories without magic, mindreading and other wires stuff.

For a first release the amount of content is quite good and the renders are mixed from great to solid (the forest and bonfire stuff looks not so good sometimes).

Will keep an eye on it.

 

[Temptress_Games]

Ok not a bug but wrong person, son says this View attachment 161662 and mom should say this one but it still shows son View attachment 161663 and then mom shows up View attachment 161664

Thanks for pointing that out. Correcting that. I really appreciate you guys' feedback. Helps me make the game better.

 

[Enyos]

Ok not a bug but wrong person, son says this View attachment 161662 and mom should say this one but it still shows son View attachment 161663 and then mom shows up View attachment 161664

There's a few spots like that. Just minor misspellings in the script.rpy.

 

[KeyvinCarter]

Renders look fantastic. Downloading...

 

[八雲紫]

nice game!!!

 

[Temptress_Games]

There's a few spots like that. Just minor misspellings in the script.rpy.

Thanks for pointing that out. Will correct them.

 

[Enyos]

For my liking its to over the top. That bike in the house, the jump without parachute (all dead and there is no reason for it) and than all what happens next. The reaction is so unnatural and off ... they act like they are on some hard drugs. But maybe thats just me and my dislike for this kind of crazy stuff. I am more to grounded stories without magic, mindreading and other wires stuff.

It certainly is over the top, just like the internal dialogue, but I just take it like many of the action movies anymore. It's not uncommon in sci-fi action, even though it is totally unbelievable. But a mystery is afoot, and I'm still interested to see how far it goes.

 

[Temptress_Games]

Interesting story so far and I look forward to seeing where it progresses later on. The MC's internal dialogue is that of a LOL-tastic college horn dog. I'd just recommend fixing the parts where he calls Mrs. Reigns -mom- on the censored version. Maybe add in her first name once in awhile to mix it up. Anyhow, the renders are very high quality and I wish you the best of luck!

THANK YOU SO MUCH

 

[JohnJG]

The renders are very good indeed.

A little sprinkling of humor here and there is also always good.

 

[Temptress_Games]

The renders are very good indeed.

A little sprinkling of humor here and there is always good.

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[giraffe69]

Just played the game it is good very nice renders can't wait to see future updates.
(How can people rate a game that just got outx'D)

 

[Temptress_Games]

Just played the game it is good very nice renders can't wait to see future updates.
(How can people rate a game that just got outx'D)

Glad you liked it. Thanks.

 

[Eerie Entity]

Can't have to much kissing in any game and getting the sister pregnant is right up my alley.:heartcoveredeyes:

(Only in games.)

I can definitely get behind that, haha, I'm not opposed to getting mom pregnant either, haha nor aunt or cousin xD

 

[_Asstroyer_]

Just went trough it. I liked the story. It has a good flow, heavy on metaphors in some sentences but nothing too bad. Also has 3 mysteries to unveil right off the bat. The renders are nice. There are some sentences being said by the wrong character. Nothing major to fix

 

[Desuro]

I hope one of the thrills could be killing someone in a very brutal way pulling nails off, flaying, choping legs and arms ? no ? ok im gonna hide now and lurk in the darkness of the site... but in all seriousness screens look very nice and story overview sounds intriguing will defo check it out at a later version

 

[Temptress_Games]

Just went trough it. I liked the story. It has a good flow, heavy on metaphors in some sentences but nothing too bad. Also has 3 mysteries to unveil right off the bat. The renders are nice. There are some sentences being said by the wrong character. Nothing major to fix

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

 

[Alextsai]

this sounds very promising, will check out for sure