VN Ren'Py Sinful Delicacies [Ep.18] [Temptress Games]

[Quaszog55]

Damn, so i just watched the second photo session with Iris and here the writing completely collapsed. The pacing is just plain wrong and in overdrive.
MC got little-sis from non-exposed topless shots in take one to topless deep throat, In take two. She takes it like a champ, went docile and accepts her new status with a simple 'okay'. This transformation from innocent sister to mindless cum-dumpster was just vomited on the viewer. I have seen porn do better.

The MC just sexually harasses all the female characters in their sleep. He can't do anything directly... ...This makes him feel like a loser, helpless.

Yeah, this is one of the dumbest MCs I've seen.

The guy who survived on a mercenary invested island, mutated into a compulsive nymphomaniac, who abandons human thought for orgasm at every moment. He doesn't even try to solve basic threats to his life or even plan ONE day ahead.

To top it off, the Writer has no desire to develop the double blackmailing plot and just created a vicious stalker-celebrity. As evidence: MC (Writer) forgot Super-bowl plot happenig at one day. Last but not least Iris' personality and character development was sacrificed for spontaneous deep throat. No pacing, no internal logic, no pay off.
Maybe, change story telling to episodic sex stories with no complex, oppressing, overall mystery story arc (Lester Dent style), that does not require to plan (pre-write) the story ahead?

 

[lolcop101]

Damn, so i just watched the second photo session with Iris and here the writing completely collapsed. The pacing is just plain wrong and in overdrive.
MC got little-sis from non-exposed topless shots in take one to topless deep throat, In take two. She takes it like a champ, went docile and accepts her new status with a simple 'okay'. This transformation from innocent sister to mindless cum-dumpster was just vomited on the viewer. I have seen porn do better.



The guy who survived on a mercenary invested island, mutated into a compulsive nymphomaniac, who abandons human thought for orgasm at every moment. He doesn't even try to solve basic threats to his life or even plan ONE day ahead.

To top it off, the Writer has no desire to develop the double blackmailing plot and just created a vicious stalker-celebrity. As evidence: MC (Writer) forgot Super-bowl plot happenig at one day. Last but not least Iris' personality and character development was sacrificed for spontaneous deep throat. No pacing, no internal logic, no pay off.
Maybe, change story telling to episodic sex stories with no complex, oppressing, overall mystery story arc (Lester Dent style), that does not require to plan (pre-write) the story ahead?

Its funny that the biggest complaint about this game has been the snails pace at which sexual interactions have progressed with the mom, and now people are complaining that things are moving too quickly with Iris.

I actually agree; not just on Iris, but also the last mom scene still felt rushed (literally a few mins before the scene she was saying it would NEVER happen). But dev is clealy trying to address the complaints he's getting...

 

[RedSignal]

So many unsatisfied 12-13 year old kids spamming unnecessary negative reviews, I would not be surprised if the Temptress Games abandon this game. Anyway, if you do not like this game, then fukin move on guys. Don't ruin the game for others.

 

[pantera1050]

To say it is the "worst game on the site" is too much. I have played many games here on the WORST website that I could even mention and he close to many is GREAT, the game has its high and low points like any other, which one does not ? I found some of it a bit hurried myself but I didn't care much, however I'm really enjoying the game. I hope Dev continues because I'm looking forward to Episode 11 !!!

 

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[dian091]

To say it is the "worst game on the site" is too much. I have played many games here on the WORST website that I could even mention and he close to many he is GREAT, the game has its high and low points like any other, which one does not ? I found some of it a bit hurried myself but I didn't care much, however I'm really enjoying the game. I hope Dev continues because I'm looking forward to Episode 11 !!!

12 and 13 would be nice after 11 too.

 

[Naxos]

One of the worst games on this site.

Pointless single option menu's throughout the game, almost makes you right.

No comment on the MC yet, but man I really dislike single menu options. What's the point if there is only one option.

 

[UV8]

Can someone please share episode 10 link with episode 9 saves that will work for real. Thanks

 

[RobKrauzer]

Al comenzar parece interesante, pero después de unos capítulos se vuelve lineal, aburrido y sin elecciones que cambien la historia.

 

[Juidas]

What happened to developer did he abandoned the game
Buz there is no news sinces he updated the game

It was updated a few weeks ago!!!! Not a great update imo, but it was updated.

 

[libertypics]

I see the tags got updated, how far down the big R rabbit hole does this game go now? We talking "I Spit On Your Grave" or we talking "She said no and he barely fingered her but since that's technically rape we're going to treat it like a Game of Thrones Ramsey episode". If it's less than a 8.5 of 10 on the offended people scale I'm saving my bandwidth and money.

 

[Ariostebaldo]

I see the tags got updated, how far down the big R rabbit hole does this game go now? We talking "I Spit On Your Grave" or we talking "She said no and he barely fingered her but since that's technically rape we're going to treat it like a Game of Thrones Ramsey episode". If it's less than a 8.5 of 10 on the offended people scale I'm saving my bandwidth and money.

it's like "she was passed out drunk"

 

[XerxesBlack]

Any idea when the max release will be released?

The compressed version, tho I don't mind it, is a bit degraded for my taste.

 

[markblazes]

This game doesn't feel like a game, it feels like a long ass cutscene from Metal Gear Solid 4.

 

[diegao]

For me the story was going well until the scene of the mini kidnapping of the MC and it turns out that he is going to be the one who is going to destroy his father's organization? really? nahhh I didn't like that at all.
They could come up with something better from this kidnapping. but seriously, he's going to destroy practically everything the family has so far? This MC is not going to suffer at all

 

[Dsmith724]

To say it is the "worst game on the site" is too much. I have played many games here on the WORST website that I could even mention and he close to many is GREAT, the game has its high and low points like any other, which one does not ? I found some of it a bit hurried myself but I didn't care much, however I'm really enjoying the game. I hope Dev continues because I'm looking forward to Episode 11 !!!

It may not be the worst game but its on the list. It is almost unplayable with all of the grammatical errors as well as all of the bugs. And what person actually has the type of inner monologues that the MC has, can you say redundant?

 

[Quaszog55]

Its funny that the biggest complaint about this game has been the snails pace at which sexual interactions have progressed with the mom, and now people are complaining that things are moving too quickly with Iris.

It may not be the worst game but its on the list. ... ...And what person actually has the type of inner monologues that the MC has... ....?

Given that the mom is kind of the 'eye-candy' i cut her plot a lot of slack. It is the remaining plot threads that break my immersion. Renders of the game are pretty good but the writing (narrative and dialogue) need a helping hand.

 

[hzjujk]

I liked the game because of the mother. She really is a sex bomb. I also have no problem with the story
and the main character getting more and more idiotic. This is an erotic game and not a Tolstoy novel.
The game is supposed to entertain me and satisfy my perversions. But since the developer raped at least
three women in the game (while drinking and sleeping) I gave up on the game. I don't want to be like this,
not in real life, not in the game!

 

[TempTitle]

I've yet to get off the island and shit is bizarre. On the one hand, not counting the required multi-choice dialogue breaks, only like half the choices made affect anything (and by that I mean the other option tends to be "game over" outright rather than something that will factor in later).

On the other hand, there's a number of flip-flops between Mrs. Reigns referring to herself in the third person (as "Mrs. Reigns" as opposed to, say, whatever her first name is, or 'your caretaker' or whatever), the MC slipping up and referring to her as 'mom' and then 2 minutes later corrects himself to mom's BEST FRIEND, or one of the two shades-wearing goons referring to each other as 'mate' and only 'mate' (I mean I don't think we were expecting Shakespeare or a lot of character depth to red shirts, but wow), or immediately adopting a stranger because they offered to be something like a housemaid once you guys finally get out of the place... what.

Like, dialogue generally had odd spots besides this stuff (is the ALL CAPS dialogue supposed to be yelling or not? If not, what the fuck is it supposed to mean), but also, MC switching into supernaturally-horny mode when they got to the island was, like... I dunno, I guess that could maybe be explained away as brain damage from whatever landing they could pull from diving out with no parachute? Like, finally near something akin to action, he offers to sleep on the floor, then goes full-throttle on the pestering until even the offer to be on the bed got yeeted off the table.

Ah, also, there's this weird ish going on with their inner monologues where "sometimes" it's in parenthesis and "sometimes" it isn't, making it a bit of a tit to figure when someone's announcing things out loud and when they aren't.

Yeezus, this is an idiot. And from the last page or so of comments, I get the impression that manages to get worse.

 

[Qixoni]

When is chapter 11 coming out? Is there a release schedule?
The only thing that bothers me in this game is the lack of choice for our actions, this game is more like a book telling a story than a VN with choices. Still, Mom is incredible and worth the time reading this game