VN Ren'Py Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch. 2.5] [Ruykiru]

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Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch. 1.4] [Ruykiru]

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[Edgar Anal Poe]

Last two days in game have been a real boiling point. Hope the steam finds a way out quickly for the sake of characters and readers. Like after every previous day - I want more. It's already a ritual for me to drop everything when I see a new version.

 

[sisco1986]

the brother acting like a pussy is getting old really fast

 

[Ruykiru]

Also in your synopsis you stated that they already had a certain attraction between them, not even if they succumb or resist the forbidden relationship. This is not the case, therefore you should have the player choose whether they succumb or not

But that IS the case. It's the entire premise of Chapter 1 and clearly mentioned in the game multiple times.

Another thing, if you are on vacation, the duration has not been specified, if at least it is two weeks, you have already burned almost a week or it is a month. Or they are end of year vacations that generally last two months in some countries XD

It's the start of June, it's said at the beginning. Also if you look at the 1st phone conversation you can see the date and also see each day on the replay gallery. I'm adding more mentions next update though.

 

[Ruykiru]

the brother acting like a pussy is getting old really fast

My man, give me a chance It's not even been two months since I released the game and I'm almost done with CH1.
Plus, I don't want him to be a mindless perv and I'm clearly establishing their personalities through the conversations and actions. If they slowly get corrupted and change through the game that just makes the payoff much more interesting, don't you think?

 

[iraklis1908]

Ruykiru thank you very much for the auto-forward function. Keep up the good work.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

My man, give me a chance It's not even been two months since I released the game and I'm almost done with CH1.
Plus, I don't want him to be a mindless perv and I'm clearly establishing their personalities through the conversations and actions. If they slowly get corrupted and change through the game that just makes the payoff much more interesting, don't you think?

Continue as best you can. Yes, and slow progress is rare in the game, but this is the hottest thing in the game. in a couple of months, you've done a great job

 

[FatGiant]

I'm right now on the first morning, and, I have to say, if the writing keeps being this good, we have a winner.

The graphics, bah, could be better, but, that's not here nor there, because there's a story to read and the reading is way above what we find around here.

So far, mate, Cheers.

 

[Ruykiru]

I'm right now on the first morning, and, I have to say, if the writing keeps being this good, we have a winner.

The graphics, bah, could be better, but, that's not here nor there, because there's a story to read and the reading is way above what we find around here.

So far, mate, Cheers.

Thank you so much, I love these comments! That's precisely what I'm trying to do and I also pay a lot of attention to the sound/music...

Tell me your final thoughts when you finish 1.4 and maybe write a review too

And btw if you wanna check the progress in graphics since I did my first render for the game like 2-3 months ago, yeah... (not the same scene but you get the point)

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[FatGiant]

Thank you so much, I love these comments! Tat's precisely what I'm trying to do and I also pay a lot of attention to the sound/music...

Tell me your final thoughts when you finish 1.4 and maybe write a review too

And btw if you wanna check the progress in graphics since I did my first render for the game like 2-3 months ago, yeah... (not the same scene but you get the point)

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I'm gonna be brutally honest. Forgive me.

If the story is good (as this one seems to be), if the writing is as good as what I've seen, mate, you could have made it with stick figures on Paint and I would still enjoy it. I have a very good imagination and am able to supply the images if they are missing.

Yes, nice graphics are nice... but truly, I am here for the story, in a 90%-10% ratio. So, do what you feel is right, but, for me, keep the story coming...

Peace

 

[korochan48]

My man, give me a chance It's not even been two months since I released the game and I'm almost done with CH1.
Plus, I don't want him to be a mindless perv and I'm clearly establishing their personalities through the conversations and actions. If they slowly get corrupted and change through the game that just makes the payoff much more interesting, don't you think?

Dont mind the haters It's okay to have dynamic characters the guy being shy and the sister being forward is a very good dynamic. Also I like that they feel guilt since they are siblings. Do what you envision about the story. Saying the guy/MC is a pussy is not a valid criticism it just their preference which doesnt matter. A confident/chad guy only works in harem as he is very confident romance a lot of girls. The shy type works really well with single romance cause a shy guy could build confidence and courage later on the story.

 

[Sossse]

I love a slow burn but this dood seriously needs to grow a pair and go for what he desires. Its starting to get annoying watching him throw a tandrum everytime like a 5 year old.

that is his TWIN SISTER, and he is the more responcible/adult of the siblings. ofc he is holding back and tries to be reasonable. thatßs what makes this story great, they actually have to confront the taboo of what they are about to do insteat if just glossingover it. the auther makes a damn good job of delivering this story

 

[korochan48]

It is easy being tough/chad in the internet when in reality they can't even initiate a normal conversation with a girl.

 

[Egris]

what is the MC doing, just fuck her

 

[JKRollin']

All the ones who shouting 'Mc is a sissy','he needs to grow a pair','just fuck the SIS already'..etc. y'all know that it's going to happen sooner than later, it's just a one update at a time of teasing/build up period are contains mostly in these updates.it's just frustrating i know it as well.BUT dev is doing a good job at the same time he's giving"INCEST" new view point for VNs from the beginning meaningless family fuckfest...Dev is gonna do a intimate,lovey dovey relationship between Mc,sis and mom so it's not gonna be just SEX, there is gonna be a meaning behind so it needs buildup...hope y'all understand and have a good life..looking forward to upcoming updates

 

[myZone]

Why not bring the dad in the picture to make it more engaging....

 

[Ruykiru]

Apparently the MC just sucks at being a perverted MC, which being a pervert without moral hangups about incest, ages or whatever tend to be the best MC's, especially in incest AVNs.

That's your problem: you came here expecting a perverted male MC and this is not it. And the female MC is maybe a bit like that, but not to that absurd level that only works in harems because I don't want to make that. You found something different and now you are the one throwing a tantrum in the comments instead of ignoring it

And by the way, that take about incest AVNs is like completely the opposite of my view and what I'm trying to create. In my opinion, the best incest VNs have a slow or semi-realistic burn with hiccups and some struggle along the way. Otherwise, incest and family names are just meaningless labels and there's no point in having that taboo play a part in the story, so it might just be normal porn with roleplay at that point.

There's sooo many offenders of that problem so that's why I'm trying to create something that is the opposite of that garbage trend that completely ruins the incest genre.

 

[Black Moon]

Looking at the discussion and pictures, the game looks promising! maybe this will be my first game where the main character will be a male/female and others in the romance/harem style.... I'll keep an eye on it Ruykiru

Very good, while you're waiting for 0.8.

 

[Rozhok]

It always amazes me to see people that don't like a game, make 6 different posts to be negative and cause drama.

We get it, you don't like the game. Please vacate the thread and move on. thanks. There is no point to keep replying and add more negativity.

This is not an invite to reply and explain why you don't like the game, thank you.

 

[Walter Victor]

That's your problem: you came here expecting a pervert male MC and this is not it. And the female MC is maybe a bit like that, but not to that absurd level that only works in harems because I don't want to make that. You found something different and now you are the one throwing a tantrum in the comments instead of ignoring it

And by the way, that take about incest AVNs is like completely the opposite of my view and what I'm trying to create. In my opinion, the best incest VNs have a slow or semi-realistic burn with hiccups and some struggle along the way. Otherwise, incest and family names are just meaningless labels and there's no point in having that taboo play a part in the story, so it might just be normal porn with roleplay at that point.

There's sooo many offenders of that problem so that's why I'm trying to create something that is the opposite of that garbage trend that completely ruins the incest genre.

That guy just wants you to write his life story instead of your game.

I suggest putting him on 'Ignore' like I just did. I now have quite an extensive list; it makes my life much less stressful.