not in my opinion also i did make my first comment before playing the game after i have to be honest the game is ass not good animations and art style with the models is very bad was very disappointed had to stop playing and find something else
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Dude, wtf???? The amount of red flags... It's almost dangerous, what Erik represents it's balance, a key point to this specific story, You would not Even understand because You have no brain capacity at all, your whole coment was like a gorilla talking for the first time, a very sick gorilla...Being pathetic, scaredy and undecisive loser is a crime to yourself and to your gender in general. I saw that you try very hard to push your own look about your MC being normal but "just different" from other men, but in reality he is just a horrible failure of a male and nothing else. Its just painful to watch his behavior and reactions. I'm not saying that I myself a representative of the ultimate alpha pack, just an average dude like a lot of others, but I lived life and have enough life experience to tell you that I wouldn't even shake hands with your MC IRL if I knew how much of a pushover beta stands in front of me.
MC's sister, on the other hand, is straightforward and decisive, knows what she wants, and acts on her desires, while MC, in comparison, is just literally empty space without any kind of backbone on his back. What will happen if shit hits the fan in this family? Your MC will definitely not be able to solve serious problems, protect family, or rebuild (metaphorically) anything, and just be sitting in the corner dying from hyperventilationIn reality he would never be able to make average girl's panties wet, only his own) That's why a lot of people mentioned your male character in a negative way.
Sure, you can continue to answer every negative message about your MC with your defenses and justifications of MC's every breath, but if the average man where I live would be like MC, then Russians would destroy my country as they claimed in the beggining - in a few days.
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To throw in my two cents, yes I think brother is a bit too indecisive sometimes and yet it fits with the general approach of the genre Ruykiru is going for in this game. If it’s too much for you don’t play. Funny how guys who’re all about being a manly dude and shit are in fact little b*tches who can’t even stop playing a game they don’t like.
Anyway we get compensation cause the sister is incredibly perverted and it’s hot as fuck.
Anyway we get compensation cause the sister is incredibly perverted and it’s hot as fuck.
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You don’t have any women lmao nobody who’s not a virgin says sentences like « I prefer my women smooth »
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Stop complaining like a little bitch and quit playing the game alreadyBeing pathetic, scaredy and undecisive loser is a crime to yourself and to your gender in general. I saw that you try very hard to push your own look about your MC being normal but "just different" from other men, but in reality he is just a horrible failure of a male and nothing else. Its just painful to watch his behavior and reactions. I'm not saying that I myself a representative of the ultimate alpha pack, just an average dude like a lot of others, but I lived life and have enough life experience to tell you that I wouldn't even shake hands with your MC IRL if I knew how much of a pushover beta stands in front of me.
MC's sister, on the other hand, is straightforward and decisive, knows what she wants, and acts on her desires, while MC, in comparison, is just literally empty space without any kind of backbone on his back. What will happen if shit hits the fan in this family? Your MC will definitely not be able to solve serious problems, protect family, or rebuild (metaphorically) anything, and just be sitting in the corner dying from hyperventilation
Sure, you can continue to answer every negative message about your MC with your defenses and justifications of MC's every breath, but if the average man where I live would be like MC, then Russians would destroy my country as they claimed in the beggining - in a few days.
Entirely? I was still learning back then but do you think it's really that boring?
There's no way I'd consider doing what you ask, because CH1 is very important for the plot, but if you have any suggestions do tell me cause I'm gonna be reworking a few things (mainly some renders and less narrator).
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Hey Ruykiru! Congrats on the wonderful game. IMO don’t sweat reworking things too much better finish it and move on to an even better game with the lessons learned from this one.
Some of the things that really stand out IMO are:
-Pervert fmc (we need to see more of perverted girls instead of blushing virgins)
- You absolutely nailed the petite body ( I usually like thick girls better in games but sister is perfect)
-Great tension.
-Great and unique approach to incest
-Focus on facial expressions
-Focus on female pleasure
Generally I think what makes
a porn game good is succeeding in creating hot situations. It sounds simple but yet it’s way harder than it seems. IMO if you can do this then average renders don’t even matter.
And this is why a good erotic story/game should have sex at its core. Take Pale Carnations for instance: yes there are other themesbut corruption and sex are central.
I can’t get behind a game having a main story that isn’t sex (and there are actually plenty of these on this site). Telling a proper adventure or detective story that doesn’t have sex at its core for instance imo can only be done at the expense of sexual tension. It’s like trying to tell two stories at the same time.
Anyway your game is good because it succeeds in building sexy situations and its first and foremost a game about sex.
The main negative thing I would say is the narrator. I feel the game is a little too heavy on narration and the narration too often repeats and paraphrases what the characters have already said/thought or shown by their actions. I often end up skipping whole chunks of it and while I do so I know I’m mostly not missing anything important story wise.
Anyway that’s obviously only my opinion so take it with a grain of salt and keep up the excellent work !!!
Some of the things that really stand out IMO are:
-Pervert fmc (we need to see more of perverted girls instead of blushing virgins)
- You absolutely nailed the petite body ( I usually like thick girls better in games but sister is perfect)
-Great tension.
-Great and unique approach to incest
-Focus on facial expressions
-Focus on female pleasure
Generally I think what makes
a porn game good is succeeding in creating hot situations. It sounds simple but yet it’s way harder than it seems. IMO if you can do this then average renders don’t even matter.
And this is why a good erotic story/game should have sex at its core. Take Pale Carnations for instance: yes there are other themesbut corruption and sex are central.
I can’t get behind a game having a main story that isn’t sex (and there are actually plenty of these on this site). Telling a proper adventure or detective story that doesn’t have sex at its core for instance imo can only be done at the expense of sexual tension. It’s like trying to tell two stories at the same time.
Anyway your game is good because it succeeds in building sexy situations and its first and foremost a game about sex.
The main negative thing I would say is the narrator. I feel the game is a little too heavy on narration and the narration too often repeats and paraphrases what the characters have already said/thought or shown by their actions. I often end up skipping whole chunks of it and while I do so I know I’m mostly not missing anything important story wise.
Anyway that’s obviously only my opinion so take it with a grain of salt and keep up the excellent work !!!
erik, i beg you a pardon, i wasn't familiar with your game
Thanks, do update the review if you want
I toned it down in chapter 1 in 2.6 because it was too verbose yes, do you think it's still too much? (Ignoring the first day, which kinda needs the narrator to explain the backstory)
Any love for short-haired Lyna? I think she's getting a haircut
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With those glasses she looks more and more like her mom.Any love for short-haired Lyna? I think she's getting a haircut
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Great update, just finished it.
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Would like to see us able to rename the three main characters. Make it more personal of a story. I do not have any sisters and well, my mom was nearing 40 when she had me, so by the time I was a teen, even if I were someone who would have incestuous thoughts, to be honest, my mom was well past her prime by then. I still loved her but I never once has a sexy thought about her. But this is "fantasy", so in my fantasy, I want to name my "sister" after a "cousin" I found attractive and her mom, who was not blood related to me but was hot and I might have yanked it to her a time or two, back then.
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Perfect! We're on the same wavelength! More renders less narration! What you want people to do is slow down and read the damn thing, and the way you do that is a "knuckle to the brain WTF" moment!
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Bro you are moaning and bitching on a site that is centred around sharing and discussing erotic novels that others create. Not quite manly, because "real man" would not touch these "degenerate soy boy" things and would rather just stick to being the alpha male who fucks real women instead left and right every day, don't you think? Yet here you have been, drinking soy milk with all of us ever since July 12th 2018 when you registered here, and you're still here over half a decade later. "Big talk but no action" kinda vibes.Red flags?) For losers like you, maybe) Your Eric is a mistake of life and natural radar indicating other incredible losers in everyone who didn't see in MC's personality how pathetic he truly is. You can bitch at me all you want, but I already know that you are the same little spineless loser as MC, and OH MY GOSH, LOOK AT THE TIME! You forgot to drink your daily dose of soy milk, massage your prostate for sissy activitites and read a few articles like "Showing feelings is good; modern man should cry more and even in public to ruin bigot stereotypes"
Hé bonjour
j'avoue que pour le moment de ce que je vois de ce jeu c'est génial
c'est bien mis en scène la démarche est vraiment bonne et bien pensée
continue comme ça ça change des protagonistes masculins qui n'ont qu'une bite au lieu d'un cerveau
j'adore et pour une fois la soeur n'est pas quelque chose avec des seins déformés et anormaux
Vraiment mec continue ne te laisse pas influencer
merci j'attends la suite avec impatience
j'avoue que pour le moment de ce que je vois de ce jeu c'est génial
c'est bien mis en scène la démarche est vraiment bonne et bien pensée
continue comme ça ça change des protagonistes masculins qui n'ont qu'une bite au lieu d'un cerveau
j'adore et pour une fois la soeur n'est pas quelque chose avec des seins déformés et anormaux
Vraiment mec continue ne te laisse pas influencer
merci j'attends la suite avec impatience