MrLKX

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I would say 18 year Becca... In her rebellious stage...
Makes the most sense. Who else would Shannon let shower in what I think is her house? The woman was already incredibly cranky and resentful because she thought her second husband had a child with Jess, her hated enemy - who has been dead for several years at this point. I very much doubt that she would allow a woman who is not part of the immediate household to shower and walk around with just a towel virtually under Frank's nose, however submissive his personality may be. She also has no siblings that we know of and Frank does have an older sister (I think she was older), but I doubt we would get such views from her and there is no evidence to suggest that either.
 

rudy007

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Makes the most sense. Who else would Shannon let shower in what I think is her house? The woman was already incredibly cranky and resentful because she thought her second husband had a child with Jess, her hated enemy - who has been dead for several years at this point. I very much doubt that she would allow a woman who is not part of the immediate household to shower and walk around with just a towel virtually under Frank's nose, however submissive his personality may be. She also has no siblings that we know of and Frank does have an older sister (I think she was older), but I doubt we would get such views from her and there is no evidence to suggest that either.
Agree, even MC's sister wouldn't be allowed to walk around house with only towel. And yes, his sister is older and her name is Crystal, I think. She was cute too..
 
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BigBlob69

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I shouldn't be writing this, but I need some catharsis. I'm trying to get to the end of the current build so I can give this a fair review, but what started out an enjoyable process has become so agonising. I'm so fed up with the mc constantly doubting every little thing. Everything is a back and forth. He's constantly pretending he doesn't want something, then admitting he does, then taking it back. And apologising when it's unnecessary. I thought this was going to be dropped once he started fucking his daughters, but no, it persists, hell I'd say it gets worse. In real life he'd probably be diagnosed with some anxiety disorder. It's just so painful to get through even a single conversation that I keep putting the game down, which means it's sitting on my computer for even longer.

Doesn't help that the relationship between 2 of his daughters feels very NTR like to me. There's no point in debating the semantics of that controversial term; the point is just that it gives me the same feelings of jealousy and disgust, albeit to a much lesser extent than if it were a man. I'm normally fine with girl-on-girl action in male protagonist AVNs, but this game goes out of its way to rub in your face just how great and sexual their relationship is. Hell, the mc encourages one of them to make it an official girlfriend-girlfriend thing.

I know almost everyone who views this post is going to be a fan of this game, which is why I'd rather just write a review, but I need to do it to blow off some steam. If you are a fan; if you don't find the mc annoying; if you don't mind the daughters' relationship; that's great, and I'm glad for you. It's all a subjective experience.
 
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I shouldn't be writing this, but I need some catharsis. I'm trying to get to the end of the current build so I can give this a fair review, but what started out an enjoyable process has become so agonising. I'm so fed up with the mc constantly doubting every little thing. Everything is a back and forth. He's constantly pretending he doesn't want something, then admitting he does, then taking it back. And apologising when it's unnecessary. I thought this was going to be dropped once he started fucking his daughters, but no, it persists, hell I'd say it gets worse. In real life he'd probably be diagnosed with some anxiety disorder. It's just so painful to get through even a single conversation that I keep putting the game down, which means it's sitting on my computer for even longer.

Doesn't help that the relationship between 2 of his daughters feels very NTR like to me. There's no point in debating the semantics of that controversial term; the point is just that it gives me the same feelings of jealousy and disgust, albeit to a much lesser extent than if it were a man. I'm normally fine with girl-on-girl action in male protagonist AVNs, but this game goes out of its way to rub in your face just how great and sexual their relationship is. Hell, the mc encourages one of them to make it an official girlfriend-girlfriend thing.

I know almost everyone who views this post is going to be a fan of this game, which is why I'd rather just write a review, but I need to do it to blow off some steam. If you are a fan; if you don't find the mc annoying; if you don't mind the daughters' relationship; that's great, and I'm glad for you. It's all a subjective experience.
I understand and feel your frustration with the MC. As great as the story is the MC is a palpable drag on the narrative. It is a common complaint that has been voiced many times over. It would be refreshing to see the MC finally embrace his true feelings and act like a man. The problem is he is a well meaning Beta... His Ex. lording over him for years. As much as we all want to see him grow a pair I don't see the writers coming to his aid anytime soon.
 

Elduriel

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I understand and feel your frustration with the MC. As great as the story is the MC is a palpable drag on the narrative. It is a common complaint that has been voiced many times over. It would be refreshing to see the MC finally embrace his true feelings and act like a man. The problem is he is a well meaning Beta... His Ex. lording over him for years. As much as we all want to see him grow a pair I don't see the writers coming to his aid anytime soon.
eh, this may have been true a few updates back, but in the last couple ones he is way more comfortable with everything that's going on. He doesn't have any hangups with Lillly or Becca or Mei any more. Just with Abigail, which is understandable.
 

ThorinKing

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I understand and feel your frustration with the MC. As great as the story is the MC is a palpable drag on the narrative. It is a common complaint that has been voiced many times over. It would be refreshing to see the MC finally embrace his true feelings and act like a man. The problem is he is a well meaning Beta... His Ex. lording over him for years. As much as we all want to see him grow a pair I don't see the writers coming to his aid anytime soon.
For you and all those that kvetch about the inner dialogue: how long would it take you to convince yourself it's okay to fuck your stepdaughters? Would you give pause at all, would you need a minute to get your head around the concept, or would you not do it at all?

This is a porn VN, so the MC is going to do it - having a bit of struggle over the first month or so (remember, this hasn't been years within the VN) is a reasonable human reaction. Any human that didn't have hesitation is a pretty trash person.
 

witzulu

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I shouldn't be writing this, but I need some catharsis. I'm trying to get to the end of the current build so I can give this a fair review, but what started out an enjoyable process has become so agonising. I'm so fed up with the mc constantly doubting every little thing. Everything is a back and forth. He's constantly pretending he doesn't want something, then admitting he does, then taking it back. And apologising when it's unnecessary. I thought this was going to be dropped once he started fucking his daughters, but no, it persists, hell I'd say it gets worse. In real life he'd probably be diagnosed with some anxiety disorder. It's just so painful to get through even a single conversation that I keep putting the game down, which means it's sitting on my computer for even longer.

Doesn't help that the relationship between 2 of his daughters feels very NTR like to me. There's no point in debating the semantics of that controversial term; the point is just that it gives me the same feelings of jealousy and disgust, albeit to a much lesser extent than if it were a man. I'm normally fine with girl-on-girl action in male protagonist AVNs, but this game goes out of its way to rub in your face just how great and sexual their relationship is. Hell, the mc encourages one of them to make it an official girlfriend-girlfriend thing.

I know almost everyone who views this post is going to be a fan of this game, which is why I'd rather just write a review, but I need to do it to blow off some steam. If you are a fan; if you don't find the mc annoying; if you don't mind the daughters' relationship; that's great, and I'm glad for you. It's all a subjective experience.
I completely disagree. You have the right to your opinionof course, however the fact you post it in the forum, Not the review section imply you might have a motive to do so
 
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