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Like some people have already mentioned, it would be good to proofread the text and change all "divorice" to divorce. That error is even in the bios, FFS!
No Mac Version of 0.3?
I'll just speak to the MC's job. I don't know how you missed it, but I think that the Dev did a really good job of setting up his profession as a real estate agent. It's discussed in the dialog, and is even set up as an important plot point. And where I'd really like to give a huge thumbs up is to the Dev's attention to detail is in the spreadsheet. If you look beyond that fact that it's a spreadsheet and therefore symbolizing "work", but actually look AT the spreadsheet, you'll see that it's actually a really good example of the kind of work a real estate agent does. It wasn't just a random set of numbers, it's an actual worksheet comparing properties ("Comps") with information like square footage, number of bedrooms and bathrooms, prices, price per square foot, etc. That level of detail was not necessary to the game, but it really added depth and believability to the MC being not just a real estate agent, but doing a good job and setting up for exactly what happened - he had to show an undesirable property that fit the client's budget and was in their neighborhood, setting up the perfect sales pitch for the apartment in the MC's building. I've attached a screen shot of the spreadsheet in question. So, once again, great job to the Dev! Also, I'd like to know if there are any other apartments available, I think I want to live there too! See you at the pool!The most troublesome, MC. When he opened Excel and look at numbers I thought he's sales manager or some financial consultant. But he's just a real estate agent! Hence I realized it only when MC began to show apartaments to potential buyers. Before that there was no hint in that direction. In my opinion, it's not a good thing.
I'm enjoying this game a lot so far. Story is cool and I like the girls. Kinda confused on Abby's parents though. Who is Carol? Is that her mom or something because I thought Abby's mom died. Cant wait for more