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Daddy's whining become really tiresome. Ok, i can get when you ressist and slowly become more corrupted and lust takes better of you... BUT YOU FUCKING TWO GIRLS AND THEN TELL THEM HOW IT WRONG?! Hesitations is not bad as plot drive but they have to be in character's nature. And what is nature of our MC? is he some kind of loser? ugh...
This is what happens when "write what you know" doesn't apply. You don't have to have fucked your daughter to make a believable incest story, but at the very least having a clue about being a parent should help. This entire Becca scene killed the mood on not one, but several points in the dialogue, to a point that a simple cuddle with Abby at the end of the update felt more intimate, more cozy, more fulfilling, more everything. Less is more. Just shut the fuck up dear MC and own up to what you've done to yourself.
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Isn't it painfully obvious by now that he is? He raised another guy's daughter, then he raised another guy's 2 daughters. Then his second wife cheated on him with the father of those 2 daughters. He literally couldn't be more of a loser if he tried.
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good game, but man i just want to slap the MC so hard, why make him such a bitch?
to raise step children is not a problem. there re a lot step fathers who better that real fathers and they good men and husbands. and MC in the beginning ot the story depicted as man of high morality and loving father. But then as soon as chance appears he jumps on his "daughters" despite his inner monologue. i would see only one logical development of his character: Becky break him and make him submissive slave for their "family".
Nice update. Thanks for the work!
I'd hoped that after screwing Becca and Lilly we'd no longer have to put up with the MC's continual whining. Sadly the dev can't move beyond it. It was getting old a long time ago. At this point in the story it's just punishment for the player/reader.
I'd hoped that after screwing Becca and Lilly we'd no longer have to put up with the MC's continual whining. Sadly the dev can't move beyond it. It was getting old a long time ago. At this point in the story it's just punishment for the player/reader.
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As for Abby: I see it more as him raising the daughter of the woman he loved more than anything. As for his second marriage: I personally have great respect for the fact that he is able to take on the role of a father for Becca and Lilli, despite the fact that Lilli made it anything but easy for him at the time. I would say that from an evolutionary point of view, this is a kind of parental instinct that played a big role here to a certain degree. Something like that can catch you quite easily and quite unexpectedly. Does that make you a wimp? I think not. Yes, Shannon cheated on him, but you could already see in flashbacks that she was already a pretty vicious bitch in her youth. Should Frank have known that? Probably, but there's a saying that love is blind. That said, I think the lion's share of Frank's decision to get back together with Shannon may have been because he wanted a mother figure in Abby's life, which isn't a bad thought in itself, and Shannon was a pretty obvious choice there, given their shared history and being a single parent herself. One of the few semi-excusable aspects Shannon brings to the table is that she at least tried to be a mother to Abby for a while. Which was fine until she started to look more and more like her mother. So I understand that Frank is having trouble shaking off those parental instincts, but at the same time we can't forget where we are at the end of the day with this story, so Frank needs to slowly accept the girls' feelings and evolve as the girls do.
Yeah, I'll give the game one more update and if the MC doesn't start manning up, I'm done. This has moved well beyond slow burn and is bordering on intentionally drawn out for no good reason.
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Well, at least I find it less absurd now, but it may also be due to the fact that there are 1-2 autoimmune diseases in my family, one of which has broken out in me so far.
As for Frank: First of all, the given scenarios are necessary to make the plot possible as it is (Frank's hassitation aside). Personally, I think, and I assume that the idea after which Frank was created is similar: family is more than just the collection of hereditary information that you share with each other. Through acquaintances I have often enough heard of rather bad parents, who take their small children to a pub and go drinking (the parent) as an example. And also here in VN there are some examples of bad parents and families:
Lilith's father
Lilith's and Becca's mother
Abby's biological father
Jessica's family
As for spreading the heredity: it may be that I missed something or didn't understand something correctly, but if I remember it correctly it was that Frank starts to reciprocate Becca and Lilli's feelings (but he doesn't want that to happen super obviously under Abby's nose yet, I'm looking in your direction, Lilli) and at the Becca scene, at least for me, Frank had the option to take the initiative (to the amazement of Becca, who thought she would take the lead). With whom he is still hesitating, but that is not so surprising after all, she has been his little girl all her life:Abby. And at least with me, he was thinking about the quadrangle a few times. Long story short, yes a little hesitant he was but at least with me he wasn't nearly as extreme as in the last update.
As for Frank: First of all, the given scenarios are necessary to make the plot possible as it is (Frank's hassitation aside). Personally, I think, and I assume that the idea after which Frank was created is similar: family is more than just the collection of hereditary information that you share with each other. Through acquaintances I have often enough heard of rather bad parents, who take their small children to a pub and go drinking (the parent) as an example. And also here in VN there are some examples of bad parents and families:
Lilith's father
Lilith's and Becca's mother
Abby's biological father
Jessica's family
As for spreading the heredity: it may be that I missed something or didn't understand something correctly, but if I remember it correctly it was that Frank starts to reciprocate Becca and Lilli's feelings (but he doesn't want that to happen super obviously under Abby's nose yet, I'm looking in your direction, Lilli) and at the Becca scene, at least for me, Frank had the option to take the initiative (to the amazement of Becca, who thought she would take the lead). With whom he is still hesitating, but that is not so surprising after all, she has been his little girl all her life:Abby. And at least with me, he was thinking about the quadrangle a few times. Long story short, yes a little hesitant he was but at least with me he wasn't nearly as extreme as in the last update.
- Nov 14, 2017
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at this rate abby gets fucked on next update, update full of surprises was nice as usual, was surprised that becky wanted sex so quickly and that she kept glasses on (must be glued to her head), meeting with lawyer came out of nowhere (very surprising twist), overall very nice update.
scrshots.
1. trust her after she gave black eye?
2. not suspicious at all
scrshots.
1. trust her after she gave black eye?
2. not suspicious at all
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*Sigh* It's not even incest. Why do the MCs in these games have to be either, super creepy sex-offenders, or whiney spineless losers? Can't we find a happy medium? Spending so much time on the tortured inner monologue is very frustrating. It becomes filler at some point, that feels like the Dev doesn't really know how to push the narrative forward properly. Anyway, that's my 2 cents. Felt like the game started out very promising, so I'll let it cook for a while and see if it gets fixed. MC really needs to grow a pair, and get out of his own way though. He's supposed to be a grown up, why is he acting like a 19 year old boy? See Midlife Crisis, for the proper way for a man to behave in a porn game. 
- Oct 24, 2019
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thank you ... that was my whole point when i said something similar .... you the mc did not have any of the girls as your very own flesh and blood daughters .... so some can say yeah well he thinks of them as they are his ... thats true .. but facts are facts .. they are not his ... so fucking them is NOT incest .... but there will those who will constantly cry yes they are .. well to that i say you don't comprehend shit .... the mc did not even adopt any of them ... so i prove myself right
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yeah i caught that also ... maybe the dev forgot to add that or will add it later at some point
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maybe typo. not in this update and don't think i had it.yeah i caught that also ... maybe the dev forgot to add that or will add it later at some point