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in the SAUNA Part where Frank confess after becca got caught naked, Frank should have replied he supports her Daughters instead of committed to Becca, they agree to "what they have" is not a serious relationship.

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it's just poor plot right there! the part i wish i have skipped it. now i'll just think of it as a filler of the story.... cause during those times people sometimes ran out of ideas hope they look back at this part and make few changes.

or is this what they all prefer and now this is the result? just like Marvel MCU universe faq ya'll opinions ruin the authors INTENTED STORY hope ya'll happy. it could have ended better in my expression
 
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I am pretty sure MC has mentioned early on that he met Becca's boyfriend (He said something like "You broke up? That sucks. I really liked him. He was a good guy")
That is indeed the case, yes, but that may simply mean that a pretend boyfriend was introduced to the parents by arrangement so that Shannon wouldn't interfere with the planning. Maybe it has nothing to do with Shannon: maybe Lilly simply delivered a cheeky line like “As if you bookworm had a boyfriend!” and to shut her up and so that it doesn't come across like the line from the friend from Canada, in this case since we are in Canada the friend from the USA, a friend helped out. But well, I hope that Becca's side story part 2 or 3 will provide more information.

And I still wish there was a what if story where Shannon had died instead of Jess and Jess and Frank had taken in the sisters. I would find it fascinating to see how the characters would have developed differently.
 
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This part was Wholesome, but after that.... meh.... must be girl thing...
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liked what happened in this scene
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wished they keep the old model of lilith
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loved this moments here with lily wanting back to their lounge party
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Cringe Part right here
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I loved this part i can't imagine the possibilities meeting her half sisters visiting her actual father without conflict and he make amends etc. the story goes on...
this has been a long journey and i hope it never ends... the progress must not be rushed...it'll takes long to make such masterpiece.

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I loved this part i can't imagine the possibilities meeting her half sisters visiting her actual father without conflict and he make amends etc. the story goes on...
this has been a long journey and i hope it never ends... the progress must not be rushed...it'll takes long to make such masterpiece.

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I hope someday Abby has email or text contact with her half siblings.
Also hope that day comes at some point in the future, after the mom and kids have left the waste of space bio-dad far behind, now that they know what a piece of crap he is.
We don't need to actually see it, can just be a few lines of dialogue/text that tell us about it somewhere in the late stages of the story.
 
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I hope someday Abby has email or text contact with her half siblings.
Also hope that day comes at some point in the future, after the mom and kids have left the waste of space bio-dad far behind, now that they know what a piece of crap he is.
We don't need to actually see it, can just be a few lines of dialogue/text that tell us about it somewhere in the late stages of the story.
doesn't have to be that way

by the Bio-Dad part as a Teenager did was just all cover for his Future when it comes to Reality Situation here his reaction was surreal, and you know jesicca story she is vulnerable end up tempting the guy, he was also a victim to that part, you were suppose to enjoy your teenage life going out at parties and one day you realise you got someone pregnant....she didn't use protection or condom has a leak or was it they are too drunk in those moments that end up using raw.

yea basically his life went down to hill when ur in that situation you could lose your scholarship or even social status, you will end up serving as fast food job

aaron choices was either to convince jessica for abortion which jesicca "disaprove"
aaron options are only left with was to ruin jesicca reputation first before the rumor spread before either both of them went down or her's

that ends up her disregard in that situation and ended up saving his own skin. he probably barely even know her, at the party they usually introduce themselves but not all of the guess just the person they approach with.

aaron got struck in real life situation there that end up destroying jessica life by bending the truth with a lie. proclaiming the father could be anyone. and the story goes on. Perspective men that's what makes the story like these great.

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IN SHORT VERSION THE GUY WAS A "TRADEGY" y'all normally not understand if its not the protagonist of the story or you in his stead
 
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i get to see Franks character here again, which also the part i like about the MC

not the part where frank talks about him liking their daughter was out of his character, it should have been abby having crush on frank while mc just supporting her daughters make their dreams possible

if possible.... it could have been that way.... but this time he should have been talking to himself instead of having inner thoughts
 
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doesn't have to be that way

by the Bio-Dad part as a Teenager did was just all cover for his Future when it comes to Reality Situation here his reaction was surreal, and you know jesicca story she is vulnerable end up tempting the guy, he was also a victim to that part, you were suppose to enjoy your teenage life going out at parties and one day you realise you got someone pregnant....she didn't use protection or condom has a leak or was it they are too drunk in those moments that end up using raw.

yea basically his life went down to hill when ur in that situation you could lose your scholarship or even social status, you will end up serving as fast food job

aaron choices was either to convince jessica for abortion which jesicca "disaprove"
aaron options are only left with was to ruin jesicca reputation first before the rumor spread before either both of them went down or her's

that ends up her disregard in that situation and ended up saving his own skin. he probably barely even know her, at the party they usually introduce themselves but not all of the guess just the person they approach with.

aaron got struck in real life situation there that end up destroying jessica life by bending the truth with a lie. proclaiming the father could be anyone. and the story goes on. Perspective men that's what makes the story like these great.

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IN SHORT VERSION THE GUY WAS A "TRADEGY" y'all normally not understand if its not the protagonist of the story or you in his stead
Doesn't matter if he knew Jess for two minutes or five years. When presented with choices and situations he chose poorly, repeatedly.
He showed his lack of character, and doesn't deserve anything but disdain.
At best, there could be indifference toward him in the future; choosing to put his indiscretions in the past and not give him further thought. It would be unfortunate if Abby wasted any more energy on him at all.

Here's hoping he never comes up again.
 

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I still dont see how on earth a bomb shell like Becca should fall head over heels for a push over like frank.
 

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I still dont see how on earth a bomb shell like Becca should fall head over heels for a push over like frank.
Becca not only thinks Frank is hot, she also finds him kind, and smart. You can see this even further in her side story.
Considering the other male role model examples that she has, and that love doesn't exactly follow logic, it's not overly surprising she fell for Frank.
 

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The mysteries of the human heart. It wants what it wants and there is never any logic to it.
Becca not only thinks Frank is hot, she also finds him kind, and smart. You can see this even further in her side story.
Considering the other male role model examples that she has, and that love doesn't exactly follow logic, it's not overly surprising she fell for Frank.
You may be right with this, but it doesnt make Franks demeanor more bearable.
 

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Yes, Frank can be exhausting at times, but I think a lot of his problems stem from the following:

His first wife, his true love and best friend dies in an accident because a drunk party girl with rich parents thinks she has to drive her car around. And she never gets punished because the party girl's father greases the court like an oil sardine. On top of that, there's apparently survivor's guilt because it wasn't him who went shopping, but Jess. He was never really able to come to terms with it, partly because the money probably wasn't there and partly because he had to look after his daughter. Then there's probably the stigma of psychotherapy. But since he now has a trusting, friendly relationship with Vanessa, he should perhaps talk to her about it.

Shannon. The woman not only brought her own children down, as we saw in Lilith's and Becca's side stories, but also Frank. I think Frank may even have subconsciously known how bad his marriage was at a certain point, didn't want to give it up, if only so Abby could continue to have a mother figure and he didn't want to let Becca and Lilly down. He had spent about 5 years with Becca and Lilly by the time Becca's side story takes place, enough time to see what Trevor's disappearance had done to Lilly in particular.

I think in a scenario where Jess never died but Shannon and her daughters ended up with Jess and Frank for story reasons, Frank would still be a more reactive person, but because he never had to deal with Jess's death and was never dragged down by Shannon in a rather messed up marriage, he would be someone with a lot less self-doubt and fear of failure. Additionally, he would have a partner by his side that he can absolutely trust.

I would love to see a side story like this where Jess would then verbally kick Lilly's ex-boyfriend's ass in a scene after she finds out he cheated on Lilly. Becca called herself a mama bear in an Update, but I don't think that's anything compared to what Jess would do to someone who hurts one of “her” girls.
 
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eh he is not so bad recently, he is DTF mostly with anybody except maybe Abby, he still has his monologues about it. Well, he admitted he is into her but can't go there. I'm very curious what will be the breaking point... Abby catching him with Lilly would be my guess.
 
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