I like the game, the story, the suspense. I can't wait to see what happens next.
But, technically, image, framing, typos (mistakes, missing letters, dyslexia..) etc ... I think it could be better and even much better.
Even though I wouldn't be able to do as much, there is what others are doing here that is a reference.
With the benefit of the doubt, maybe this impression of something badly done comes from the beginning, I admit that, quite quickly, I was paying more attention to the development of the story than to the somewhat shaky images and the typos.
So; good luck with the continuation and I hear things can only get better so... keep up the good work, dev!
