- May 4, 2017
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man this was fantastic! your writing is leagues above the usual stuff. a few things tho. 1. am i the only person that thought midichlorians/force when spirit chick was explaining the energy? 2. Marijuana is not physically addictive only psychologically so you wouldn't go through a rehab facility. you would probably go see a psychiatrist. 3. it's a small thing but allowing us to change the MCs name would help a bit with immersion. All in all great job and ill be definitely keeping an eye out for future updates