bobkelpie7
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Honestly I lot better than I was expecting. Really good start.
Other than a few typos / language corrections the only improvement I would suggest is to make the subversion scene more than just the flashing words.
Other than a few typos / language corrections the only improvement I would suggest is to make the subversion scene more than just the flashing words.