Allan Wolf
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Very short but it seems to have some potential... Well, at least it has incest which for me is already halfway there.
Ohhhh nothing like that, there will be a lot more content, I promise you that)Very short but it seems to have some potential... Well, at least it has incest which for me is already halfway there.
DoneQuick suggestion: make the name of the protagonist customizable
thanks for headsup, didten play the first update because of the forced mc name, but now ill just ignore this oneWell, I had high hopes for this one, despite being very short. Those hopes were quickly dashed when it was revealed that the main LI was the town bicycle. That alone was almost a deal-breaker, but now, this latest update reveals that she is currently an active prostitute and is secretly recording sex acts with MC to sell online.
Prostitute LIs are always going to turn away the majority of players, especially if they're a family member in an incest game. Make the game you want to make, but if you're not 100% committed to her going that route, I'd highly recommend walking it back ASAP. You're still very early on, and it would only take changing/removing 2 or 3 lines and removing 1 render to turn it around right now, and salvage the main LI.
There's definitely some good potential here, but just know that your current main LI is going to alienate and chase off the vast majority of the incest crowd as she is now. You could also give the players the choice to break up with her, but considering how short the updates already are, I doubt there'd be enough content to keep anyone around.
My intent is to give constructive criticism, so I hope you won't take it as overly harsh. I'd really like to see this game thrive, but the playerbase you are specifically targeting is typically extremely turned off by things like prostitution and camwhoring(which they generally consider to be the same thing/equally disgusting), especially when it involves a family member LI.
I was thinking about it too, maybe I'll change it (that's what a beta is for, for such a good critique)Well, I had high hopes for this one, despite being very short. Those hopes were quickly dashed when it was revealed that the main LI was the town bicycle. That alone was almost a deal-breaker, but now, this latest update reveals that she is currently an active prostitute and is secretly recording sex acts with MC to sell online.
Prostitute LIs are always going to turn away the majority of players, especially if they're a family member in an incest game. Make the game you want to make, but if you're not 100% committed to her going that route, I'd highly recommend walking it back ASAP. You're still very early on, and it would only take changing/removing 2 or 3 lines and removing 1 render to turn it around right now, and salvage the main LI.
There's definitely some good potential here, but just know that your current main LI is going to alienate and chase off the vast majority of the incest crowd as she is now. You could also give the players the choice to break up with her, but considering how short the updates already are, I doubt there'd be enough content to keep anyone around.
My intent is to give constructive criticism, so I hope you won't take it as overly harsh. I'd really like to see this game thrive, but the playerbase you are specifically targeting is typically extremely turned off by things like prostitution and camwhoring(which they generally consider to be the same thing/equally disgusting), especially when it involves a family member LI.
Is she actually prostituting herself or "just" an onlyfans e-whore?Well, I had high hopes for this one, despite being very short. Those hopes were quickly dashed when it was revealed that the main LI was the town bicycle. That alone was almost a deal-breaker, but now, this latest update reveals that she is currently an active prostitute and is secretly recording sex acts with MC to sell online.
Prostitute LIs are always going to turn away the majority of players, especially if they're a family member in an incest game. Make the game you want to make, but if you're not 100% committed to her going that route, I'd highly recommend walking it back ASAP. You're still very early on, and it would only take changing/removing 2 or 3 lines and removing 1 render to turn it around right now, and salvage the main LI.
There's definitely some good potential here, but just know that your current main LI is going to alienate and chase off the vast majority of the incest crowd as she is now. You could also give the players the choice to break up with her, but considering how short the updates already are, I doubt there'd be enough content to keep anyone around.
My intent is to give constructive criticism, so I hope you won't take it as overly harsh. I'd really like to see this game thrive, but the playerbase you are specifically targeting is typically extremely turned off by things like prostitution and camwhoring(which they generally consider to be the same thing/equally disgusting), especially when it involves a family member LI.
fansly is the analog of onlyfans)Is she actually prostituting herself or "just" an onlyfans e-whore?
Both will turn off people regardless, but it would be nice to know, game can still be salvaged if she is only an e-whore but if she's actually getting paid for sex then it's probably dead unless you can kick her to the curb (seems unlikely since she is the main LI).
There are people that like whore LIs it's just usually not incest fans, at the end of the day it's your VN though so you should make it as you see fit.fansly is the analog of onlyfans)
but I'll probably change her occupation to cosplayer or something (to match her sexuality)
Thanks for posting this. Was going to try it but I'll wait to see if this is changed first.Well, I had high hopes for this one, despite being very short. Those hopes were quickly dashed when it was revealed that the main LI was the town bicycle. That alone was almost a deal-breaker, but now, this latest update reveals that she is currently an active prostitute and is secretly recording sex acts with MC to sell online.
Prostitute LIs are always going to turn away the majority of players, especially if they're a family member in an incest game. Make the game you want to make, but if you're not 100% committed to her going that route, I'd highly recommend walking it back ASAP. You're still very early on, and it would only take changing/removing 2 or 3 lines and removing 1 render to turn it around right now, and salvage the main LI.
There's definitely some good potential here, but just know that your current main LI is going to alienate and chase off the vast majority of the incest crowd as she is now. You could also give the players the choice to break up with her, but considering how short the updates already are, I doubt there'd be enough content to keep anyone around.
My intent is to give constructive criticism, so I hope you won't take it as overly harsh. I'd really like to see this game thrive, but the playerbase you are specifically targeting is typically extremely turned off by things like prostitution and camwhoring(which they generally consider to be the same thing/equally disgusting), especially when it involves a family member LI.
Wow, They might aswell slap NTR in the game since only people who enjoy that content would enjoy this game and it would be much easier to avoid it. Funny part is, as soon as Christina demanded the MC to shut up while he was eating her out (first minutes of the game), I knew it was going to be some beta shit. Also missing voyeur tag, not a fan of watching other dudes banging. Since theres some so early on in the game I'm assuming its going to be a reccuring thing.Well, I had high hopes for this one, despite being very short. Those hopes were quickly dashed when it was revealed that the main LI was the town bicycle. That alone was almost a deal-breaker, but now, this latest update reveals that she is currently an active prostitute and is secretly recording sex acts with MC to sell online.
Prostitute LIs are always going to turn away the majority of players, especially if they're a family member in an incest game. Make the game you want to make, but if you're not 100% committed to her going that route, I'd highly recommend walking it back ASAP. You're still very early on, and it would only take changing/removing 2 or 3 lines and removing 1 render to turn it around right now, and salvage the main LI.
There's definitely some good potential here, but just know that your current main LI is going to alienate and chase off the vast majority of the incest crowd as she is now. You could also give the players the choice to break up with her, but considering how short the updates already are, I doubt there'd be enough content to keep anyone around.
My intent is to give constructive criticism, so I hope you won't take it as overly harsh. I'd really like to see this game thrive, but the playerbase you are specifically targeting is typically extremely turned off by things like prostitution and camwhoring(which they generally consider to be the same thing/equally disgusting), especially when it involves a family member LI.