just played through the whole game in one day, i liked it a lot, i had a few remaks that I thought could help:
-there was 2 or 3 sentences that were not translated,while they were not really bothering regarding following the story they did take me out of the imersion.
-may just be me but i find the repetition of the same declaration of love a bit tiring, although it was very cute, feels a bit copy pasted but the overall quality of the writing was good !
-the story is interesting and suprisingly so, as story is sometime put in the sidelane when making a erotic game/VN.
The balance between story and sex scenes is great, even thought it is a bit slow to get to the first scene.
Overall pretty good game, can't wait for the v0,11.
