SC fanboy here. I'm going to continue to watch this game, but a few things bugged me (no pun intended). Zerg is singular and plural. Is she in a Leviathan at the opening scene? She knows how Zerg operate mostly, so she'd understand that and it might set the scene. Nbd though.
Next, the swarm is controlled by Overmind at this point, and you can speculate that hydras have anime-like bad guy dialogue normally, but under Overmind control, there's no free will (except by the Cerebrates): so no "hehehe rape this slut" stuff from hydras unfortunately. Also Sarah is a powerful psionic (the most powerful Ghost I think at the time), so she wouldn't be so helpless against a couple hydras. Without ghost implants that reduce their power, e.g., they can explode people with their minds. Lastly, not to impose on your artistic freedoms, but the vial thing seems weird, Zerg can inject parasites just fine without Terran instruments. BTW, I'm going to be peeved if this how you envision she was made into the Queen of Blades :closedeyesmile:
Bug reports: typo on warning screen said "please reprt [SIC]", and "Alexey" stukov, but maybe you were trying to avoid the correct spelling for legal reasons.
Hope I was helpful and not too harsh, I will follow its progress, I'm just protective of my favorite games
