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Hope this doesn't get abandoned....looks cool
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I can replicate most of the freezes in chrome, but they feel more like dead-ends where either the code is disjointed or incomplete (cafe, leaving home, also a 3rd if you don't take selfie's that occurs in the school if you do take a selfie it reacts normally). I'd export them, but since this engine I'm not entirely familiar with I can't. I can say it isn't user or hardware related issues causing them.
Not to be overly critical because you did label this a "janky alpha", but it seems like it may require quite a bit of work done on it to get it into a more playable state. I also fail to see what this release accomplishes (bug testing?) because from what I can gather you can only play the first day (it ends after going to sleep) despite clearly having other content likely related to following days that is in the download. That said I think you likely should have waited for a better working end product with more to flesh out other than a days worth of basic play time with little going on unless I'm missing something. I likely could be because of where there are breaks in the game, but I can't say for sure.
Finally this does need the "bestiality" tag because while I can't see where the content is active in the current release it is definitely being shipped with that content in the download. I personally don't care one way or the other, but I'm sure others might if they happen upon it and weren't warned.
On a positive note I can say I personally like the layout and everything that you have done so far despite all the glaring issues it presents being an alpha. Hopefully you get the kinks worked out and continue to add a bit more into it. I wish you luck.
- Jan 10, 2018
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I thought that the graphics worked just fine for this kind of story, and encourage the author to retain this style if that makes it easier to get usable images (because that means more time to spend on story and dialogue).
The story was surprisingly free of porn logic (the only exception was the idea that the MC would be put in prison if taken into protective custody, but that's just a mild stretch and provides a needed motivation not to involve the authorities). One slight logic flaw: the MC is a rising senior, so 17 years old. She'd never be separated from her mother like this at 17 (not yet adult). Make her nineteen, with a fake ID age of seventeen, and it works better. Kudos on the story.
The writing is also very good. Description is good without being flowery, and dialogue is smooth and natural. I did notice the locker room boys after the pool event calling each other "looser," but other than that language, punctuation, and spelling were all excellent. Writing this good is very rare in these games. Kudos there, too.
All in all, I think that this was one of the better debuts of the last few years.
The story was surprisingly free of porn logic (the only exception was the idea that the MC would be put in prison if taken into protective custody, but that's just a mild stretch and provides a needed motivation not to involve the authorities). One slight logic flaw: the MC is a rising senior, so 17 years old. She'd never be separated from her mother like this at 17 (not yet adult). Make her nineteen, with a fake ID age of seventeen, and it works better. Kudos on the story.
The writing is also very good. Description is good without being flowery, and dialogue is smooth and natural. I did notice the locker room boys after the pool event calling each other "looser," but other than that language, punctuation, and spelling were all excellent. Writing this good is very rare in these games. Kudos there, too.
All in all, I think that this was one of the better debuts of the last few years.
- Jan 14, 2018
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depends on where she is from 16 in some places is legal emancipation age .... and a senior could be 18 or 19 if she didn't do well in school ,remember she dropped out of the last school she was in, to get a job and get her mom out of hooking ...it doesn't say for how long .......
- Jan 10, 2018
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Yes, she could be 18 or 19, and I'm just noting that the story should explain that, because it makes no sense that she would even be going to school at the stand-out age of nineteen, when she's supposed to be pretending to be normal. Unless part of her cover, the school bit makes no sense. It is trivially easy to explain in-story: she's pretending to be younger than she really is, to throw off bad guys looking for a nineteen-year-old.
That intro song...
I see what you did there
xD
Please for the love of god tell me that YOU know the name of the song and from who it is xD
For those who don't know it:
I see what you did there
xDPlease for the love of god tell me that YOU know the name of the song and from who it is xD
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That intro song...
I see what you did there
Please for the love of god tell me that YOU know the name of the song and from who it is xD
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Now that is interesting game project, some innovations here (engine, art style, customised voice synthesis)!
The art looks pretty good. I wonder if it's some real porn images with processing effect or hand painted or maybe both?
Anyway it's good as it is.
There are some problems with game freezes at some points and inability to do anything like it was mentioned before, but it's first version only, so hopefully can be fixed.
One strange thing I noticed that probably wasn't mentioned: after some playing and doing manual save games there is random problem with loading last manual save instantly - I overcome this issue by loading some previous than last save and after that load last save - just more clicks to do load.
The game is hot, worth to look how it will evolve!
The art looks pretty good. I wonder if it's some real porn images with processing effect or hand painted or maybe both?
Anyway it's good as it is.
There are some problems with game freezes at some points and inability to do anything like it was mentioned before, but it's first version only, so hopefully can be fixed.
One strange thing I noticed that probably wasn't mentioned: after some playing and doing manual save games there is random problem with loading last manual save instantly - I overcome this issue by loading some previous than last save and after that load last save - just more clicks to do load.
The game is hot, worth to look how it will evolve!
Interesting premise, can go many places. At the moment it's very short, ends at the first day.
I, for one, as usual when I come across a game in development I like the look of, encourage a dark route. Non-con, reluctance, degradation, creepy nerds and old men that want to hurt and punish our protagonist, bdsm, total evil fuckery with her life, etc etc!
Thank you, thank you.
I, for one, as usual when I come across a game in development I like the look of, encourage a dark route. Non-con, reluctance, degradation, creepy nerds and old men that want to hurt and punish our protagonist, bdsm, total evil fuckery with her life, etc etc!
Thank you, thank you.
- Jan 14, 2018
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Agreed and Ben definitely has that kind of potential ,....the head master could be a good creeper too
Great game, although for some reason after I come home from the clothes store, leaving the house gives me a blank screen of the house with no options, and when running the map command, same thing happens with the school. Here is save
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