Some rather decent renders and there's a good start for interesting relationships and character dynamics. However, could use some polish for a VN demo:
...and a couple of other little bugs that any playthrough will make obvious. It is stable though, which is good, and it's pretty, which is great. This is a promising VN so far.
- Text needs proofreading e.g. clunky translation or no translation (confusing choice of words, sometimes text is in French), inconsistent grammar (punctuation, capitalization, etc.), inconsistent use of pronouns (swaps between 'he' and 'she' in the Femme version)
- No highlighting overlays on interactable user interface items so player has to hunt and click (standard for VNs)
- A few loops in various dialogue trees (e.g. clicking the randos in the library will reset Linda)
- Sometimes the screen will blip and shift by a few, noticeable degrees when transitioning between dialogues with characters (with Linda in the library is one example)
- Sometimes the wrong MC image will be shown despite the gender lock of the version (one example, walking down the street with Linda, switches between female and male PCs in the Femme version of the demo)
...and a couple of other little bugs that any playthrough will make obvious. It is stable though, which is good, and it's pretty, which is great. This is a promising VN so far.
