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Kukipett
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My god what language are they speaking, i recognize words, some sentences but the whole seems so obscure , what are they talking about ?
I have already seen bad writing or devs who want to look smart by obfuscating everything but here i just started reading this VN and i'm puzzled.
That's the worst way to start a story!
I have already seen bad writing or devs who want to look smart by obfuscating everything but here i just started reading this VN and i'm puzzled.
That's the worst way to start a story!
Too much black screen...
Bro how do you want player to find right away where is the "BIOS" if it's hidden & you need to hover the mouse on it ?
Bro how do you want player to find right away where is the "BIOS" if it's hidden & you need to hover the mouse on it ?
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So See Your Path Remaster [v0.02a] Unofficial Android Port
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ImariKurumi
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Yea, writing and dialogue needs some reworking. But context is what the narrative lacks the most. Half the time it feels like you're thrown into the middle of a scene/chapter.
Too many built-in pauses. Just let us click through freely.
I found it hard to follow, probably because you set yourself up into having to explain all kinds of stuff that's already happened for characters that already know each other. In 90% of these cases, writers would be better off setting the story in the past and moving it forward from there. You end up having to explain it all in flashbacks anyways except without the benefit of added tension that comes from it happening in real time. It would also allow you to dodge stupid amnesia stuff.
Let us live it rather than being storytold.
I found it hard to follow, probably because you set yourself up into having to explain all kinds of stuff that's already happened for characters that already know each other. In 90% of these cases, writers would be better off setting the story in the past and moving it forward from there. You end up having to explain it all in flashbacks anyways except without the benefit of added tension that comes from it happening in real time. It would also allow you to dodge stupid amnesia stuff.
Let us live it rather than being storytold.
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