The images weren't the main problem. It mainly the story isn't told with feeling, i played last year another PTSD VN and it was much better told, you could feel it how the mc felt and went through. Here it more told like a robot without feelings, or like a math teacher with monotome voice, to write feelings is not easy and often requires strong knowledge of the language. I will see in the future, but for now, well to be honest I fell a few times asleep reading it and that only happens with me when the writer writes it without much passion.
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Haremm lover
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All i can say is that this game is not for me. I liked the premise of the story but it went downhill fast your ex gf is a whore and you see her with other people, you also get a flashback and see your mom with your dad when they were young those scenes just ruined it for me. Good luck with your game I know that there are people who aren't put off by that. So as long as you keep going you will get an audience.
Son_of_ogre
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you are on luck, check the patreon, you can choose a new hair style for Scarlet is the new route.
herreraaa
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Matt as default MC name is hideous then forced and unnecessary NTR scenes like mom and dad flashback and ex-gf fucking other dudes... tsk tsk tsk
Thank you for the info I can just ignore this cuck fest. He should of made those scene's completely avoidable. Enjoy your cuckish trash for those who stay
Thank you for the info I can just ignore this cuck fest. He should of made those scene's completely avoidable. Enjoy your cuckish trash for those who stay
