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Axel34

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It's easy to notice without you spelling it out but why did you do it? Usually, creators at least try to hide their biases or don't have the stuff they don't like at all to begin with.
That is what slider for?! I need to read more carefully, not just click every two seconds and catch the meaning at first glance :rolleyes:
 

Detarco

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It's easy to notice without you spelling it out but why did you do it? Usually, creators at least try to hide their biases or don't have the stuff they don't like at all to begin with.
'Cuz I'd rather stay truthful at all times, and it's just a personal distaste for how wrong they do some tags.
Which is why I wanna do it. And my personal bias doesn't get in the way of writing, if anything, I want to do something even I could like, which I think I sort of did well enough? But you'll be the ones judging that

And thank you for trying the game! Hope you're having a good time!
 

GreenDark

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And thank you for trying the game! Hope you're having a good time!
I'm not, to be honest. I could give you the reasons but there are many and I'm not sure I could properly separate my own biases from the more objective criticisms I have. Some of them relate to my previous question...

Let me praise something instead: You write confidently. By that I mean you seem to have a clear idea of what you want this VN to be and that's reflected in all of its components. The pacing, the style, the tone and the characters are consistent throughout. I have issues with several of them, but you don't and it shows.
 
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EveKeller

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The story is intriguing and interesting, your characters are cute and well written.
With that being said there is one thing that I don't understand is when you say :
(Don't worry, you can skip any lewd scene if you dislike the ones participating in it)
Can you really?
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Detarco

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The story is intriguing and interesting, your characters are cute and well written.
With that being said there is one thing that I don't understand is when you say :

Can you really?
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I genuinely might have confused that and didn't put it behind anything due to it being a Vanilla scene
I'll have it corrected by next month release
Hope you continue to enjoy the story!
 
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dolfe67

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And all the same sex pairs can be omitted (some will happen regardless as that's what the characters would do given the situation). That said I tried to make it appealing no matter what sexes are involved because cute characters are cute.
So it's kinetic novel with choices to skip scenes we don't like?
 

Detarco

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Yes, that's indeed the plan.
I know it's not the most common choice in VNs like this, but I want to stick to the story I want to tell
 

Dardude

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I'm liking this game. I think it has good writing, plot development, and characters. And if there's a short, cute girl to lewd on...all the better.
 
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Skeltom

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Yes, that's indeed the plan.
I know it's not the most common choice in VNs like this, but I want to stick to the story I want to tell
You should really add the kinetic novel tag so people know ahead of time. I was looking forward to it until I read that. Good luck just the same though.
 
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Sngo

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So the gay and lesbian content still happens but off screen if you reject all that ? If so then is unavoidable
 

RodrigoOSan

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I was expecting more screen time for The Director, since he's supposed to be the main character here, since he was created for the player self-insert reasons and is the one who knows everything. But we literally know nothing about him at all.

Besides that, the update ended in a interesting cliffhanger
 
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Dive into the tale that centers around three captivating characters, each broken and facing struggles in their own way.
Follow along as they face highs and lows that peel back the layers they present to the world to show who they really are on the inside.
As they find strength and grow amidst adversity, each perspective offers a different prism to see not only how they see themselves, but the world and people around them.
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