Unity Something Unlimited [v2.4.8] [Gunsmoke Games]

[Henshinvolt]

Here's one more Deedee one, I'll do long hair heads for this one tomorrow and next week something else.

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The million dollar question is what did you see and made you realize it wasn't. That's what I'd need to focus and improve upon.

There is a few things I notice, the way the lines end abruptly (the end of the brushes).
With the shadow of the hat there is no difference between the the two colors.

The feet lines are too thick I would say.
All three feet don't look quite right. Foot 1 (Left side of the screen) the lower part of the foot is particularly off. 2nd foot (that is on Lex's body) looks the best of the three but still doesn't seem right when I look at the position of the toes. The 3rd foot (on the right) the perepsctive of what is the sole of the foot and the side of the foot is very hard to tell. At a glance most will see the sole of the foot but it's not quite right.


I think Lex's nipples would be different shape.
I think the most important is the linework. Below you can see the subtle differences in how the abs can look. The subtle bits here make a huge difference (and it can be applied to all the art you have done).


On another note with me remaking me Marvel SUesque game I'll have to show you guys some of that art some time.

 

[JohnDhimos]

I think the most important is the linework. Below you can see the subtle differences in how the abs can look. The subtle bits here make a huge difference (and it can be applied to all the art you have done).

The line work is indeed something I've noticed too but I don't really know many good way to fix it. It's down to the pen settings and how hard I press down because as far as I can tell the brush is the same.

 

[JohnDhimos]

I can totally see it. I don't let the line complete the fade. But that needs faster smaller strokes and I'm not that precise I go slower and the end of the stroke is not much less thick.

Spoiler: Fire because someone on discord brought it up and her horniness won me over.

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[Henshinvolt]

I can totally see it. I don't let the line complete the fade. But that needs faster smaller strokes and I'm not that precise I go slower and the end of the stroke is not much less thick.

Spoiler: Fire because someone on discord brought it up and her horniness won me over.

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Yeah having the more pointy lines immediately makes it look better yeah

 

[ShadowWarrior]

I can totally see it. I don't let the line complete the fade. But that needs faster smaller strokes and I'm not that precise I go slower and the end of the stroke is not much less thick.

Spoiler: Fire because someone on discord brought it up and her horniness won me over.

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Can't have Fire without Ice?

 

[Testerguy19]

Is it possible we get a genderbent SU, where female Lex fucks Batman, Superman, Booster Gold and the rest? Sort of a reverse harem with men. I'm probably not the only bisexual dude who's ever dreamt of this...right? Right?

 

[HNH1985]

Sorry for this million repeated question
I guess the game is incomplete
How often it's updated?
Did you reach the end of game or wait for updates

 

[Jake Lockley]

its out when its out

 

[HNH1985]

its out when its out

I agree bur some games you ha0vr to wa0it for ages to reach complete ending unlike sandbox games which playable even it's v1

 

[HentaiKami]

Sorry for this million repeated question
I guess the game is incomplete
How often it's updated?
Did you reach the end of game or wait for updates

Game gets updates every couple months

 

[Kylar Stern]

I can totally see it. I don't let the line complete the fade. But that needs faster smaller strokes and I'm not that precise I go slower and the end of the stroke is not much less thick.

Spoiler: Fire because someone on discord brought it up and her horniness won me over.

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At last...... all in all a good fanart! Would love to see her with her powers on (even though the device might stop it lol).

Spoiler: Just some details I noticed

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[JohnDhimos]

The costume looks amazing, and the character overall looks the same as represented in Justice League Unlimited. However the dimples and double chin line make her look 20+ years older than she should be. While the hair does magnify this, its the proper color. I think what it is that these three lines are either just slightly too thick, too square, or need to be lighter to match the skin tone. As mentioned by a previous poster, Sunset's lines don't just end. They really just taper on and off. So the lines on the collarbone and face should follow suit in order to blend with the rest.

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Fixing a few lines here and there is easy, the hard thing is for me to transfer that to every line. The consequence to making faster strokes is "ctrl+z"ing 15 times per stroke which wastes a lot of time and hurts the hand. More experience hopefully will help with that.

 

[ShadowWarrior]

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Fixing a few lines here and there is easy, the hard thing is for me to transfer that to every line. The consequence to making faster strokes is "ctrl+z"ing 15 times per stroke which wastes a lot of time and hurts the hand. More experience hopefully will help with that.

Regardless of strokes, this still looks good.

 

[marnosta]

Looks pretty good this game, loving the art. Did dev just started recently adding animations? I saw that there are very few of them and so far the smooth one was just with Roulette.

 

[scramboi]

Looks pretty good this game, loving the art. Did dev just started recently adding animations? I saw that there are very few of them and so far the smooth one was just with Roulette.

He used to to a mix of animated scenes and static scenes, but now he mainly does static scenes without animation.

 

[marnosta]

He used to to a mix of animated scenes and static scenes, but now he mainly does static scenes without animation.

Ahhh that´s a shame... pretty entertaining game neverthless.

 

[Thwip!]

• Captures girl...
• Has anal sex with her...
• Dries himself off with a towel/Gets dressed...
• Immediately goes and gets oral from another girl

Damn, Lex. You're a savage!

 

[lockerxx]

I can totally see it. I don't let the line complete the fade. But that needs faster smaller strokes and I'm not that precise I go slower and the end of the stroke is not much less thick.

Spoiler: Fire because someone on discord brought it up and her horniness won me over.

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is real or fanmade?

 

[ShadowWarrior]

is real or fanmade?

Fanmade.

 

[mydude22]

Does anyone know how to get Poison Ivy?