I won't say anything that most haven't said already, but still...!
PROS:
- Beautiful renders. Seriously, the quality is better than I expected.
- Gorgeous girls so far, no weird facial expressions that make them look like the Joker, they all look so natural.
- Male characters who aren't the MC are look nice. So many games make the mistake of dropping the ball and just make them look like spawns of Satan, I personally appreciate when they look human and realistically good looking.
- MC is handsome as hell. Yep, some don't care about this, but I strongly believe if you're going to show a MC's face, he should be pleasant to look at. Guy looks perfect.
- Animations are good.
- Zombies. What else do I have to say? A good Zombie VN is always welcomed.
- The premise of the story seems to have so much potential.
Weak Points:
- As it was already pointed out: Grammar. There's lack of capitalization at the beginning of the sentences, lack on punctuation, lack of question marks in some dialogues with questions, abbreviations that cheapen the writing ('Sr' instead of 'Sir', 'Pls' instead of 'please'. 'Cmon' is okay, but it should still be written as 'C'mon', like 'singing' can be shortened as ' singin' ').
- The structure of some sentences reveal that English isn't the dev's native language. Some games get abandoned when people struggle to read coherent sentences, so it's crucial dev corrects this and/or gets some help from someone who speaks it fluently.
- Some of the dialogue could get some work. Instead of MC shouting 'no man not you pls', dev shouldn't be afraid to add something extra 'I can't believe this is happening! Not you man, can't be you, please!'.
Dev already added a note where they explain the game will be polished, cause its still in its early stages.They have to take in consideration that they're going to compete with VNs that not only look as gorgeous as theirs, but with VNs that also have good grammar and natural and easy to follow dialogue.
I really wish them the best, and I'll be crossing my fingers for this one.