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Update 1.8 was not the biggest update, but it did have some game changing elements. It was the update where Laura and Oliver came head to head, Jeshka started blackmailing Laura, and you got to choose between the Vepris vs. Pimp paths.
Since then things have moved on, and Laura is becoming more and more corrupted - if that's your playing style that is!
She can now be at the point where she herself uses sex to further her goals, or purely for her own pleasure.
As for revealing outfit - I don't know. She does have a new office outfit that I like, but the best thing is that it rarely stays on for long :cool:

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The main plot to the story is also moving forward. I'm not going to spoil anything here, but only say that it's a web of corruption ;)
My favorite thing about blackmail/corruption stories is probably the outfits and body becoming more and more humiliating. Like wearing a collar, locked on high heels, skimpy clothes and getting something like nipple piercings and maybe a small tattoo of ownership. Do you think something like that will ever be added?
 

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My favorite thing about blackmail/corruption stories is probably the outfits and body becoming more and more humiliating. Like wearing a collar, locked on high heels, skimpy clothes and getting something like nipple piercings and maybe a small tattoo of ownership. Do you think something like that will ever be added?
That would be pure speculation on my part - I just don't know that :)
One thing I do know though, and that is that there will be no piercings or tattoos - at least permanent ones. This has been covered many times already.
As for outfits etc. who knows? I don't know if those panties can get much skimper however :LOL:
We do know that there's a special place in the basement for the extra hard stuff at the brothel. We got a taste of that earlier (previous friday), and who's to tell what's going to happen there in the future when Laura is punished?!
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That would be pure speculation on my part - I just don't know that :)
One thing I do know though, and that is that there will be no piercings or tattoos - at least permanent ones. This has been covered many times already.
As for outfits etc. who knows? I don't know if those panties can get much skimper however :LOL:
We do know that there's a special place in the basement for the extra hard stuff at the brothel. We got a taste of that earlier (previous friday), and who's to tell what's going to happen there in the future when Laura is punished?!
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I like this game but what's troubling me is that it doesn't seem to be moving any closer to Laura finding out who set her up from the start. It was implied who it was at the very beginning but it's so far away from the detective part of the plot that now, it's gotten frustrating. The story hasn't had Laura taking a breather to collect her thoughts to gather her facts. She's more concerned with Oliver finding out what she's been doing versus actually doing something about her predicament, other than just going with the flow of being a whore. What made me want to stick with the game was the massive intrigue potential. Now it seems to be like so many other games.
 
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I like this game but what's troubling me is that it doesn't seem to be moving any closer to Laura finding out who set her up from the start. It was implied who it was at the very beginning but it's so far away from the detective part of the plot that now, it's gotten frustrating. The story hasn't had Laura taken a breather to collect her thoughts to gather her facts. She's more concerned with Oliver finding out what she's been doing versus actually doing something about her predicament, other than just going with the flow of being a whore. What made me want to stick with the game was the massive intrigue potential. Now it seems to be like so many other games.
Game is awesome, rushing to the end would be a mistake. This is what she has to deal with now we like details and all she has to tolerate to eventually get her answer. To many games rush to the end.

What she has to survive, tolerate and eventually overcome is the game.
 

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I like this game but what's troubling me is that it doesn't seem to be moving any closer to Laura finding out who set her up from the start. It was implied who it was at the very beginning but it's so far away from the detective part of the plot that now, it's gotten frustrating. The story hasn't had Laura taken a breather to collect her thoughts to gather her facts. She's more concerned with Oliver finding out what she's been doing versus actually doing something about her predicament, other than just going with the flow of being a whore. What made me want to stick with the game was the massive intrigue potential. Now it seems to be like so many other games.
You got me thinking a bit with this comment :) Fruit for thought to be sure...
Did you play the latest update yet? There's an important event in v2.2 where Laura is doing something about exactly what you are talking about. I won't say any more than that.
But you are right, Laura is still a long ways to putting the pieces together, and we know a whole lot more than she does - poor girl! On the other hand, we are still only half way into the game by now, so it would also be kind of early to know too much I think.
Tough one - glad I'm not the author ;)
How could it be improved from your perspective?
 
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That would be pure speculation on my part - I just don't know that :)
One thing I do know though, and that is that there will be no piercings or tattoos - at least permanent ones. This has been covered many times already.
As for outfits etc. who knows? I don't know if those panties can get much skimper however :LOL:
We do know that there's a special place in the basement for the extra hard stuff at the brothel. We got a taste of that earlier (previous friday), and who's to tell what's going to happen there in the future when Laura is punished?!
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You can always choose the no-panties option for Laura
 
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You got me thinking a bit with this comment :) Fruit for thought to be sure...
Did you play the latest update yet? There's an important event in v2.2 where Laura is doing something about exactly what you are talking about. I won't say any more than that.
But you are right, Laura is still a long ways to putting the pieces together, and we know a whole lot more than she does - poor girl! On the other hand, we are still only half way into the game by now, so it would also be kind of early to know too much I think.
Tough one - glad I'm not the author ;)
How could it be improved from your perspective?
Can we give him a fast early ending, lets say Laura goes full Arnold Schwarzenegger in Commando, she gets a small arsenal mows down everyone bothering her, places there bodies in a lime pit, robs a bank and lives happily ever after in a tropical land. That should make him happy and the rest of us can go back to enjoying the game as is. :ROFLMAO: For the love of god people would complain about Mozart today. This and Desert Stalker are my favorite goto VN's on here. I hope the Dev listens to PATREON subs over random comments on F95.
 

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I like this game but what's troubling me is that it doesn't seem to be moving any closer to Laura finding out who set her up from the start. It was implied who it was at the very beginning but it's so far away from the detective part of the plot that now, it's gotten frustrating. The story hasn't had Laura taken a breather to collect her thoughts to gather her facts. She's more concerned with Oliver finding out what she's been doing versus actually doing something about her predicament, other than just going with the flow of being a whore. What made me want to stick with the game was the massive intrigue potential. Now it seems to be like so many other games.
a long time ago, Laura discovered who put drugs in her drink. But the plot has never met this person yet,
 
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You got me thinking a bit with this comment :) Fruit for thought to be sure...
Did you play the latest update yet? There's an important event in v2.2 where Laura is doing something about exactly what you are talking about. I won't say any more than that.
But you are right, Laura is still a long ways to putting the pieces together, and we know a whole lot more than she does - poor girl! On the other hand, we are still only half way into the game by now, so it would also be kind of early to know too much I think.
Tough one - glad I'm not the author ;)
How could it be improved from your perspective?
Honest opinion? Have Laura get sick, or pretend, so that she doesn't go to work. Everyone gets sick or calls off, just to regroup for their mental well-being. That would give her time to reflect back on the girl's night out, think of who was involved (or not), reflect on the conversation with her "friend", then go from there. When she's done, she attacks the problem with more determination and maybe even plot revenge. As it stands, Laura's turned into a broken sex slave. If that stands, BB would have no more use for her, since it seems that he likes breaking the wills of people. If it were otherwise, he would have just stuck with whatever off screen girls he had doing what Laura and the others are doing.
Laura's continued defiance is what makes the story, imo, the reason why so many want to see her corrupted. As it stands, she no longer has a reason to be and she's no closer to finding out who set her up. Her will is broken at this point and the only thing left is to see just how much more deviant she is. With no will to fight, she's basically a crack whore, willing to do whatever because she no longer cares about herself.
Given that it's only been 5 weeks, and Laura was supposed to have such a strong will and personality, it seems too danged easy to corrupt her to the point of practically giving up. As it stands, it seems to me that Laura wasn't as strong, confident, and determined as what we were lead to believe. A truly strong-willed person would make you kill them rather than be broken, Especially by someone they've come to despise. (Shrugging) All I'm saying is, at this point, Laura has nothing to give her even the slightest of hope to continue fighting. Her fighting is what makes the corruption attempts intriguing. Just throw Laura a bone.
 
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Can we give him a fast early ending, lets say Laura goes full Arnold Schwarzenegger in Commando, she gets a small arsenal mows down everyone bothering her, places there bodies in a lime pit, robs a bank and lives happily ever after in a tropical land. That should make him happy and the rest of us can go back to enjoying the game as is. :ROFLMAO: For the love of god people would complain about Mozart today. This and Desert Stalker are my favorite goto VN's on here. I hope the Dev listens to PATREON subs over random comments on F95.
I'm not looking for a quick ending but having her, all of a sudden, in the latter half of the game, get all of these breaks and come out victorious is Hollywood cliche.
 

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Christine right? The one who drugged her... but Janette is definitely in on it. She is way too suspicious with the brothel stuff.
Yes, Christina ,Janett is suspicious and very slutty. Janett +Laura= Laura's nudity or a compromising situation for Laura
 
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Honest opinion? Have Laura get sick, or pretend, so that she doesn't go to work. Everyone gets sick or calls off, just to regroup for their mental well-being. That would give her time to reflect back on the girl's night out, think of who was involved (or not), reflect on the conversation with her "friend", then go from there. When she's done, she attacks the problem with more determination and maybe even plot revenge. As it stands, Laura's turned into a broken sex slave. If that stands, BB would have no more use for her, since it seems that he likes breaking the wills of people. If it were otherwise, he would have just stuck with whatever off screen girls he had doing what Laura and the others are doing.
Laura's continued defiance is what makes the story, imo, the reason why so many want to see her corrupted. As it stands, she no longer has a reason to be and she's no closer to finding out who set her up. Her will is broken at this point and the only thing left is to see just how much more deviant she is. With no will to fight, she's basically a crack whore, willing to do whatever because she no longer cares about herself.
Given that it's only been 5 weeks, and Laura was supposed to have such a strong will and personality, it seems too danged easy to corrupt her to the point of practically giving up. As it stands, it seems to me that Laura wasn't as strong, confident, and determined as what we were lead to believe. A truly strong-willed person would make you kill them rather than be broken, Especially by someone they've come to despise. (Shrugging) All I'm saying is, at this point, Laura has nothing to give her even the slightest of hope to continue fighting. Her fighting is what makes the corruption attempts intriguing. Just throw Laura a bone.
Man, you make a good point. Laura had all the backbone of wet cardboard in this latest update, even to the point of acting in what certainly appeared to be a wholly uncharacteristic fashion in the Dagny scene. For me it came off as lifeless -- I'm going full submissive in this playthrough so I can see the most scenes, but even so, having her just abandon all hope and accept her situation halfway through the game robs it of interest. If that happens at all, it should be the last thing that happens before the epilogue.

I get that things have been revealed to us that haven't been revealed to Laura, but I think it's high time she make real progress, even if only to restore hope and some semblance of a spine to our MC. Without that, yeah, it runs the risk of seeming like an HTML game where the FMC quickly maxes out her Corruption stat and the whole thing becomes a porn GIF slideshow. And nobody wants that.
 

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We know who drugged her, true but, she was set up from the start and only one person in her circle is responsible. That's the part that hasn't been addressed yet.
See, I disagree. At this point it seems like every character except her dad is in on it. Maybe it's time to start narrowing things down a little. :giggle:
 
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In general, I think this is a great game and I like the direction it's going in. The sex scenes are some of the best and hottest on this site, and I love the quirky little interludes, outside of the main plot. But what I don't like is the lack of consistency between scenes, as regards Laura's acceptance to what is happening to her. In one scene, she'll act like she's loving it and is finally accepting that she's a slut and that's ok. And in the very next scene, she's back to hating it all, and acting like its the end of world. Repeating over and over, 'Why is this happening to me?', as if she hasn't already done this, about 20-30 times already.

If Laura has nearly 150 corruption, she's pretty much surrendered herself ( at least inwardly) to the pleasure and lust, and surely this needs to start being reflected in the dialogue? Even if she doesn't openly admit that she now loves it, at least she could admit it to herself that she's getting pleasure, regardless of whether she still feels some shame and humiliation. And please stop with the ridiculous disbelief, that something like this could be happening at all. At this point, she's has to have moved beyond that, and can't be surprised by anything that might potentially happen to her?
 
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In general, I think this is a great game and I like the direction it's going in. The sex scenes are some of the best and hottest on this site, and I love the quirky little interludes, outside of the main plot. But what I don't like is the lack of consistency between scenes, as regards Laura's acceptance to what is happening to her. In one scene, she'll act like she's loving it and is finally accepting that she's a slut and that's ok. And in the very next scene, she's back to hating it all, and acting like its the end of world. Repeating over and over, 'Why is this happening to me?', as if she hasn't already done this, about 20-30 times already.

If Laura has nearly 150 corruption, she's pretty much surrendered herself ( at least inwardly) to the pleasure and lust, and surely this needs to start being reflected in the dialogue? Even if she doesn't openly admit that she now loves it, at least she could admit it to herself that she's getting pleasure, regardless of whether she still feels some shame and humiliation. And please stop with the ridiculous disbelief, that something like this could be happening at all. At this point, she's has to have moved beyond that, and can't be surprised by anything that might potentially happen to her?
That's EXACTLY what confuses me the most about this (great) game. Laura's inconsistency about what she thinks about her sex acts. As you say, at times she seems to be having a really bad time, and then late at night she asks Felnando (the guy who works at the beach bar) to please fuck her. Later she has a bad time again with Donald and his brother, feeling guilty and asking Oliver for forgiveness, but the next night she goes back to the beach and seeks to be raped (under her consent, ironic) by strangers and ask Felnando to fuck her again.

The game is great, the storyline is very interesting and engaging, and the quality of the animations and renders is excellent. It is currently my favorite game on this site.
It's just this detail in Laura's behavior that leaves me a bit confused. It's as if she can't decide if she likes it or not, or if she feels guilt or not.
 
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