The concept itself isn't bad actually, only the execution of the whole thing so far. The point is, appeal to fans of Spidey, change Mary Jane to a Redhead, there's plenty of stars out there to choose, if i can give my opinion, Jia Lissa would be an awesome choice, or maybe Penny Pax. Kenzie Reeves is a good star (one of my favorites actually) but not for the role of Gwen, maybe only Alexa Grace fills right as Pepper
Second, cut the models on a png render when its necessary, or change the images to the whole screen (removing watermarks from websites), the current state feels very amateur even for someone who already have a complete game released. Also, the idea of webm movies is good, but the whole structure of menus to choose a 2 second animation is a little annoying
Anyway good luck with the project.