Uhhhhh
I like the art and hate unedited machine translation, so I went ahead edited the English script to be coherent and fluent, as well as a handful of creative liberties concerning some bits of dialogue and noun usage.
I need 3 posts for a link and idk if posts are timelocked. If they are, I'll be back whenever I can finish 3.
Edit: Well that was easy. Here you go. Just replace the data.win file in the game's root folder.
Let me know if I'm breaking any rules. I checked, but I don't see any conflicts.
Have fun, I guess.
Mega