ok so to address the people who want to cry about the model: personally, i really enjoy the body shape. yes a little thicker, but in all the right places. tanlines are great if you are going to have tanned skin. at least there is something left unspoiled by the sun lol.
it is short, sure, but a lot of games started off very short and turned out well. people expect a fully finished game for free starting day one. get a grip on reality, its unlikely to happen.
there are some minor problems with the english and grammar, but nothing so horrible that you cant understand what is being said. there are top rated games on this site that dont beat this grammar wise, and guessing by the creators responses, i would assume english isnt his first language, and i give it an acceptable, although it wouldnt hurt to work on it.
there are two concerns i would like to bring up. 1) the text box. it is all kinds of horrible in exactly the wrong spot. I would make it smaller or move it if possible in some way. covers up too much action. definitely would improve the experience if that were changed in some way. and b) not sure if it is a limitation of the engine you are using, but every time you click something there is a pause between tthe text disappearing, and being able to click on the next thing. it is very noticeable when you are clicking on the "map" thing you got going on, because even the music restarts every time you click through the text. not game breaking, just drives me nuts for whatever reason. especially the music restarting. but that might just be my personal ocd taking over.
either way, busty chicks and gloryholes are 2 things i like very much, so keep your pimp hand strong, mordred. dont let the biters get you down!