VN Ren'Py Star Avenger: Chaos Arena [Part 1] [Girls on Top/Blackweb Games]

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L7Bear

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Girls on Top Games said:
Nope, the one with the devil tail is Rosedevil and the one with a star on their chest is Star Avenger.

Admittedly I do see that the opening shots are not good at telling you who is who. I might have to do something about that.
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Not to be rude, but:
The narration literally says that Star Avenger leaps after Rosedevil, and shows the gal in white leapt first and the gal with the devil tail leapt after her.
Please do something about that (as well as the other renders/dialogue/narration that make it appear they are reversed.)

ETA. Another example (there are many):
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ETA2. I've really enjoyed games from both of the Devs on this project. No disrespect intended.
But there are so many typos - especially during the battle in the arena...

weather (rain or shine) whether (this or that)
Rosedevil, Rosedeville. Rosedevile. etc.
had instead of hade
"crossed the gap" rather than "moved the gap"
Capitalization issues.
new (recent) knew (knowledge)
no one's whore
Yes, Mistress
strength instead of strangth
prize instead of prise
and so on.

it's hot, but desperately needed a another review or something.
I'm not sure what program you are using for writing/editing code, but everything I've worked with (atom, visual studio code, etc) has had python &/or ren'py packages that could be downloaded, as well as spellcheck and grammar check for narration/dialogue.
 
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not liking the preview for the next update with the alien looking thing and considering resisting and not resisting leads to the mc still losing control regardless i'm not sure what the point is of having choices. everything else is good. the character designs, models, story/plot and music.
 
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based on previews i thought we'd be the bad guys... shame. would be nice if female MC was the horny one from the start for a change.
 
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Speedfeed said:
Considering resisting and not resisting leads to the mc still losing control regardless i'm not sure what the point is of having choices. everything else is good. the character designs, models, story/plot and music.
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I had the exact same question: what's the point of playing if you lose either way? Do you expect players to only go for the corruption route?
 
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This looks delicious. Scantily clad women in tight latex outfits? Futas and lesbians? I'll take it! :love:

Now pointing out the elephant in the room, and while I love both Dev's games, Arianna receives small updates and Dog Days of Summer is just catching up with its rework after a long time, so I'll try to calm my excitement and see how it evolves first.
 
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Sulring Durgul said:
I had the exact same question: what's the point of playing if you lose either way? Do you expect players to only go for the corruption route?
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yeah. the mc being in a lose lose situation regardless makes me not see the point in choices. i thought if the mc gave in she'd be submissive and would be under control but if put she put up a fight she'd be dominant and the one in control
 
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Speedfeed said:
not liking the preview for the next update with the alien looking thing and considering resisting and not resisting leads to the mc still losing control regardless i'm not sure what the point is of having choices. everything else is good. the character designs, models, story/plot and music.
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Girls on Top Games said:
You will have more choices in later fights that will lead to winning or loosing, but for this fight the point of the choice was to gain willpower or loose it and inform the player that even non sextual choices can cost or gain willpower.

The whole point of the choices in this is do you give in to your desires or do you fight them and stay true to yourself? With the cavoite of if you try to stay too close to yourself you will lose yourself anyway. So where do you make compromises? When do you choose to give in?
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