VN Ren'Py Star College [v0.1.1] [Space Samurai Games]

[Eternamite]

Star College – Episode I: Patch at version 0.1.1​

Hello everyone, here is a patch that corrects translations that distorted the original meaning of the dialogues, adds images and dialogues to better represent scenes, fixes bugs on variables that created confusion with the relationships between characters, and various other bug fixes.

I’d love to hear your feedback! Your thoughts, bug reports, and suggestions will help me polish the next updates and make the final release even better.

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Play the build, tell me what you think, and share your impressions in the comments or by message.

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Thank you all for supporting me through this journey — this project exists because of you. Let’s make Star College shine among the stars!

 

[Deyn21]

Another banger by this dev.

Very nice.

 

[Crimsonfiend76]

“Alright, you caught me.”

Please tell me we can have Sherry in our harem? I absolutely love her!

I'm ok with Violet since I get what you were going for with her, even if it didn't come across that way originally. I did find it weird how quickly she confessed her love to the MC, claimed to want to be his exclusively but was afraid of his rejection... all said after she seemed pretty indifferent to him initially, but as I said, I get what you were going for so I'm giving her a chance.

 

[Bob69]

Star College [v0.1.1] [Space Samurai Games] - Compressed

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[duckydoodoo]

this wasnt bad at all, but the writing, at least in modern day english often leaves relationships ambiguous.

though MC and Violet were not dating, they never really said what they were to each other.

zyra is conufusing as fuck in everything she does, which appear intentional, while also not really seeming to be intentionally funny

sex with the dean, pretty much, its not til MC runs into her, is it clear that there truly was a relationship, and one with a deep connection too.

lastly, the entire story world feels like something the reader/player is just thrown into, with no explanation, only for the MC to be thrown into a world outside his understanding with no explanation to him.

lots of ambiguity, mainly from the wording itself. i think a little bit of editing on the dialouge and a couple short clarifying internal thoughts would easily make the story feel, lets just say sublte. as i dont believe page one is the moment we learn everything about a story world, but the things that are important, really should be a little more clear.

having rambled about that, i enjoyed this intro and will definitely come back for an update.