Ren'Py Star Periphery [v0.6.6] [VoidPilgrim]

[Sakyazel]

Hello, decided to leave a comment cause maybe dev will be interested in opinion of someone who's not into this kink and unbiased (trying different games to see maybe I'll like something, do not understand people who are coming to someone else's party just to say they don't like it here).

First, models and renders are good, atmosphere of seedy space station made Me sad, now I miss times of KOTOR and first Mass Effect.

About story, I can believe in space travels, genetically modified people, aliens, but do You really want Me to believe that MC is virgin? He knows he's flying to station populated by horny dickgirls and he arrives with feminine face and big juicy ass in skimpy clothes, he would look 9 months pregnant with gallons of cum pumped into him faster then I can say "they are not futas cause futas have both types of genitals"! Also how MC could knew Ginny for 2 years and not become her personal cumdump?

Also I have a question about world lore (probably I expect too much from porn game but whatever), station exists for long time already, enough to create its own traditions and customs, and cause majority of population are tall, highly feminine, very curvy humanoids with oversized genitals, it would be considered a beauty standard, so MC with his flat chest, small height, slim body and little dick would be considered ugly mutant by locals.

But all characters immediately want to shag MC, why? Would be interesting if story explained the attraction of locals to boys (for now it motivated only by player audience).

Other question is, most of station dwellers are dickgirls and ugly aliens, so if locals like cute femboys, MC would be always surrounded by crowd of admirers who pampered him trying to gain his affection, so why everybody treat him like they own him from the start (I understand it's players' fetish but still), do they have tons of cute femboys with great asses? MC simply would found himself caring sugar mommy and payed off his debt.

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Sorry for long read, good luck and stay safe.

Oh wow thats long! Lemme knock down a few of your points, also I like the sounding idea.

-MCs body will not be altered its not planned.
-The game is going for a decent dose of realism and inflation is not very spectacular with realistic bodies, though it can be visible. (maybe an enema scene? idk)
-MC and Ginny havent met before in person, it was remote work.
-men and women exist and are common in this universe, is just an inbalance of genders in this place. If a mining station had mostly men, would you expect that therefore a bimbo girl would count there as ugly, because her chest isnt flat? Same logic, futas are into different genders.
-they are not THAT rare that a cute boy would be harassed ALL the time, i agree that this type of content would fit, who knows if its planned.
It seems though futas like femboys most. and I dont like feminization for the most part, so id rather not have an explanation for fear of it being too limiting, right now the interpretations are open, perhaps futas like anyone youthful ,twink/femboy/women.
-MC can easily be virgin for many reasons, he is young and we dont know almost anything about PS2 where he previously lived. He did start dressing provocatively sure, but this is getting nitpicky.

 

[VoidPilgrim]

About story, I can believe in space travels, genetically modified people, aliens, but do You really want Me to believe that MC is virgin? He knows he's flying to station populated by horny dickgirls and he arrives with feminine face and big juicy ass in skimpy clothes, he would look 9 months pregnant with gallons of cum pumped into him faster then I can say "they are not futas cause futas have both types of genitals"! Also how MC could knew Ginny for 2 years and not become her personal cumdump?

This one is already explained in the game. MC was on a different station before (PS-2), which is Union-owned. And all futas were banned from the Union space.

Also I have a question about world lore (probably I expect too much from porn game but whatever), station exists for long time already, enough to create its own traditions and customs, and cause majority of population are tall, highly feminine, very curvy humanoids with oversized genitals, it would be considered a beauty standard, so MC with his flat chest, small height, slim body and little dick would be considered ugly mutant by locals.

The stations are there for a while, sure, but futas on PS-10 are a fairly new thing (see above). Also, PS-10 is somewhat of a galactic crossroad; there is inherently no cultural vacuum in a place like this. Also, futas are not the majority on PS-10. The game is focused on them; hence, you meet them with them most of the time, but the elementary demographics are clear.

But all characters immediately want to shag MC, why? Would be interesting if story explained the attraction of locals to boys (for now it motivated only by player audience).

Mainly because this is a porn game about horny futas, to be perfectly honest. To make it believable, I have tried making MC as cute/attractive as possible!

Other question is, most of station dwellers are dickgirls and ugly aliens,

Nope, as is said in the game, the station is very diverse! It is certainly not just aliens and futas.

so if locals like cute femboys, MC would be always surrounded by crowd of admirers who pampered him trying to gain his affection, so why everybody treat him like they own him from the start (I understand it's players' fetish but still), do they have tons of cute femboys with great asses? MC simply would found himself caring sugar mommy and payed off his debt.

MC might be cute, but he is certainly not the only cute femboy on the station. Obviously, getting a sugar momma could be one of many plausible possibilities, and I will be making a for-fun "bad end" related to that (with the neighbor lady), but remember that MC also wants to be a spacer, a goal that is not really compatible with getting bound to one place.

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I am not planning any transformation. Sorry about that!

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In his case, it is simply natural.

-The game is going for a decent dose of realism and inflation is not very spectacular with realistic bodies, though it can be visible. (maybe an enema scene? idk)

There will be some very light cumflation with Markala (and her species in general) but only limited in scope to be realistic. I am not planning anything beyond that.

-they are not THAT rare that a cute boy would be harassed ALL the time, i agree that this type of content would fit, who knows if its planned.

I plan on doing a bit of that later on with the PSX security guards!

 

[lthasatan]

My two cents: If you squeeze hard enough any fantastic fiction will break down. If you can explain everything in your sci-fi, you should be writing a scientific paper and preparing your Nobel prize speech The key is setting very clearly what is fantastical about the world, so the public can set their suspension of disbelief, but after that everything should be as logical and realistic as possible.

I enjoy the fact that the MC won't inflate like a balloon or be impaled from ass to mouth by a 2 meter cock.

 

[lthasatan]

but remember that MC also wants to be a spacer

I've being role-playing this game so wrong. If my playthroughs of this game were any indication one would think his goal is to be a whore.

Random question: how much was Amira benching before porking the twink

 

[Facilus]

Random question: how much was Amira benching before porking the twink

From my experience with gym, I would say judging by the size of the gym rings it's about 80 kilograms(176,37lbs) divided in 4 gym rings of 20 kilograms each(44lbs), it's the begining of the advanced ammount of wheigh to lift in bench press

 

[ctenken]

Random question: how much was Amira benching before porking the twink

I would say judging by the size of the gym rings it's about 80 kilograms

It looks like each plate is actually 25kg by looking at the writing on them. That plus the barbell means she was benching 120 kg(264.56 lbs.) which is a superhuman, almost impossible amount for a woman to do reps with and not be her one rep max. Though it seems like in the Star Periphery universe futas can gain muscle easier than women. Just by looking at how much muscle she has(she has abs and is 105 kg) and the fact that a guy could bench that much it is not an unrealistic amount of weight.

 

[EmperorGus]

It looks like each plate is actually 25kg by looking at the writing on them. That plus the barbell means she was benching 120 kg(264.56 lbs.) which is a superhuman, almost impossible amount for a woman to do reps with and not be her one rep max. Though it seems like in the Star Periphery universe futas can gain muscle easier than women. Just by looking at how much muscle she has(she has abs and is 105 kg) and the fact that a guy could bench that much it is not an unrealistic amount of weight.

Since people (not quoted poster specifically, just in last handful of posts) are getting hung up on 'IRL', let's keep that theme going...
PSX is built into an asteroid, not a planet.
So, gravity would be much weaker.
Hell, gravity on Luna is roughly 1/6th of Earths, so... 120kg is effectively 20kg.
And on an asteroid would be yet another tiny fraction of what'd be on Luna....
So...
Forget the markings on the weight plates (those are for Earth gravity)...
She's benching about 3kg.
Hell, the MC could do that easy

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Since people (not quoted poster specifically, just in last handful of posts) are getting hung up on 'IRL', let's keep that theme going...
PSX is built into an asteroid, not a planet.
So, gravity would be much weaker.
Hell, gravity on Luna is roughly 1/6th of Earths, so... 120kg is effectively 20kg.
And on an asteroid would be yet another tiny fraction of what'd be on Luna....
So...
Forget the markings on the weight plates (those are for Earth gravity)...
She's benching about 3kg.
Hell, the MC could do that easy

Was going to point that out. Even if PSX has artificial gravity it is unlikely to be the same as Earth (~9.8m/s²). So the mass may be the same but the weight is not.

Or if Void wants he can alternatively say that Amira has some cybernetic implants that amplify her physical strength. Although her char sheet didn't mentioned anything about modifications (Eleanor's did), this would be a simple thing to add.

That is a very easy thing to explain in any space scifi game.

 

[VoidPilgrim]

Random question: how much was Amira benching before porking the twink

I can confirm that 120 kg is the weight. Amira is a big lady (for u)!

Was going to point that out. Even if PSX has artificial gravity it is unlikely to be the same as Earth (~9.8m/s²). So the mass may be the same but the weight is not.

Or if Void wants he can alternatively say that Amira has some cybernetic implants that amplify her physical strength. Although her char sheet didn't mentioned anything about modifications (Eleanor's did), this would be a simple thing to add.

That is a very easy thing to explain in any space scifi game.

I'm not really watching powerlifting anymore, but even back then, irl lady powerlifters in the 100+kg category lifted way more than that, no? Otherwise, it is mostly the combination of Amira being knee-deep in muscle stimulants/'roids, being pretty big in general, and your typical "futa strong" shenanigans. The gravity on PSX is otherwise pretty much identical to that 1g golden standard!

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

So she is a roid head? I am disapointed in you Amira.

Seriously while it is completely viable to do it, doing heavy weight lifting like that usually requires someone else to work as a spotter as a safety precaution.

 

[camper674]

awww fuck. gallery is not unlocked after loading a save, and after checking how are variables handled here, I'm going to go with "which file is the persistent gallery file, and does anyone want to share the full one?"

 

[VoidPilgrim]

awww fuck. gallery is not unlocked after loading a save, and after checking how are variables handled here, I'm going to go with "which file is the persistent gallery file, and does anyone want to share the full one?"

Delete your persistent data/saves, and it should work! I haven't heard otherwise so far. Also, I think there is a universal gallery unlocker somewhere on the forum that should work.

 

[assman69420]

I'm glad that the plan isn't for over the top inflation/cumflation, that would really take me out of a scene.

Just wanted to mention that the graphics are not the only good part of this game. I have really enjoyed the writing so far. I'm interested in the setting and I appreciate that a lot of things are explained but not overexplained to the point of constant infodumps about every detail. I like the characters far more than usual for a porn game and the descriptions and dirty talk in the sex scenes are great! You clearly put a lot of work into the visuals and deserve praise for that, but you haven't slouched on the writing either.

 

[camper674]

Delete your persistent data/saves, and it should work! I haven't heard otherwise so far. Also, I think there is a universal gallery unlocker somewhere on the forum that should work.

I'm gonna go and search for the unlocker then, deleting every save and persistent data (both in the game folder and in appdata folder) and giving just one still left me with scenes I unlocked. Meaning it has to be somewhere else than save folders, which is weird when you think about it.

Edit: It wouldn't be funny if the gallery unlocker didn't threw an exception every time I used it. I'll flip a coinwhen next update comes, Either I'll replay all of it, or I'll wait till the next update comes, cue re-flips again.

 

[Sakyazel]

-"ill just skip to the new content"
->proceeds to play all night and fall for characters i havent before

 

[Forbiddenfetish77]

So my old save got deleted and I'm starting a new one to catch up to the new stuff. A couple things I was wondering though, could we get a button to skip "new" dialogue to spare my finger from clicking through a bunch of scenes I've done before? The other thing is I was wondering if it could be possible to upgrade the store a bit to show how much items cost, how much money we have on us, and maybe even a small item description for the item's ingame usage?

Anyway, don't mean to be so negative on the game. I actually really enjoy it and I look forward to every release. Just my thoughts from more of a gamer perspective.

 

[cockenthusiast]

I will be making a for-fun "bad end" related to that (with the neighbor lady)

I can't wait, I really love the entire neighbor scenario

 

[lthasatan]

could we get a button to skip "new" dialogue to spare my finger from clicking through a bunch of scenes I've done before?

Tab works for me.

The other thing is I was wondering if it could be possible to upgrade the store a bit to show how much items cost, how much money we have on us, and maybe even a small item description for the item's ingame usage?

I am pretty sure I saw this suggested, and void saying he liked the idea. My guess is it will be in the game next patch. The only one I know that has a usage vfor is the binoculars. I am probably wrong.

 

[TrueJackal]

Finally played all of v0.4

Overall 10/10 game! I'm not saying that lightly. For what I expect from a a game at the 4th update, it's literally as good as it needs to be. It's not literally perfect, but I don't consider typos to be worth deducting a point. At no point am I disappointed with the game. The game progresses properly. There is no grinding, instead you make choices and see cool stuff, and your choices even affect the scenes you get.

There's also a great balance of build up and pay off. You don't wait 3 updates or 4 missions to have sex. You have a thing to do and you get teased doing it, then you get the option to fuck. AND you can choose not to fuck so you can get different dialogue from different women.

The only criticism I have is that some explanations before a mission and some descriptions of sex, go on a bit long. It's not a huge problem, but I think some things that are done in 10 dialogue boxes could be trimmed to 4, or some sentences explaining a sex act or describing a mission use more words than I care for. You're allowed to keep them exactly the way you like if you feel like it, but I prefer some of the fat be trimmed and some of the language be simplified here and there. Like the news report in the bar or the Space Graveyard briefing, a few of those lines didn't mean anything because I had no context for them. AFTER the mission it all reads far easier, because now I know more about the in universe conflict.

Also most of the dialogue was great. So it's not a huge criticism, just something to consider.

10/10 Futadom game.
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Now for a bunch of thoughts I had playing it:

1) I hope we get at least one true Butt Breaking scene, where a futa with an massive girth violently fucks the MC with no attempt at prep. Actively trying to break his ass and ruin his hole, and the only way you don't get hurt is based on your anal skill by that time.

Currently every scene has some version of prep. Elanor uses a muscle relaxant Stim and even the Orc uses her fingers. I'm willing to believe that the futa in question prefer a hole that can still squeeze them so I don't have a problem with that. I just hope some futa in the future has that scene. No finger before hand. No slow strokes early on. The only lube is for the Futa's cock so she feels better but none for the MC. And the cock is thick like Elanor/Markala/Tess. Or a thick toy like Iris has.

2) More rimjob scenes. I'LL TAKE YOUR WHOLE STOCK! Lise was a fantastic start. Maybe that's one of her kinks and we get to do it more to her. I would love a gloryhole rimjob as well where we get to give either through the hole or the woman knocks on the door and we rim her in the stall with us or she's at the sink in the bathroom.

I'll take as many rimjob scenes as you are willing to make. Especially a sloppy one where we get to see the spit trail from the tongue to the hole. Maybe a futa cums in the MC's ass and licks it up after. Also, seeing futa moan while getting rimmed will always be hot.

3) Does Iris always have -10 favour when you first meet? Is it just an in universe thing to match her character of high expectations or is there something I missed?

3a) Does favour matter or is it just specific choices?
3b) Will there be a way to see how much favour we have with people?

4) "COQUE WIPES (for private moments)" Was a fantastic brand name to see.

5) Tessa's Gallery doesn't have the Punishment Variant where she chains the MC to the rail.

6) I'm really excited to see the Theocracy futa planet. It would be a great place to have the bitch breaking content mentioned above. Also, for the sake of world building, I'm curious if there are futa who are attracted to other futa or masculine males? I know it's a futa dom game but I'm just asking for lore purposes.

Another thing, I know people play this game for the Futadom, but I always love breaking taboos. So when there is a Futadom Theocracy that makes me want to see them getting fucked into submission. Whether it's by other futa women that we travel with in our crew. Or it's their slaves getting free. I doubt it would be the MC given his submissive tendencies but you could write him being angered enough to do it. It's entirely your choice if you want to add this kink of domination loss/role reversal. I'd like it, but obviously it's not for everyone.

7) I wonder if the Theocracy would be an excuse for a CrossOver with the people at FutaDom World Binding Sim where you could have characters from that game show up here.

8) I hope we really get to see Ginny with the MC in the Glory Hole.

9) In Iris' first day right after cleaning, the text mentioned her stretching the MC's butt with her thumbs. Just thought that would be hot to see. Of course rendering a whole picture is a lot more work than writing, so I don't blame you for not making a full render.

10) In the Graveyard sequence the text says "Not only are you on a ship with aliens you've never seen in your life" even if you choose not to investigate or take any detours. This sentence makes perfect sense if you took the detours but if you ignore them it makes more sense to have another line.

11) The neighbor that the MC spies on with binoculars looks like a futa cameo of Melinda from Foot of the Mountains. I don't know if this is intentional or if her face is just a common model, but I hope to see more scenes with her regardless.

 

[TrueJackal]

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